TELL ME WHAT YOU THINK OF MY INTRO

I've begun working on a game recently, and I've gotten the database all squared away so that I can begin the actual work. As I started, I came up with what I think is a pretty sweet playable intro. By playable intro, I mean that the player plays through the majority of the events, kind of like 'Fear' and 'Call of Duty 2'. Tell me what you think.

(the intro ends when the screen turns totally white.)

Feedback is required appreciated, hence the name of the topic.

(Filefront's being slow right now. I'll have the link up as soon as I can.)