MELTY'S PROFILE
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I'm melty and I like to make things that are cute.
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Edit: Problem I had solved :D
Edit Edit: Alrighty, I have played the demo, and I liked the game overall. My thoughts:First let us get the negative aspects out of the way; the game has a few spellng errors and sentences that seem to be a bit weird. The Main characters portrait does not show up most of the time during her dialogue. And there was a bug somewhere but I forgot where to be honest :D Also the dialogue is overall a bit wooden, it does not come off as natural. Espacially the siblings dialogue seemed somewhat off.
That being said I really liked the art style of the game and the overall story got me hooked even though we are barely in yet, so that is worth a thumbs up^^ I am really curious why our protagonist was trapped. The one puzzle in the game was relatively easy, allthough I have no idea why white was the correct answer for the far right mushroom.
So to sum it up: I liked it, shows much potential, needs some polishing :)
And if you want to see my Let's Play, feel free to do so: https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=KT5_VdxX1Zg
Thank you for your feedback! Letty's portrait sometimes not appearing is done intentionally, because she is somewhat a semi-silent protagonist. So it's used mostly when I see a good use for it. Dialogue wise, I'll iron it out and fix the grammar issues and see how it goes. Regarding the puzzle, if the mushroom dislikes all colours - then what colour would they prefer? A colour that isn't seen as a colour or something, lol.
Anyways, the feedback is much appreciated. I knew I left an issue in there or two, so having it pointed out helps!
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