TITLE SCREEN

Hi everybody. I made this title screen here (well, actually just got a picture off of google and inverted it) and I'm not really happy with it. If anybody can help, it'd be greatly appreciated.

Something with a phoenix would grant bonus points.

I like it... But i don't think it'd work.
Edit: You still get bonus points.

Sadly... I'm not too sure about what i want. Something in the vibe of my old one would work. Sorry with the lack of guidelines.