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After playing through this game here's my short review....

"Winner of the 2010 Cliche Awards"

Nothing I haven't seen before or read in about..oh...a dozen fantasy novels to date. Your dialog was not expressive, did not evoke any emotional context for me, and quite frankly uttered failed to deliver anything noteworthy in terms of the story. However, if thcan improve on your writing skills maybe you might have something here.

As for graphics and sound..there are other games both on here and on other sites (RRR to name one of them) that choose their graphics and sound far more wisely than you obviously did. Your scenes simply did not give me that "I have to play this more to find out more" quality to them. I wasn't addicted to your storyline, and if you fail to see what I mean I would reference far more superior games like Legionwood: Tales of the Two Swords, and Chronicles of a Dark Lord: Episode I Tides of Fate. Those developers really nailed what it means to construct an addictive storyline. Those are also my two favorite RPG Maker games for many reasons, but above all is that they got me to laugh, to get angry, even get a little sad at times. Evoking emotion is what your game sadly lacks.

As for your gameplay...meh. Again you should really play through the games I mentioned above, they may have classic gameplay but they did it very well for the style of games they are. Your gameplay was just...boring. Even though the games I mentioned earlier utilize "classic" gameplay they do so with a definitive and unique edge to them..I don't see that for your game. Honestly, it's like your game is trying too hard to be what it's not.

Lastly, I fail to see the redeeming qualities that makes your game winner of anything. It is a 'decent' game yes, but not a GREAT game. Nor will it ever be a great game, unless you do something drastic with the writing and storyline.