CLOSAT - A IS FOR ACTION
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~ CLOSAT ~
A is for Action
What is this?A is for Action
This is the fourth of a series of Creative Writing exercises. There will be seven (7) topics/parts to the series, this being the first, and all are aimed at creation.
This fifth episode will focus on creating a action.
But what is a CLOSAT?
It's a culmination of a group of different things that combine to create a story. This will be something of an experiment, actually.
Yes, but what-?
It's a surprise. You'll find out at the end, okay? ^.~
Fine, then what do we have to do?
Firstly, decide whether or not you are going to stick around for all seven parts. I'm aiming to have them done within a few weeks time, and some parts are longer than others.
Secondly, each topic will ask you to create something. This something will be used by others so don't throw out anything that you'd rather not be shared.
Lastly, create.
What are we creating?
This time, as the topic header states, we'll be creating an action. Each person who joined previously will be tasked with making one. Just one, mind you.
You'll do this like so:
- Go for a walk. Take a pad and pen with you.
- Close your eyes and listen for a while. Jot down everything you hear.
- Close your eyes and try to catch scents. Jot down any you recognise.
- Touch things and try to describe how it feels.
- Look around and jot down anything that catches your attention.
- When you get back, take one of those things and create an action from it.
- This Friday will be the deadline.
Actions can range from creative or uncreative - whichever you like.
Once your action is done, it will be added to the topic. This will be referenced at a later date. You don't need to add your observations, but you may if you wish.
Create~
Current Creators
Liberty
papasan96
Irili
Magical Rune Knight200
Caz
Dudesoft
Gourd_Clae
Marrend
MrChearlie
Actions
Observations
Hear: Carpentry noises - hammer, saw, swearing, banging, wood, birds singing, lawnmower, kids talking and screaming, "Tommy won't give it back!" "I got the ball!", leaves rustling, cars and trucks driving past, sheep bleating, dog barks, crying child, adult yelling "Get inside! Now!" gravel, car door slamming, car motor revving, car leaving driveway
Smell: grass, wood, dusty, eucalyptus, smoke, sheep, gasoline/petrol, sheep poo, rotten meat, roast meat, exhaust fumes
Touch: Bark - rough, hard and cold, like scabbed tissue under my hands.
Flower petals - soft, silky, damp yet dry. Alive, I can feel the water in it. Feather - Soft, light, barely-there lines of stiff all-one-way feathery, but with a sharp, blunt point and dry, scaly hard, but softish. Tickles my hand, soft sweepy and rush of air.
See: Little girl in a bright red shirt and skirt, climbing on an a-frame which is new, metallic, glinting in the sun. Little boy in a green jumper runs over and tries to push her out of the way as he climbs, but she clings on tightly and keeps climbing.
A galah is on the grass, eating something off the ground. Looks like a biscuit or piece of cake or something like that. It's grey and pink and feathery. Pretty. Only the one though. odd.
A line of ants are climbing around the base of a tree where someone has spilt a milkshake, probably strawberry flavour - it's red. Some of them are carrying bits of food and one looks like it was stepped on at one point, moving really slow and with crooked legs.
An old man is pushing a lawnmower across his lawn. Takes a minute to adjust a dial on the side, then keeps pushing. He's got almost no hair and a squashed nose. Wearing brown trousers and a navy striped and collared t-shirt. White runners. Maybe a hearing aid? He's got something on his ear.
Red car drives past, with three men in it. It's sleek, but needs a good wash - covered in red dirt - probably from driving on dirt roads. One of them had a hand hanging out the window. Green t-shirt. IRT-241, Victorian plates. "The place to be."
Old tree looks like a good wind would push it over. Eucalyptus. Multiple trunks - more like they split at some point. Five main ones. The branches are all droopy, but there's not many leaves on it. It must be sick.
New concrete pavement. Someone tried to draw a penis on it while it was wet, but the tip is missing. TB 4 AT. It's lighter than the rest. It was probably broken at one point.
Action: Writing on wet concrete.
Observations:
Hear: splashing water, children playing, spluttering, wind rustling leaves, coughing, metal clanking, "Got it!" buzzing from insects.
See: greenish grass, brother jumping in the pool, children swimming, woman floating on pink floaty, tall trees, small insect scurrying around puddles of water, poofy clouds.
Touch: rippling cool water lapping at my feet, warm wind on my face, hot sun on my head, solid wooden bench - rough in places, soft beach towel - a little worn with a frayed end.
Smell: clorine, smoke, trees.
Action: Swimming in the cool pool water.
Observations:
-Hear: Big dogs barking, small dogs barking, my mom saying bye, truck motors, leaves rustling, doors closing, sandals on gravel, slippers on carpet, glass bottles
-Smell: Pepsi, wind, Ritz crackers, paper, grass, my stinky shirt LOL.
-Touch: aluminum Pepsi can- cool and smooth, plastic (?) slippers- flexible and comfy/slightly foamy, fabric lawn chair- rough and hurts my back (lol), burning hot sun- really hot and blinding, paper-back library book- dirty and worn out
-See: my mom's SUV, weird beetle, family walking, kids on tricycles, box of Ritz crackers, Pepsi can, buff dude w/ shades, my patchy mofo lawn, trucks, boat
Action: Taking a nice, zen, slow blink that lasts 1.2345678911 seconds to close my eye; then 1.1987654321 seconds to gently open it to the flowing summer wind. I will then proceed to look at my patchy mofo lawn.
Observations:
See: Sunlight leaves shadows from hedgerows which surround the garden, but otherwise makes garden blinding to look at; patio is comprised of rectangular orange and brown rocks covering all of the flooring in the large square area, sun colours it in such a way that makes it painful to view; hedgerows which surround two sides of the garden are dark green with small firs, whereas the hedges at the back are bright with large leaves; the fourth side of the garden is enclosed by the tall house with glass doors - need a wash; neglected birdhouse on the side of the wall with one bit of wood missing making it unusable; bug crawling on paper, shortly followed by bug smeared over paper; reflection of self and garden in glass doors of house, sun is reflecting brightly from hair.
Smell: Freshly cut grass smell, mainly outdone by smell of fumes from cars; burning rubber.
Hear: Plane rumbling overhead, sound coming from the sky; cars passing by and bumping over a certain rock in the road each time, a satisfying "ka-dunk" sound is made; birds, sparrows specifically, chirping between two hedges; sound of motorbike approaching from the far distance; train on tracks coming and swiftly going; loud, whiny moped sound lingering in the background; wind chimes faintly chatter.
Feel: Ants climbing over bare feet; a slight, cooling breeze sails past frequently, feels very gentle; stabbing pain in bottom of foot from hard rocks; patio feels rough and grainy, very much like bits of sand caught up amongst the paving.
Action: a bug being crushed to death
Notes:
Waves, quiet, birdsong, gulls, geese.
Action: Strolling along the sunset swept beach of Turtle Bay, Oahu, Hawai'i.
Notes:
poop on grass, dew on grass, broken sidewalk, dirty houses, legs hurt, yanked along on a leash, yanking along on a leash
Action: Walking your dog.
Observations:
Sights:
Huh. Probably need to change that bird bath water at some point.
Wait, what's that lawn chair doing in the porch? Oh. Right.
Sounds:
The mechanism of the garage door going up, then down. That's not me, though! Honest!
Birds chirping.
I hear a car revving up it's engine somewhere.
That was totally an airplane just then.
Resulting action: A mechanism's engine revving up.
Observations:
sights: Group of identically-dressed female university graduates leaving a job fair; rows of bicycles parked outside pachinko parlour; shifty looking salaryman going into one of the (many) soaplands near my apartment; taxies queuing up outside the station.
sounds: hum of air-conditioner; cacophony from inside pachinko parlour as I walk past; street hawkers trying to get salarymen into their karaoke bars; ambulance siren and recording warning drivers.
smells: Curry rice from CocoIchiban; the smell that comes following heavy rain.
touch: My feet feel the bumpy yellow lines in the train station for blind people.
event: Someone singing karaoke
Nootes:
Sight: A party room, an outside table with a some chairs, come couches in the outside, many people celebrating a wedding in the inside.
Sounds: Persons, Music
Smells. Cigarette and the smell of an approaching rain
touch: My butt was feeling a comfortable couch
action: Smoking a cigarette
Hmmm this one's gonna require a bit more preparation...looks interesting though. It's too dark here now to try today so it'll take me a few days to post.
Observations:
Hear: splashing water, children playing, spluttering, wind rustling leaves, coughing, metal clanking, "Got it!" buzzing from insects.
See: greenish grass, brother jumping in the pool, children swimming, woman floating on pink floaty, tall trees, small insect scurrying around puddles of water, poofy clouds.
Touch: rippling cool water lapping at my feet, warm wind on my face, hot sun on my head, solid wooden bench - rough in places, soft beach towel - a little worn with a frayed end.
Smell: clorine, smoke, trees.
Action: Swimming in the cool pool water.
Hear: splashing water, children playing, spluttering, wind rustling leaves, coughing, metal clanking, "Got it!" buzzing from insects.
See: greenish grass, brother jumping in the pool, children swimming, woman floating on pink floaty, tall trees, small insect scurrying around puddles of water, poofy clouds.
Touch: rippling cool water lapping at my feet, warm wind on my face, hot sun on my head, solid wooden bench - rough in places, soft beach towel - a little worn with a frayed end.
Smell: clorine, smoke, trees.
Action: Swimming in the cool pool water.
I went to the pool if you can tell. ;)
I was outside. :) It was really nice out but i seriously need to take a shower, lol.
Observations:
-Hear: Big dogs barking, small dogs barking, my mom saying bye, truck motors, leaves rustling, doors closing, sandals on gravel, slippers on carpet, glass bottles
-Smell: Pepsi, wind, Ritz crackers, paper, grass, my stinky shirt LOL.
-Touch: aluminum Pepsi can- cool and smooth, plastic (?) slippers- flexible and comfy/slightly foamy, fabric lawn chair- rough and hurts my back (lol), burning hot sun- really hot and blinding, paper-back library book- dirty and worn out
-See: my mom's SUV, weird beetle, family walking, kids on tricycles, box of Ritz crackers, Pepsi can, buff dude w/ shades, my patchy mofo lawn, trucks, boat
Action: Taking a nice, zen, slow blink that lasts 1.2345678911 seconds to close my eye; then 1.1987654321 seconds to gently open it to the flowing summer wind. I will then proceed to look at my patchy mofo lawn.
-Hear: Big dogs barking, small dogs barking, my mom saying bye, truck motors, leaves rustling, doors closing, sandals on gravel, slippers on carpet, glass bottles
-Smell: Pepsi, wind, Ritz crackers, paper, grass, my stinky shirt LOL.
-Touch: aluminum Pepsi can- cool and smooth, plastic (?) slippers- flexible and comfy/slightly foamy, fabric lawn chair- rough and hurts my back (lol), burning hot sun- really hot and blinding, paper-back library book- dirty and worn out
-See: my mom's SUV, weird beetle, family walking, kids on tricycles, box of Ritz crackers, Pepsi can, buff dude w/ shades, my patchy mofo lawn, trucks, boat
Action: Taking a nice, zen, slow blink that lasts 1.2345678911 seconds to close my eye; then 1.1987654321 seconds to gently open it to the flowing summer wind. I will then proceed to look at my patchy mofo lawn.
author=kentona
The A is for ANDERSON
How long have you waited to say that? And was it really worth it?
(On topic: my 'Action' will be done soon, when I actually find some sturdy paper..)
Sigh, no one wants me to get this done today apparently.. so many interruptions!
See: Sunlight leaves shadows from hedgerows which surround the garden, but otherwise makes garden blinding to look at; patio is comprised of rectangular orange and brown rocks covering all of the flooring in the large square area, sun colours it in such a way that makes it painful to view; hedgerows which surround two sides of the garden are dark green with small firs, whereas the hedges at the back are bright with large leaves; the fourth side of the garden is enclosed by the tall house with glass doors - need a wash; neglected birdhouse on the side of the wall with one bit of wood missing making it unusable; bug crawling on paper, shortly followed by bug smeared over paper; reflection of self and garden in glass doors of house, sun is reflecting brightly from hair.
Smell: Freshly cut grass smell, mainly outdone by smell of fumes from cars; burning rubber.
Hear: Plane rumbling overhead, sound coming from the sky; cars passing by and bumping over a certain rock in the road each time, a satisfying "ka-dunk" sound is made; birds, sparrows specifically, chirping between two hedges; sound of motorbike approaching from the far distance; train on tracks coming and swiftly going; loud, whiny moped sound lingering in the background; wind chimes faintly chatter.
Feel: Ants climbing over bare feet; a slight, cooling breeze sails past frequently, feels very gentle; stabbing pain in bottom of foot from hard rocks; patio feels rough and grainy, very much like bits of sand caught up amongst the paving.
Action: a bug being crushed to death.
Smell: Freshly cut grass smell, mainly outdone by smell of fumes from cars; burning rubber.
Hear: Plane rumbling overhead, sound coming from the sky; cars passing by and bumping over a certain rock in the road each time, a satisfying "ka-dunk" sound is made; birds, sparrows specifically, chirping between two hedges; sound of motorbike approaching from the far distance; train on tracks coming and swiftly going; loud, whiny moped sound lingering in the background; wind chimes faintly chatter.
Feel: Ants climbing over bare feet; a slight, cooling breeze sails past frequently, feels very gentle; stabbing pain in bottom of foot from hard rocks; patio feels rough and grainy, very much like bits of sand caught up amongst the paving.
Action: a bug being crushed to death.
Notes:
Waves, quiet, birdsong, gulls, geese.
Action:
Strolling along the sunset swept beach of Turtle Bay, Oahu, Hawai'i.
This one's probably going to take a while for me. I'm going to wait until after I move to my new house on Thursday because there's an amazing view there that I think I can get a lot of creativity out of.
Notes:
poop on grass, dew on grass, broken sidewalk, dirty houses, legs hurt, yanked along on a leash, yanking along on a leash
Action:
Walking your dog.
poop on grass, dew on grass, broken sidewalk, dirty houses, legs hurt, yanked along on a leash, yanking along on a leash
Action:
Walking your dog.
Mine was a rather short walk, concentrating on sounds more than anything else. Excuse the stream-of-consciousness with some of these:
Sights:
Huh. Probably need to change that bird bath water at some point.
Wait, what's that lawn chair doing in the porch? Oh. Right.
Sounds:
The mechanism of the garage door going up, then down. That's not me, though! Honest!
Birds chirping.
I hear a car revving up it's engine somewhere.
That was totally an airplane just then.
Resulting action: A mechanism's engine revving up.
Sights:
Huh. Probably need to change that bird bath water at some point.
Wait, what's that lawn chair doing in the porch? Oh. Right.
Sounds:
The mechanism of the garage door going up, then down. That's not me, though! Honest!
Birds chirping.
I hear a car revving up it's engine somewhere.
That was totally an airplane just then.
Resulting action: A mechanism's engine revving up.
I was going to go for a walk and do this on my day off on Wednesday...but then a massive typhoon hit the kanto area in June for the first time in 8 years o_O
Never mind, finally got round to it...Sorry it's late!
Never mind, finally got round to it...Sorry it's late!
sights: Group of identically-dressed female university graduates leaving a job fair; rows of bicycles parked outside pachinko parlour; shifty looking salaryman going into one of the (many) soaplands near my apartment; taxies queuing up outside the station.
sounds: hum of air-conditioner; cacophony from inside pachinko parlour as I walk past; street hawkers trying to get salarymen into their karaoke bars; ambulance siren and recording warning drivers.
smells: Curry rice from CocoIchiban; the smell that comes following heavy rain.
touch: My feet feel the bumpy yellow lines in the train station for blind people.
event:Someone singing karaoke
sounds: hum of air-conditioner; cacophony from inside pachinko parlour as I walk past; street hawkers trying to get salarymen into their karaoke bars; ambulance siren and recording warning drivers.
smells: Curry rice from CocoIchiban; the smell that comes following heavy rain.
touch: My feet feel the bumpy yellow lines in the train station for blind people.
event:Someone singing karaoke
Sorry for the late post :/
Well this is from memory
Sight: A party room, an outside table with a some chairs, come couches in the outside, many people celebrating a wedding in the inside.
Sounds: Persons, Music
Smells. Cigarrette and the smell of an aproiching rain
touch: My butt was feeling a comfortable couch
action: Smoking a cigarrete
Sight: A party room, an outside table with a some chairs, come couches in the outside, many people celebrating a wedding in the inside.
Sounds: Persons, Music
Smells. Cigarrette and the smell of an aproiching rain
touch: My butt was feeling a comfortable couch
action: Smoking a cigarrete
Don't worry about it. The last part of this stage will be up some time today (I've been pretty busy lately) and then I'll give everyone a final chance to finish up before the end stage.
I'm just trying to hurry up here, sadly, for this, I didn't walk :(
Hear:birds, fan blowing, cardboard window moving
Smell:fresh air from the fan, warm air everywhere else
Touch: fluffy, rough, smooth, prickly
Sight:computer, rpgmaker.net site on the computer, paper beside the computer, my dad's projector, unfinished Baskin Robins drink, head phones, wires, N64, gamecube, a XBOX that doesn't work correctly, punching bag, my stuff behind me including:Kirby toy, tons of my brothers pictures he gave me, a knife, a Chris Angel MindFreak Magic Kit, ect.
Action:I got a Chris Angel MindFreak Magic Kit for my birthday!
Hear:birds, fan blowing, cardboard window moving
Smell:fresh air from the fan, warm air everywhere else
Touch: fluffy, rough, smooth, prickly
Sight:computer, rpgmaker.net site on the computer, paper beside the computer, my dad's projector, unfinished Baskin Robins drink, head phones, wires, N64, gamecube, a XBOX that doesn't work correctly, punching bag, my stuff behind me including:Kirby toy, tons of my brothers pictures he gave me, a knife, a Chris Angel MindFreak Magic Kit, ect.
Action:I got a Chris Angel MindFreak Magic Kit for my birthday!
Better (really) late than never!
Hear: Seagulls, cars, the sea
Smell: Fish, petrol
Touch: Harbour railing. Metallic, smooth
A boat is sailing in the distance. It has a little red light on it.
Action: Fishing
Hear: Seagulls, cars, the sea
Smell: Fish, petrol
Touch: Harbour railing. Metallic, smooth
A boat is sailing in the distance. It has a little red light on it.
Action: Fishing
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