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redwall10
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Closehi im new just started today i was wondering how
to get my game on this website this is so hard.
to get my game on this website this is so hard.
hi I just met you, and this is crazy
but submit a game, with 3 screenshots maybe
(seriously, go into "submissions" at the top of your screen and select "submit game". make sure to include 3 different/varied screenshots)
but submit a game, with 3 screenshots maybe
(seriously, go into "submissions" at the top of your screen and select "submit game". make sure to include 3 different/varied screenshots)
Your submission's description needs work. It wasn't long enough or descriptive enough and the grammar and capitalization needed work.
You must Save Your State from an Evil mage Named Zio's
with the help of your sister and a woman from Japan
you will take back the land. You are not like Everyone.
Else you are the out Casts This story is about a group of people
trying to take your Land, and everything that you have you must
stop Thim and rage war get your payback.
the players are Chris Ashley Sakura and Alex The gard.
Here is your latest description. Perhaps a fellow member here will help you convey the description you want?
"Follow Chris, Ashley, Sakura, and a guard named Alex on their journey to take back the land of (insert land name here) from the evil wizard Zio. Being branded as outcasts, they must persevere through a relentless war between good and evil to exact their justice."
Fuck it that's all I can come up with given the fucked up shit I had to work with, I'm drunk, sweaty, exhausted, leave me alone!
LEAVE ME ALONE!
Oh and hi, welcome to rmn.
Fuck it that's all I can come up with given the fucked up shit I had to work with, I'm drunk, sweaty, exhausted, leave me alone!
LEAVE ME ALONE!
Oh and hi, welcome to rmn.
ChuJooRi
1035
Welcome! Seems like you might need a writer or editor.
Here's my attempt at a description:
Since time immemorial, magic has existed but has remained hidden in the depths of the world. However, all of this is about to change with the emergence of Zio, a powerful mage who has gone against the order of mages and has begun using magic for malevolent purposes.
-Insert title of game here- follows the journey of Chris and Ashley, two siblings who have become outcasts for practicing magic, as they fight against the forces of Zio and attempt to reclaim their place in society. Throughout their journey, Chris and Ashley will be aided by Sakura, a woman from Japan, and a powerful fighter known as Alex "The Guard".
I took a few writing liberties.
Here's my attempt at a description:
Since time immemorial, magic has existed but has remained hidden in the depths of the world. However, all of this is about to change with the emergence of Zio, a powerful mage who has gone against the order of mages and has begun using magic for malevolent purposes.
-Insert title of game here- follows the journey of Chris and Ashley, two siblings who have become outcasts for practicing magic, as they fight against the forces of Zio and attempt to reclaim their place in society. Throughout their journey, Chris and Ashley will be aided by Sakura, a woman from Japan, and a powerful fighter known as Alex "The Guard".
I took a few writing liberties.
redwall10
442
ok im not good at writeing storys wow dont know if i should use this story i will fill bad.
05/31/2012 03:09 PM
Welcome! Seems like you might need a writer or editor.
Here's my attempt at a description:
Since time immemorial, magic has existed but has remained hidden in the depths of the world. However, all of this is about to change with the emergence of Zio, a powerful mage who has gone against the order of mages and has begun using magic for malevolent purposes.
-Insert title of game here- follows the journey of Chris and Ashley, two siblings who have become outcasts for practicing magic, as they fight against the forces of Zio and attempt to reclaim their place in society. Throughout their journey, Chris and Ashley will be aided by Sakura, a woman from Japan, and a powerful fighter known as Alex "The Guard".
05/31/2012 03:09 PM
Welcome! Seems like you might need a writer or editor.
Here's my attempt at a description:
Since time immemorial, magic has existed but has remained hidden in the depths of the world. However, all of this is about to change with the emergence of Zio, a powerful mage who has gone against the order of mages and has begun using magic for malevolent purposes.
-Insert title of game here- follows the journey of Chris and Ashley, two siblings who have become outcasts for practicing magic, as they fight against the forces of Zio and attempt to reclaim their place in society. Throughout their journey, Chris and Ashley will be aided by Sakura, a woman from Japan, and a powerful fighter known as Alex "The Guard".
ivoryjones
75
Why are you sending me a PM saying that I don't like your game? I haven't even played it yet. And your description being better than his is supposed to be a compliment.
Really, I was surprised at your description. Your grammar in your first post was fine.
Really, I was surprised at your description. Your grammar in your first post was fine.
You must Save Your State from an Evil mage Named Zio's
with the help of your sister and a woman from Japan
you will take back the land. You are not like Everyone.
Else you are the out Casts This story is about a group of people
trying to take your Land, and everything that you have you must
stop Thim and rage war get your payback.
the players are Chris Ashley Sakura and Alex The gard.
I'll give it a try:
You are Chris, who lives with his sister, Ashley. You live a peaceful existence. Until an evil wizard, Zio, decides that your country is next on his to-conquer list, that is! You are imprisoned, but find yourself contacted by an underground movement through a double-agent guard (Alex), who eventually leads you to their charismatic leader, Sakura.
Side note: I'm making too much stuff up, aren't I?
You must Save Your State from an Evil mage Named Zio's
with the help of your sister and a woman from Japan
you will take back the land. You are not like Everyone.
Else you are the out Casts This story is about a group of people
trying to take your Land,of Wood Lake and everything that you
have you must stop Thim and rage war get your payback.
the players are Chris Ashley Sakura and Alex The Guard.
Chris age 25 a Wonderer and his Sister Ashley age 23 Thy
Live in a Little Town Called Wood Lake. Thy Meet a Women.
Named Sakura. From Other State Age 27. and The Guard age ???
He has Low Battle Skills.
Current state of the description
Remove the manual carriage returns in this description - they are obnoxious
Your capitalization is whack - you only need to capitalize the first word and names
"Outcasts" is just one word
Put a single space after commas (,)
*Thy = They
women is the plural of woman
the phrase "He has Low Battle Skills" is nonsensical.
Your capitalization is whack - you only need to capitalize the first word and names
"Outcasts" is just one word
Put a single space after commas (,)
*Thy = They
women is the plural of woman
the phrase "He has Low Battle Skills" is nonsensical.
author=redwall10
can someone help me on how to get a new battle set thing.
Battlers? Battle script? Battleback? Uh, what else could this refer to?
More serious post: Be more specific!
redwall10
442
hey i am makering a new rpg becuse the outcasts was so bad.
i was just wondering if you can but a Sega Logo in your game Yes or No
i was just wondering if you can but a Sega Logo in your game Yes or No
