DEMETRISEYDO'S PROFILE

I have watched a bit of ep 4 and 5. its good, but you need to work on your art. are you gonna fill it in at least? its what u obviously have to do. it has plenty of potential.

On ep 4 you left all those annotations, which you did not need and things get overly bad graphics. the pencil is proof of that. U need to go back there and fill those in with your tablet or do it in manga form or SOMEthing its not working as it is now, but it DOES have plenty of potential.

The storyboarding needs more umph.

The music is good tho, I will give you that, and the script is awesome.

yeah I played this before and was really impressed. great graphics and everything, even with that much dilaogue to go thru and everything. :)

very atmospheric.

I realy like it but its really really creepy like gothic. ;D awesome.