ORBIT93'S PROFILE

author=Punk_Kricket
I sincerely hope you'll consider revising the script/story because...I was completely removed from it by time I read "your vision is blur" for the eighth or ninth time.

As ambitious as this project seemed, some issues:

1.) Mapping. In some places, it's consistent. In others, far less so.
2.) The first two or three chapters are so agonizingly slow, that I began to feel that playing through the rest of the game was going to be a chore. I'm all for a slow beginning if it frames the narrative but this game more or less shoves us right into a mess of events and with little to no connection drawn between audience and story.
3.) I did get a few unintentional sessions of laughter with the hospital scene, and the typo "angle of death" - that killed me.

Seriously, though - there's areas of this game that need major reworking, rewriting and mapping. But, seeing how the above constructive criticism was basically shoved aside because they 'didn't complete the demo', my remarks may as well be falling on deaf ears.

Not at all, Your remarks are totally genuine. If you have played 2 or 3 chapters, it means you have played for like 40 to 50 minutes. I want more feedback. play-out some missions and give more feedback/suggestions.

I know my English isn't good so you will have to forgive me on that part. As for mapping, I'm working on it. (In particularly the map for safe house)

author=AlexHeartnet
Erm, game? I do not like having to wait 15 seconds in-between dialogue boxes or watching characters s l o w l y leave the buisness room one at a time. I have patience but not quite that much.

By holding ENTER key you can fast forward character movements and wait in between dialogues.there us usually a wait of maximum 2 seconds.

You are pretty good observant, I'll give you that. It seems like you shutdown the game as soon as you downloaded it. (Not even completed the tutorial, You were supposed to complete the tutorial in-order to unlock the rest of game including "Save Mirror").

I will see what I can do to rectify the mistakes that you pointed out.

You were talking a lot about the first-impressions. I agree with you 100%, first impressions are important and similarly it is important for a game tester or reviewer to completely test the whole thing before pointing out mistakes. I may not be a pro in designing maps. but I do know one thing for sure (after developing many apps) that it is not ethically correct for a reviewer or game tester to turn on a game and start writing reviews without even touching the game-pad or keyboard. It is just a thought, I may be wrong.

I will thank you again for your honest feedback.