MORE SCHEIßE FROM CP

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LouisCyphre
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I decided that, for this project at least, the character was going to be stylized in a sort of street-esqe streamlining, but while I don't think it turn out anything like I anticipated, I can't say I'm not pleased with the results.


Yes, he's tall. He's also a guy. And yes, his nose is meant to be that big.


This one's a she. She's his girl from the start, and she's a year older than him. See that sword he's got? Her family heirloom, dating from the Civil War era.

Known errors (to be fixed in the next set of pics):
>His left shoe is a bit... wonky. Oops.
>Her right shin is a bit too think. Fixable.
>With his right biceps, the faint line you see inside the darker outline is where his arm is defined. The outline follows a bit of his hair. It's not terribly clear in the picture, though.
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Male:
Legs short.
The bottom and upper torso should be roughly equal in height.
The middle of the body is supposed to be crotch level.
Arms are just incorrect.
Shoulders skewed to the right.

The girl:
Boxes for shoulders.
Torso too long.
Arm posing not convincing.
One thing: Her shoulders are round, but is her shirt? :o
Save up money for a tablet. =)

Anyway, the basic structure for these is actually alright. There are plenty of issues however.

The guy: His legs appear to be too short compared to his upper body, or the pants are drawn badly. The bottom and upper torso should be roughly equal in height. Remember the middle of the body counting the head is the bottom of the hip (crotch level) and not the waist. His arms are simply incorrect either way you explain it, and his shoulders are skewed to the right. Odd facial structure.

The girl: Work on smoothing out the limbs. Women should be drawn with softer, rounder shapes, not boxes. Facial structure is better than the guy's. Her torso is too long. Arm posing is not convincing.
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