TITLE SCREEN DISCRIPTION

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Alright, I want a custom title screen for my game, Garren Fables: The War of Two Worlds. It will be a game being played during the middle-ages. I don't care what the font is, only just so that Garren Fables is above and bigger than The War of Two Worlds. I'll explain the scene I want it in with a little descriptive writing...

The stuff in bold is what you draw/make. The rest of the stuff describes it.

It loomed over all the trees, towers, and beasts in the forest, seeming to glare down at us from it's collosal height. The pale blue gate had no doors, making it seem like an all-comsuming monster. We slowly stepped forward. After we had ventured a yard, we were consumed by a bright flash. We regained our sight, and we were shocked to find the gate was no longer leading nowhere, but to a yawning abyss. We could make out faint outlines in the darkness.Suddenly, I felt a great lurch. Everything but the gate turned to a blur..

There, all done. I hope THAT describes it.
Max McGee
with sorrow down past the fence
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I FOLLOWED YOUR INSTRUCTIONS VERY CLOSELY.

HERE YOU GO I HOPE THIS IS OKAY:

:o

Uh, I really, really appriciate the effort, but no. Perhaps you misunderstood my description.

  • I didn't want those discribing words on the picture.
  • When I wrote, a blur, I meant you could still tell those were trees.
  • The gate sort of matches my description, but the sides are too bulky, and a very, very important part of the gate is missing; the arch! You know, the top of the gate? Where is it?
  • The side are a bit too bulky. It might help to look at pictures of gates to understand how it looks like.

Again, I really appriciate that you listened to my request, and attempted to fufill it, but that's just not it.
Max McGee
with sorrow down past the fence
9159
# When I wrote, a blur, I meant you could still tell those were trees.

Suddenly, I felt a great lurch. Everything but the gate turned to a blur, making the forest seem like a splash of colors.
Oh Garren, you are just too funny!

We don't need a novelesque introduction to your game, just a barebones description of what you want.

IE]

- The title is Garren Fables
- The subtitle is The War of Two Worlds
- I want a blurred gate in a colorful forest background.

Yeesh.
author=kentona link=topic=2134.msg35566#msg35566 date=1222983596
Oh Garren, you are just too funny!

We don't need a novelesque introduction to your game, just a barebones description of what you want.

IE]

- The title is Garren Fables
- The subtitle is The War of Two Worlds
- I want a blurred gate in a colorful forest background.

Yeesh.
Eh, reverse the last two you said. It'd be like...
- I want a blurred forest background with a non-blurred (I'd appriciate a better wording suggestion) gate in it .

I do things a little differently, sorry. This'll help, but a TITLE SCREEN would also be appriciated!
author=Max McGee link=topic=2134.msg35561#msg35561 date=1222983088
# When I wrote, a blur, I meant you could still tell those were trees.

Suddenly, I felt a great lurch. Everything but the gate turned to a blur, making the forest seem like a splash of colors.
Ah.
Description is spelled with an "e." Also, please stop multiposting. It's annoying. And uh, stop saying "custom title screen" because that refers to something else.

It's my birthday today so I'm in a good mood:
Without gate:

With gate:
author=AznChipmunk link=topic=2134.msg35601#msg35601 date=1222989406
Description is spelled with an "e." Also, please stop multiposting. It's annoying. And uh, stop saying "custom title screen" because that refers to something else.

It's my birthday today so I'm in a good mood:
Without gate:

With gate:

Woh, dude. The first one is GREAT!!!! ;D Thanks!
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