CAMIL2003'S PROFILE

I'll admit that them taking in the gray haired felt a tad bit forced but overall this seems pretty interesting and it handles itself the same way the vacant sky game handled itself.
Erich may be the first character too come up that I have developed a fondness for and his dark humor and fascination with the wounds and damaged marks of the human body reminds me of me when I look up surgical videos on the internet out of fascination and curiosity.
So far I assume Fira will be the heroine with special abilities and the grey woman will be the main antagonist but with your stories I assume this won't be as simple to predict.
Looking forward to next chapter.