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[Paid] Need Spriter and Writer

I'm hiring a writer at $10/1000 Words, and a spriter at 25$ per base price sheet and 10$ per 'dressed up' base. This is for a non-commercial game, just a hobby project

General questions, feel free to ask. Indepth questions, E-Mail at zeke.day@hotmail.com

Thanks! Please email me if you have a serious inquiry. That's the fastest way to reach me. Or add my skype: Shablo5

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I'll definitely try to add some indentation, but hopefully won't overdo it. Thanks!

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author=Liberty
@Shablo: Where the lantern is by the bridge, you seem to be missing the edge cliff tiles. Oops. Looks very pretty though. :P


Haha this one mistake is the bane of my existence. Although i'm kinda surprised nobody commented on the fact it's day and the lights are on :p


Anyone have any comments/input on the actual grass and stuff? The big picture on the last page that is

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author=Ocean
@Ocean: Why so blocky? D: I really think you should make the coastline look more 'natural', no matter how much you want to emulate that retro-game aesthetic. It would only be more visually appealing that way. Btw, I love how smoothly shaded those mountains and trees are.
That's less emulating retro-game aesthetic and more "RMVX Ace autotiles are awful". I can see what I can do though.


Better?
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What Engine is this?

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Bah I fucked that up. Double post, sorry -- Ignore this :p

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author=Miracle
@Shablo5 - I like it a lot, but there are a few issues. Immediately to the left of the house you have these logs under the pine trees, they sort of stick out because they're so desaturated compared to the map. Directly below the house there's a curve in the cliff but the water tile beneath it goes straight. Also, ground beneath the lamppost next to the bridge doesn't have a cliff edge. I really love the detail you put in the riverbed, though. Good job :D

Thanks for your opinion. The lampost is a problem that must be resolved by hand, Unfortunately, and will be done. I didn't notice the water/cliff issue, thank you.
The log bit I have added some shadow to (Prior to posting that) and may try to give it a bit of moss. Who knows. It does need to be changed a little though, I agree.

Thanks for your opinions.


author=prexus
@Shablo5
That looks quite dazzling! The discoloured logs under the trees look a little odd though, especially next to the smaller, different colour tree stump next to them, and I'm not sure I understand the white soil in the flower garden.

Really? You've never seen a sand garden? I thought all vegetation grows from sand! /sarcasm

Yeah, I didn't think about it till after. It was changed swiftly. Tell me what you think:


Also, filled the box to the left with veggies.
P.S. Look at the tree at the bottom left. Doesn't the top look all fucked up? Lol I always fix that, but somehow that creeps it's way back in everytime I upload a new overlay layer from photoshop. I will find you, ninja out-of-place layer, AND WHEN I DO...

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