THE LAST BIBLE: SCRIPT READING REQUEST

Ok, I have been working for the End of Chapter 3 for The Last Bible. I want the end of this Chapter to be a "clincher" for players. Warning this is a long script, but I need a serious and honest opinion, this will affect how the game turns out and I really need help with it.


Important Information: Honestly you may want to know a bit about this part of the game and the characters before you start reading and editing.

Alexander: Alexander is an Exorcist of The Order. He is an egotist, he is a cold, quiet, and demanding leader. In this part of the story he is the leader of a small squad assigned to retrieve and important piece of Military Equipment, known as The Nadleeh. Alexander is British

Jonas: Jonas accompanies Alexander on this Mission. He is normally a happy go lucky guy, and is found taking care of Ashley for the majority of the story. In terms of combat he is feared by Alexander due to his "killing intent". Rather than utilizing gun, Jonas is a Field Soldier, whom is fast enough to utilize Combat Knives in combat. Jonas is Australian

Ashley: Ashley is on Alexander's team along with Jonas. Ashley is a downer, a whiner, and isn't the best soldier, however he is believed to be a natural tactician. During times of decisive action, Ashley is unable to act, which make him appear weak.

The Nadleeh The Nadleeh is a piece of Military Technology and is currently in possession of the Israeli Government. This Nadleeh is one of 12 Known to exist in this time period. What is unknown to many is the actual purpose of The Nadleeh. This piece of technology is a biological weapon, and can be classified as a Homunculus, a being created by humans. The name Nadleeh is a term interchangeable with "Two-spirit," used by the Navajo tribes to denote a male spirit and a female spirit living in the same body. The Nadleeh in The Last Bible function as Homunculi which bear real form or shape. It is not until there genes are "Programmed" or come into contact with Human Flesh that they mimic and "Clone" their targets cells and appearance. Commander Jacksons team consisting of Alexander, Jonas, Ashley, and 15 other soldiers whom were killed in a bombing. There orders were to capture the Nadleeh and retrieve it to Rome, however one thing has lead to another, and the characters are in this current situation.

Last Bible Script
Scene #69:
Setting: Alexander, Jonas, and Ashley have defeated the first Boss. The Beast begins to return to its Human form, allowing Mr. Misoto to regain consciousness. Ashley tries to calm him down, and Mr. Misoto gives Ashley the Key of Nadleeh, however as Mr. Misoto looks at the key, the Akuma Virus begins to spread and the Yokai and its Host fight one another for control. Human appendages flail in the air and the Yokai, enters is "Berserk" State, due to no consumption of food. In this state is begins to destroy everything in sight and blood gushes from the beast as it loses all control. Alexander orders Ashley to attack but Ashley hesitates and The Beast easily knocks him off the side of the platform. The Beast now looks at Jonas.

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Jonas: "AHH!"

*Jonas rushes towards the foe with Combat Knife in hand.*

Alexander: "HALSE!"

*Jonas jumps into the air only to be impaled by a spike that emerges from The Beasts palm.*

Alexander: "..Damn It......Nadleeh....."

*Alexander draws his Katana and charges at the Beast. The two of them spar, but Alexander is knocked back. As he begins to "Invoke" Suzuka a shadow is seen over head, and a cloaked figure impales The Beast through the head from above.*

Alexander: *Shocked*

Jonas: *A heavily injured Jonas looks on at the beast.* "U..hhh..what the hell!?"

*Blood spews all around as The Beast, yells and screams, the figure baring a Female Figure withdraws her hand from The Beast's head, and begins to fire many SMG rounds at her foe. This sends the Beast falling off the platform.*

Alexander: "Impossible.....Who...who are you...of what affiliation do you seek..."

Cloaked Figure: "......."

*Alexander raises his blade.*

Alexander: "Speak now, or prepare to be eliminated!"

Cloaked Figure: "Nadleeh is ours....."

*Dramatic Music Start*

Alexander: "DIE !!!"

*Alexander rushes at the Cloaked Figure, the two clash, and the screen is surrounded in a flash. When its subsides, a Larger figure in a cloak appears between Alexander and the Feminine Figure. The Figure uses his arm to fend off Alexander's attack.*

Jonas: *Struggling to get up.* "Whha...what is going on?"

Larger Cloaked Figure: "Miphera, gather the Key, and let us be on our way."

*Dramatic Music Increase*

Alexander: *Looking up slowly* "..That voice....No....It...it...can't be....."

*Memory Flashes in Alexander's Mind*

Alexander: "You..you...are..."

Larger Cloaked Figure: "Dead?"

Larger Cloaked Figure: "No...Little Master.....I am very much alive....."

*As the Larger Cloaked Figure's Cloak reaches out to attack Alexander, Alexander jumps away.*

Alexander: "You..you...no (sharp rise in Alexander's voice)..you..are....dead...dead..."

*Alexander is Shocked*

Feminine Cloaked Figure: "Master....."

Larger Cloaked Figure: "...." *Turns away from Alexander*

*As the two Cloaked Figures proceed to leave Alexander yells.*

Alexander: "NO !!! Stop, Don't you dare turn away from me......"

Alexander: "How.....10 years....you are a Ghost.....HOW !!!!"

*The Larger Cloaked Figure stops.*

Large Cloaked Figure: "…Time..Time...has only prolonged my faith....."

Feminine Cloaked Figure: "Master...."

*The Feminine Cloaked Figure stops.*

Larger Cloaked Figure: "No..he deserves some time...."

*The Larger Cloaked Figure walks towards Alexander.*

Larger Cloaked Figure: "As I have said..time...has only prolonged my faith....your faith...the faith that we share."

Alexander: "There is no way....you...do not fark with ME !!!"

*Alexander prepares for battle.*

Larger Cloaked Figure: "That tool....my faith...the curse..have you forgotten my words.....In that case...then."

Alexander: "You're not him !!!! You...you are an imposter !!!!"

*Alexander charges at the Larger Cloaked Figure, but the Figure dodges the attack, and appears behind Alexander.*

Larger Cloaked Figure: "....I am he..I...time...lets just say...I have been given a little extra time."

*The Larger Cloaked Figure removes the Mask on his face, revealing a beautiful face however part of his face still remains hidden by the Mask.*

Alexander: *Shocked*

*In shock Alexander drops to his knees, and starts to mumble.*

Larger Cloaked Figure: "......The same......, Miphera....let up depart..."

*The Larger Cloaked Figure and the Feminine Cloaked Figure leave the area, and the screen dims to black. For a mere moment, thoughts rush through Alexander's head, as he begins to talk to himself and hears screams, heart beats, killing, and lastly fire. With that the screen resurfaces, and Alexander now stands holding his Katana firmly.*

Alexander: "....If so....then...to hell with you....."

Alexander: "If so...then..to hell with you LUCIOUS !!!!"

*Alexander rushes away from the present area and follows the two Cloaked Figures. Leaving an injured Jonas who is struggling to stand.*

Jonas: "..Dammit....this whole mission.....Dammit....I...I..have to help Alexander...."

Jonas: *Coughs blood.* "...But......Ashley...."

Jonas: *Falls to the ground.*

Faint Voice: "..Uhhh...can..anyone hear me....."

Jonas: *Shocked* "......"

Faint Voice: "I...I can't hold on....ALEXANDER.....JONAS......."

Faint Voice: "I.....anyone...please...."

Jonas: ("Ashley...")

Jonas: "ASHLEY !!"

*Jonas struggles to rise.*

Ashley: "JONAS...IS THAT YOU!!"

*Jonas stands up and starts walking.*

Jonas: "ASHLEY WHERE THE HELL ARE YOU !?"

Ashley: "OVER HERE !!!"

Jonas: "!"

*Jonas walks towards the area where The Beast fell off. As he reaches this area he finds Ashley holding on to a piece of scrap metal.*

Jonas: "ASHLEY HOLD ON, I'LL LOOK FOR SOMETHING TO GET YOU UP HERE!"

Ashley: "JONAS....HURRY....I DON;T THINK...IT WILL HOLD...MUCH...!"



*Jonas grabs some wiring from the Reactor's circuits and ties it to the railing of the platform. Jonas throws the wire down and Ashley grabs onto it, he them holds on, as Jonas struggles to pull the wire up. As Jonas uses all of his strength his wounds open up, and he begins to bleed again. Jonas pulls hard, and Ashley manages to climb up. Once on the platform Ashley is shocked to see the damage, as well as a heavily injured Jonas who is struggling to see his friend.*

Ashley: "JONAS !!"

*Ashley rushes to Jonas and tries to help his friend from trembling again.*

Ashley: "Shit.....are you..."

Jonas: "Of course, that Akuma, did me in....but..its only a scratch..."

Ashley: "....Jonas.....you should.."

Jonas: "DON'T WORRY ABOUT ME!"

Jonas: "We got more important shit....Alexander...went all psycho and we lost The Nadleeh...."

Ashley: "!"

Ashley: "...Wha....we...where did he go..."

Jonas: "..We...we..were so close."

Ashley: "....Shut the hell up...We can still finish this mission..."

Jonas: "....fark the Mission..that bastard Alexander...."

*Jonas' wound reopens.*

Ashley: "....You brick head...."

*Ashley withdraws a Bottle of Water, and a Medical Bandage.*

Jonas: "....."

Ashley: "...Drink some of this...and let's wrap it..."

*The screen fades to Black, and Ashley wraps Jonas' wounds. When it refades, Ashley is drinking from his Water Bottle.*

Ashley: "Well...I better get going...."

*Ashley checks his Handgun, and picks up some Ammo from the ground.*

Jonas: "..What the fark do you think you're doing....?"

Ashley: "The Mission is not over......we have to return with all living members..."

*Ashley finishes the water bottle and begins to walk off.*

Jonas: "Where the hell are you going !!!"

Ashley: *Looks over his shoulder.* "Jonas....just stay there man...."

*Ashley runs off to follow Alexander and the screen fades to Black. When it resurfaces the Player will be able to control Ashley and must continue forward. Here one will notice many scratch and damage marks left by a sword, most likely Alexander's. They will continue forward for two more Maps, and then a cut scene will take place. The screen will fade, and reappear with The Larger Cloaked Figure in a dark room. He inserts a key into a small machine and air erupts from the machine. A glass container emerges and, The Larger Cloaked Figure touches it with his hand. However before he can turn the key, the Feminine Figure flies into the area followed by Alexander.*

Alexander: "LUCIOUS !!!"

*Alexander runs toward Lucious, but the Feminine Figure rushes to protect him, Alexander, quickly appears and reappears near Lucious. The Feminine Figure appears again to protect her Master, but Alexander slashes her sending her flying into some near by machines. Alexander is heavily panting.*

Lucious: "......."

Alexander: "DO NOT IGNORE ME !!!!"

Lucious: "....Little Master......"

Alexander: "DON'T CALL ME THAT !!!!"

*Alexander rushes towards Lucious and the two collide. Alexander's Katana presses against Lucious' Cloak which acts as a weapon.*

Lucious: "This tool...has its hatred consumed you too...?"

*Alexander and Lucious parry one another's attacks, and Alexander hurls many Fire Balls towards Lucious, whom represses them with a wave of his hand. Alexander soon, stabs his Katana into the ground and performs a string of hand seals. With that balls of fire materialize before him, and Alexander forces these Balls towards Lucious. They all connect, however as the smoke settles, Lucious is unscratched.*

Lucious: "Do you take me for a fool...Ellowsworth, was it not I whom possessed the greatest Craft Efficiency in The Order !?"

Alexander: *Draws his Katana* "..You...you are a Traitor....your foul mouth and monstrous figure....you devil...."

Lucious: ".....Do not come here to further question my path..young one...."

Alexander: "I have not....Lucious...I have come here...to kill you..."

Lucious: "I see....so The Order..has not forgotten about me...."

Alexander: "55 Civilians, 15 Exorcist, 1 Cardinal...you Lucious of Jerusalem shall never be forgotten, until your Sins are paid for in Blood."

Lucious: "Alexander...I did not come here to fight....I came to extend my life....I have to stay on this Earth a bit longer...God has a plan..."

Alexander: "DO NOT, Slander my Lord's name!!!"

Lucious: "........."

Alexander: "..DIE !!!!"

*Alexander launches at Lucious and prepares to attack, as he does, Lucious dodges, the attack, but Alexander has used the Double Image skill on Lucious. Lucious defends against Alexander's attack, and Alexander pushes off Lucious to prepare for another attack. The two continue this fashion of warping and clashing for 3 Times. After which Alexander gets angry and recklessly charges at Lucious. Lucious dodges the attack again, and Alexander begins swinging his Katana around, aimlessly, unable to even hit Lucious. And with the last strike, Lucious stops Alexander's Katana with his finger, and kicks Alexander in the stomach.*

Lucious: ".......If you wish to fight....do not take me lightly...."

Alexander: *Angry* "......"

Lucious: "I can feel him...him and you...you and Suzuka that is......."

Alexander: "........"

Lucious: "Suzuka.....what an old fool you have become.....you hold on to the past as if it is the present...."

*Flames begin to accumulate around Alexander, and Suzuka can be heard.*

Suzuka: "LUCIOUS YOU BASTARD !!! YOU SLY TOUNGED FOOL, ADOPTING THE POWER WE SO DISPISE...IS THIS YOUR FAITH !?"

Lucious: "......I did not "adopt"....it was "implanted"...and with it....life has grown ever..."

Suzuka: "I SHALL CUT YOUR THROAT !!!!"

Lucious: "Old fool....you have fallen from your grace.....for Uriel to see you now...."

Suzuka: "LUCIOUS !!!!!!"

Alexander: "Enough...Lucious is mine...."

Lucious: ".......Don't lie to yourself....to even put a scratch on me, you must "Invoke"...."

Alexander: "........."

Alexander: ("Suzuka....can you hear me....")

Suzuka: ("Boy, why do we let this fool talk.....he must be disposed of !!!")

Alexander: ("We shall...I shall kill him.....")

*Alexander bites his thumb and runs his blood along his blade.*

Alexander: "Burst Into Flames and Consume the Sky, Spirit of the Southern Realm, SUZUKA !!!!"

*As Alexander slides his hand over his katana, the blood lights into flames, and the old Katana reforms into a regal blade of fire.*

Lucious: "Come!"