[POLL] GAME TITLES

Poll

What is a better name for my African themed game?
- Results

Mashetani Liberation
10
71%
Wakati wa Liberation
0
0%
?j? ti Liberation
0
0%
Watu Liberation
2
14%
Other - suggest something to me
2
14%

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I've been working on my game forever and I'm still not sure what the title should be.
I want it to sound good and make sense
Lately, I have been calling it "Mashetani Liberation" which sounds good but out of context of the game, it might not make sense because Mashetani basically means evil spirits or demons in Swahili. If you know Swahili you'd be thinking why the hell would you want to liberate demons. If you play the game (SPOILER ALERT) you find out that the Mashetani were once good spirits who are being controlled to do terrible things.
To me it makes sense but I'm not sure if it would be seen favorably.
So I been looking for another title in case the other doesn't work.
"Wakati wa Liberation" is Swahili for - a time of liberation.
Which is more general and also more inclusive which makes sense because it's mainly people that you try to liberate in the game you just happen to need save the spirits (mashetani) in order to liberate humans
I also like "ọjọ ti Liberation" which is Igbo for - day of Liberation
but I'm afraid people will mispronounce that. The o's in ọjọ are pronounced like the o's in the word got
Finally I thought "Watu Liberation" sounded nice. It's Swahili for - people
quick note - ?j? ti Liberation is supposed to be Ojo ti Liberation but the poll didn't recognize the unicode. My bad.
I assume that your target audience is English speakers since you're worried about people having trouble with pronunciation. So, it's unlikely that your audience will even know any Swahili, so I'd just go with the most phonetically pleasing, which, to me, is Mashetani Liberation. The initial confusion that this might cause people who know what the Mashetani are is actually a good thing, as it would provide intrigue, and based on your description, I don't think it's a misleading title, either.
LockeZ
I'd really like to get rid of LockeZ. His play style is way too unpredictable. He's always like this too. If he ran a country, he'd just kill and imprison people at random until crime stopped.
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author=RedMask
Lately, I have been calling it "Mashetani Liberation" which sounds good but out of context of the game, it might not make sense because Mashetani basically means evil spirits or demons in Swahili. If you know Swahili you'd be thinking why the hell would you want to liberate demons. If you play the game (SPOILER ALERT) you find out that the Mashetani were once good spirits who are being controlled to do terrible things.
To me it makes sense but I'm not sure if it would be seen favorably.

I don't see the problem. In practically every single video game that has demons, some of them are on the player's side. It's unheard of for demons to actually all be antagoniststs. The player is always a half-demon, or able to summon and control demons, or fighting on behalf of the demons, or lets a demon join the party, or something like that.
Well not really all video games, but yeah, there are quite some with demons that side with the good ones.


I don't know much about the "background" story, but I voted for Mashetani Liberation because that sounds best and would appeal to me the most of I read it as a game title.
Why not just "Demon liberation" or "Day of Liberation"? Heck, why not just "Liberation"? Is it really that important to make the title of your game sound all obscure and stuff? Will at least the Swahili language be prominent in the game or something? And if so, why not just "Mashetani *insert-swahili-word-for-liberation-here"? and avoid mixing languages.

I don't know, it's cool if your game has a mythos and everything, but unless it's very interesting, I'd rather understand what I'm reading.
Actually almost all of videogames if you get a little broader on what counts as a "demon"

(rydia suddenly became a lot more frightening)

I think Mashetani Liberation sounds quice nice.
As for naming, I generally name my stuff based on the last thing I ate or something like that. LOL
Watu Liberation seems like the easiest to remember, so I vote for it.
author=alterego
Why not just "Demon liberation" or "Day of Liberation"? Heck, why not just "Liberation"? Is it really that important to make the title of your game sound all obscure and stuff? Will at least the Swahili language be prominent in the game or something? And if so, why not just "Mashetani *insert-swahili-word-for-liberation-here"? and avoid mixing languages.

I don't know, it's cool if your game has a mythos and everything, but unless it's very interesting, I'd rather understand what I'm reading.

I guess it doesn't matter much for RPG Maker games, but usually you'd want your game to be found via Google and that only works well with unique names.
Finding a game named liberation might be quite hard.
unity
You're magical to me.
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author=RyaReisender
author=alterego
Why not just "Demon liberation" or "Day of Liberation"? Heck, why not just "Liberation"? Is it really that important to make the title of your game sound all obscure and stuff? Will at least the Swahili language be prominent in the game or something? And if so, why not just "Mashetani *insert-swahili-word-for-liberation-here"? and avoid mixing languages.

I don't know, it's cool if your game has a mythos and everything, but unless it's very interesting, I'd rather understand what I'm reading.
I guess it doesn't matter much for RPG Maker games, but usually you'd want your game to be found via Google and that only works well with unique names.
Finding a game named liberation might be quite hard.

Not to mention that I find the name "Demon Liberation" to be boring.

But there's a bigger issue to me. Just because the game is in English and not Swahili doesn't mean that the creator should replace everything with a bland English synonym, in my opinion. We've got mythological and cultural references in games that span the globe but ones from an African perspective are rare.

If "Mashetani" is an important word that means a distinct group, I say keep it. Hell, it'd be like someone saying "yokai and oni are confusing and/or boring in your game set in Japan. Change them to 'ghost' and 'ogre'." Or, if we pretend that a mythology closer to the western world was somehow less known, it'd be like "Change 'Excalibur' to 'King Sword.'"
pianotm
The TM is for Totally Magical.
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When John Lennon wrote "Imagine" he had intended to call it "Can You Imagine". I agree with the statement that just "Liberation" would be fine. The title of any work of art should never be about "how easily people can find it". That puts an unfair limitation on your creativity. If you doubt this, try Googling Imagine. You'll find that John Lennon's song comes right up, and the word "imagine" has numerous other uses.

If you're worried about Google searches, why don't you try employing some SEO (Search Engine Optimization). Your first step would be to have Google's (and other search engines) spiders, as they're called, "crawl" your page leading to your game. This is done by submitting your website to search engines (search "submit my website" in every search engine you know). The next step is to submit your website to banner exchanges (you'll need a banner graphic...check the exchange rules to see what size you need). You will need keywords that tie to your game. It is doubtful that anyone other than us will be looking for your game. It's important to make it look attractive to people who otherwise have no interest. Point is, nobody is going to be looking for specifically the title you choose unless you're spending thousands of dollars in advertisement, so your contention that a simple title would make it hard to find is a rather weak one. No, on the contrary, most people are going to find your game by STUMBLING on it. As a matter of fact, this is how I found the RPG Maker community and even started with RPG Maker 2003, and now, thanks to you posting, I know about your game, and you'll be interested to know that in both cases, I didn't use the terms RPG or Maker in my searches, nor did I use Mashitani, or Liberation to find this thread. I just clicked on a thread that interested me.

SEO is your absolute sure way of making sure it is found. The search engines you submit your download and description site to, after about a week, will put your site on the first page (after high priority submissions, i.e. those that actually pay for preference, are out of the way. It usually takes about a week before non-paying customers see their link on the top page).

In closing, feel free to choose the title you like the most. I like "Liberation". That's my "other" recommendation. In the end, what's really going to matter is how many people it attracts, not how many people are looking.
Well, "Mashetani Liberation" would draw my attention much more than simply "Liberation," which sounds generic. A more important thing to think of than Googleability is that a unique title more clearly expresses the concept and style of the game. My favorite titles are ones that grab my attention and cause me to wonder what the game/movie/whatever is about.
Thanks for all your input. That SEO thing is interesting I'd never knew about it.

author=Housekeeping
I assume that your target audience is English speakers

Yes and more broadly my target audience are people who don't know much about Africa because I want my game to inspire people to learn more about Africa's art and culture. But, I do also want people who know a lot about African culture to play my game and even though I've been learning about Africa for years there will always be people who know more than me and I worry that some of those people won't like how I portray the art and culture of the continent. I know I can't please everyone but I want to try.
I should note that my game is a fantasy of my own creation but it appropriates a huge amount of actual African imagery in order to show people how amazing Africa really is.

Anyway I'm actually glad a lot of you guys seem to like the name "Mashetani Liberation" but all this had me think of another name. How does
"The Land of Mwanga" or simply "Land of Mwanga" sound to you?
Mwanga means light
which I thought was kinda cool and contradictory to the whole outdated title that's Europeans used to call Africa (I'm not going to tell you what they called it because some people find that name offensive)
Point is this new title is meant to oppose that old term for Africa by calling it the land of light

Should I make another poll pitting the title
Mashetani Liberation vs The Land of Mwanga
or would you guys get annoyed if I made another poll about this?
LockeZ
I'd really like to get rid of LockeZ. His play style is way too unpredictable. He's always like this too. If he ran a country, he'd just kill and imprison people at random until crime stopped.
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author=RedMask
Mashetani Liberation vs The Land of Mwanga

The former gives me the impression that the game is about action and battle. The latter gives me the impression that it's about exploration and discovery.

So, I'd say to pick whichever one fits your game's genre better. I don't know enough about your gameplay to tell you that.

With the original list of titles it was easier to pick one without knowing much about the game, because they were all similar. With these two it's basically up to you to decide if the game is more about the liberation or the land.
pianotm
The TM is for Totally Magical.
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author=LockeZ
author=RedMask
Mashetani Liberation vs The Land of Mwanga
The former gives me the impression that the game is about action and battle. The latter gives me the impression that it's about exploration and discovery.

So, I'd say to pick whichever one fits your game's genre better. I don't know enough about your gameplay to tell you that.

With the original list of titles it was easier to pick one without knowing much about the game, because they were all similar. With these two it's basically up to you to decide if the game is more about the liberation or the land.


Maybe if we knew more about what the game was about. To be honest, "Land of Mwanga" doesn't put me in mind of demons or liberation, and I thought that was what the post said the game was going to revolve around.
Backwards_Cowboy
owned a Vita and WiiU. I know failure
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author=pianotm
author=LockeZ
author=RedMask
Mashetani Liberation vs The Land of Mwanga
The former gives me the impression that the game is about action and battle. The latter gives me the impression that it's about exploration and discovery.

So, I'd say to pick whichever one fits your game's genre better. I don't know enough about your gameplay to tell you that.

With the original list of titles it was easier to pick one without knowing much about the game, because they were all similar. With these two it's basically up to you to decide if the game is more about the liberation or the land.
Maybe if we knew more about what the game was about. To be honest, "Land of Mwanga" doesn't put me in mind of demons or liberation, and I thought that was what the post said the game was going to revolve around.

"Land of Mwanga" sounds like a child's game to me for some reason. Sort of like "Club Penguin" or "Wizard 101". I'd stick with "Mashetani Liberation". Not only does it relate to African spirituality, but it sounds more exciting while "Land of (Enter ANYTHING Here)" sounds really generic and almost like a name generator made it.
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