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[RMVX ACE] PLEASE HELP ME PROOFREAD MY TUTORIAL
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EgyLynx
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CloseOh... that like game? Nice idea!
Well... Yeah, but many different colors (thinking at it looks pro is look nob... and player usually stop that play in that.. ) Usually?
Other is too long message page...... or too less time left them to read... (although is best somewhat near default?)
Sickles?
Well... Yeah, but many different colors (thinking at it looks pro is look nob... and player usually stop that play in that.. ) Usually?
Other is too long message page...... or too less time left them to read... (although is best somewhat near default?)
Sickles?
author=Tw0Face
The player receives the food immediately. After all Farmers are exhausted, it takes one day until they have recovered. Then you can harvest Food again.
Provided players have the appropriate number of sickles, of course. The simulation still functions as if the Farmers are working the entire day, as they are not available for other tasks. Though, I'm not 100% sure if Farmers have other tasks to perform, but, perhaps that is beside the point.
Tw0Face
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Nah, they're just able to harvest Food. That's their only purpose. :)
Now that you know more about the gameplay, would you change (or add) something to the tutorial text? Or do you think that it still covers the most important points?
Now that you know more about the gameplay, would you change (or add) something to the tutorial text? Or do you think that it still covers the most important points?
Right. To re-contextualize, we're talking about the tutorial for the clock. My current suggestion would be to alter the message about successfully stealing the lumber, add in the clock-message, then do the finisher. So, maybe something like...
...this?
Well executed, milord! We now have enough Lumber to build a Sawmill! Once we have trained Lumberjacks, we can produce our own Lumber.
Let us now call forth the clock! You will inevitably notice that time will pass only when you move, milord. Certain actions can only be performed during certain times of the day, or a certain number of times a day. We have already spoken of Villagers and Farmers on this point, but, there are certainly other examples.
You seem to be getting the hang of this, though, my advise will still be available, should you need it. Now, I ask you, milord, please build up this settlement, and many others, and save the country!
...this?
Tw0Face
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That seems just fine. Thanks a lot, Marrend. :) I also wish you a great start into the new year.
EgyLynx
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Well... put Marrend at text and Marrend put it much easier at read and... less boring?
Something else stress you mind,in that project, Tw0Face?
Something else stress you mind,in that project, Tw0Face?
