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MAPS WEEKLY 2: THE MAPPENING

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Cap_H
DIGITAL IDENTITY CRISIS
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Magik, I find your map very good. I can't find any significant mistake (there is a broken tree behind one roof) and it offers us a nice route to take through the place.

Saigonhero, It has quite cozy atmosphere, but i would recommend to take a look at these auto-shadows. Next, I wonder whether it's a single building or two houses in a row. If it is a single house, it should have a joimt shadow on the right on terrace you can work with tilting. It doesn't make any sense to have so many signs on a single building either. I would prefer more windows.
author=Cap_H
Magik, I find your map very good. I can't find any significant mistake (there is a broken tree behind one roof) and it offers us a nice route to take through the place.


Thank you!!! I'm glad you liked it! Actually I thought that maybe I should have made the map a bit larger instead of that long... But it was too late to make everything from the beginning so i left it like that. Oh yeah, the tree, i didn't notice it! Thank you for telling me about it.
InfectionFiles
the world ends in whatever my makerscore currently is
4622
I love it, MagiK. Cozy and a perfect rural map. :)
author=InfectionFiles
I love it, MagiK. Cozy and a perfect rural map. :)


Thaaaaank you sooooo much!!! >u<
Glad you liked it!!! :)
InfectionFiles
the world ends in whatever my makerscore currently is
4622
author=Make_it_MagiK
author=InfectionFiles
I love it, MagiK. Cozy and a perfect rural map. :)
Thaaaaank you sooooo much!!! >u<
Glad you liked it!!! :)

^.^
@Cap: Wow! You really nailed it with the colors, man! I had to save the picture for my "Pixel Art Inspiration" folder. ^^

Here's a quickie I made to test out some new tiles.

LockeZ
I'd really like to get rid of LockeZ. His play style is way too unpredictable. He's always like this too. If he ran a country, he'd just kill and imprison people at random until crime stopped.
5958
I was unhappy with the southern half of my village, so I redid it. I think the shoreline works a lot better with some docks, and I took Cap_H's advice to move the plaza to the center of the map. Even though the docks don't really lead to anything, the southern half feels like it has a much better flow now, at least to me.



Old version for reference:
Ebeth
always up for cute art and spicy gay romance
4390
Whoa! Lots of entries! I'll offer feedback for each one tomorrow. I'm so glad so many people participated- lets keep it up!


WEEK TWO PROMPT

The prompt this week is dreamscape/surreal.

Now go make some maps & post them on here by next Sunday!
Cap_H
DIGITAL IDENTITY CRISIS
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@Luuishu, these came with the tileset. Personally I prefer softer shades. These new tiles look great btw. I really need to get back to drawing board and start working on my skills.
@LockeZ, I feel that it makes more sense now. Player would orientate himself better. Docks enhance it quite a bit.
@Luiishu535: i really like your map! Especially the palette you used. The art style could be simple but on the other hand very beautiful indeed! Love it!

@LockeZ: i think the new one is pretty good. It feels "fuller" than before and besides I like the docks really much!

@Ebeth: wow, you will give feedback to each of us?! Thank you! Btw this new prompt is wonderful! I love making dreamy/surreal maps! :)
@Cap_H thanks for the input. Yeah I completely forgot to look at the shadows. It was supposed to be one building. I also noticed I accidentally duplicated one of the signs. Must have happened because I was indecisive about whether to put the main sign on top or bottom.
LockeZ
I'd really like to get rid of LockeZ. His play style is way too unpredictable. He's always like this too. If he ran a country, he'd just kill and imprison people at random until crime stopped.
5958
Man, I can't even name a dreamscape/surreal area that I liked in any video game. Every example I can think of is either a regular ass area that's been palette swapped to purple, or tile barf with the wrong doodads intentionally tossed everywhere, or some variant of "walk through this door and now you're in outer space." I have no idea how I want to do this one.
Cap_H
DIGITAL IDENTITY CRISIS
6625
Let's skip it. It's time for a new theme. I would appreciete something modern-urban.
Frogge
I wanna marry ALL the boys!! And Donna is a meanc
18995
Something modern/urban would be very nice.
Ebeth
always up for cute art and spicy gay romance
4390


Sorry guys for missing the deadline and what was apparently a bum prompt :( Though if you made one I'd love to see it!

WEEK THREE PROMPT

The prompt this week is modern/city.

Now go make some maps & post them on here by next Tuesday! New prompt will still be on Sunday!
Ebeth
always up for cute art and spicy gay romance
4390
Alright- as promised here's my feedback for every entry for the first week!



@kory_tombs I like the gardens behind the houses & the worn down dirt paths! It makes it feel very lived in. My suggestions for improvement would to be have stuff that's going off the map. Right now everything is rather centered in the middle of the map which feels less natural. I would also move the second house up one tile, it feels a little cramped behind the other one right now.


@momeka Love the colors! The art style is very nice too. I only wish there were a couple more objects besides the skull outside the houses.


@altred I like the two distinct levels of the town and the way you handled all the foliage. All that nature looks great! I'd maybe move the tent away from the rest of the village, I think it'd look more interesting if it was more mysterious and secluded. Other than that I'd add more non nature tiles around the village- it feels a bit bare right now.


@everguard Love the fall colors and amount of detail! One logistic thing bugging me- how does that dude get out of his house to his backyard without going all the way around? That seems mighty inconvenient! Also how'd you harvest those pumpkins up on that ledge?


@Cap_H I love it! Very cute & nice relaxing colors- they're bright without being too over-saturated. I especially like the shape the river makes- it helps to break up the map a lot and creates a nice focal point for that tower.


@Make_it_Magik So lovely- it makes me wish it was a real place I could visit! I like the earthy colors, and the curved path through the town. Between the curved layout, the amount of details and the fact that part of the town is off the map it really feels believable.


@seiginohero I like all the lights on the trees! It makes it feel very welcoming. I would add more details to what you have on the map right now as it feels pretty empty. I'd also edit or nix those signs on the building, they feel wildly out of place with everything else and are bringing the whole map down with them.


@Luiishu535 I really like those tiles and the limited color pallet! I would move the old dead tree on the left down a little as it seems to be blending in to the trees behind it. Other than that it feels a little too symmetrical but that could just be a personal preference of mine.


@LockeZ Those fixes definitely helped a lot! I like the dock and the tiny boat. I'd maybe condense the town a little more- I feel like bringing the sides in together might result in a better flow. I'd also maybe darken the color of the tiles that make up the plaza and such. If they were browner I think they'd harmonize better with the other tiles.



Alright- whew. Thanks everyone for the awesome maps!
LockeZ
I'd really like to get rid of LockeZ. His play style is way too unpredictable. He's always like this too. If he ran a country, he'd just kill and imprison people at random until crime stopped.
5958
I made a modern city IN HELL.



Sorry if next week's theme was going to be hell.
Frogge
I wanna marry ALL the boys!! And Donna is a meanc
18995
Oh, the new theme is out. Didn't even see.

I'll try to make something if I have enough time ^^
LockeZ
I'd really like to get rid of LockeZ. His play style is way too unpredictable. He's always like this too. If he ran a country, he'd just kill and imprison people at random until crime stopped.
5958
LOCKEZ WINS, NEXT PLEASE

I guess nobody else wanted to make a city. I dunno, that's two themes in a row that people didn't want to do, and I don't think modern city was a bad theme. I wonder if this thread just needs more publicity?
InfectionFiles
the world ends in whatever my makerscore currently is
4622
Aw shit, I missed modern city? I maybe would've done that, still might!

But yeah, more publicity could be good!
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