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I'm melty and I like to make things that are cute.
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Edit: Problem I had solved :D
Edit Edit: Alrighty, I have played the demo, and I liked the game overall. My thoughts:First let us get the negative aspects out of the way; the game has a few spellng errors and sentences that seem to be a bit weird. The Main characters portrait does not show up most of the time during her dialogue. And there was a bug somewhere but I forgot where to be honest :D Also the dialogue is overall a bit wooden, it does not come off as natural. Espacially the siblings dialogue seemed somewhat off.
That being said I really liked the art style of the game and the overall story got me hooked even though we are barely in yet, so that is worth a thumbs up^^ I am really curious why our protagonist was trapped. The one puzzle in the game was relatively easy, allthough I have no idea why white was the correct answer for the far right mushroom.
So to sum it up: I liked it, shows much potential, needs some polishing :)
And if you want to see my Let's Play, feel free to do so: https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=KT5_VdxX1Zg
Thank you for your feedback! Letty's portrait sometimes not appearing is done intentionally, because she is somewhat a semi-silent protagonist. So it's used mostly when I see a good use for it. Dialogue wise, I'll iron it out and fix the grammar issues and see how it goes. Regarding the puzzle, if the mushroom dislikes all colours - then what colour would they prefer? A colour that isn't seen as a colour or something, lol.
Anyways, the feedback is much appreciated. I knew I left an issue in there or two, so having it pointed out helps!
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author=Saffie
Hm, I think I liked the old title better. The colors here seem more bland and if you hadn't seen the main character before you wouldn't be able to tell what the silhouette is supposed to be.
That's fine! I wanted to make it more simpler and less vibrant. It's not set in stone and I'll make amendments as I need to. Thanks for the input!
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