GAME STORY LEGACY OF SOULS NEED HELP!
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i need help writing my games story as i suck at writing if you can't tell:(
i just need this flowing better. i can't pay but i can give you credit in my game!
(Griffin’s village is attacked by bandits griffin seeks the false god)
(false god gives griffin ruby of Anderos to use but with the cost of life)
(ruby of Anderos used by griffin to defend his people but false god absorb griffins people within the ruby)
(the false god opens a portal used by the ruby to his homeworld and flees)
(griffin is left with the ruby of Anderos with no power and no hope he searches the world for help)
one lead is found in a book from a tomb of knights that served the false god in ancient times known as the knights of Anderos within that book is a sword that combined with the ruby of Anderos can repower the ruby but with the cost of one's life but with every foe defeated by the sword repowers the ruby of Anderos
Griffin arrives at flintstone village to meet a blacksmith to join forge a sword for the ruby of Anderos and learn to wield it
3 year and two month goes by and his training is nearly complete griffin goes fishing for a monster that’s been plaguing the waters of flint rock for years as he fights and kills the monster he suddenly hears screams as he races to the village but tragedy strikes everyone in the village is dead but one that tales griffin of an occult that killed everyone and of the great dragon of flint rock mountain she asked griffin to protect their god and offered herself as a reward as he declined her offer he told her he would protect the dragon for free as he fights his way in the depth of flint rock mountain he meets the dragon but it's too late as he has been corrupted by the occult and he is forced to slay the beast with the dragon dead the sword absorbs its life essence and drains griffins life but in his dying breath he calls out his sons name victor my boy avenge our people slay the false god!!...
i just need this flowing better. i can't pay but i can give you credit in my game!

(Griffin’s village is attacked by bandits griffin seeks the false god)
(false god gives griffin ruby of Anderos to use but with the cost of life)
(ruby of Anderos used by griffin to defend his people but false god absorb griffins people within the ruby)
(the false god opens a portal used by the ruby to his homeworld and flees)
(griffin is left with the ruby of Anderos with no power and no hope he searches the world for help)
one lead is found in a book from a tomb of knights that served the false god in ancient times known as the knights of Anderos within that book is a sword that combined with the ruby of Anderos can repower the ruby but with the cost of one's life but with every foe defeated by the sword repowers the ruby of Anderos
Griffin arrives at flintstone village to meet a blacksmith to join forge a sword for the ruby of Anderos and learn to wield it
3 year and two month goes by and his training is nearly complete griffin goes fishing for a monster that’s been plaguing the waters of flint rock for years as he fights and kills the monster he suddenly hears screams as he races to the village but tragedy strikes everyone in the village is dead but one that tales griffin of an occult that killed everyone and of the great dragon of flint rock mountain she asked griffin to protect their god and offered herself as a reward as he declined her offer he told her he would protect the dragon for free as he fights his way in the depth of flint rock mountain he meets the dragon but it's too late as he has been corrupted by the occult and he is forced to slay the beast with the dragon dead the sword absorbs its life essence and drains griffins life but in his dying breath he calls out his sons name victor my boy avenge our people slay the false god!!...
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