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"ARENA" A SNOW-PUNK, SCI-FI, GLADIATOR STORY

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I'm working on this just as a habit of writing a bit every day. It's a conversational, plain-clothes, personal sort of style. The world here is supposed to be filled with just the apathetic mechanics of a modern slave-based society. Our hero eventually becomes a gladiator. This has probably been done before but I haven't read anything like it, but then again I don't read much. C&C is appreciated.

CHAPTER 1
I remember having a headache. That's pretty much it. I wish I could tell you more, but everything before that is pretty much a blur, a cloud of shapeless memories with nothing to say about them. I remember having a really bad headache, rolling over, and puking my guts out. Some of whatever was in my stomach got lodged in my nasal cavity, is how bad it was. It was a violent bodily convulsion, a sort of loss of control where your muscles automatically tense and throw your head forwards so that you don't vomit all over yourself.
Then I remember cold. I remember being freezing cold. Not just a, “Oh Its sort of chilly out, I had better wear a sweater” kind of cold, but the kind that freezes your eyelids closed and crystallizes the air you breathe on your nose hairs. It makes your scalp hurt and your hairs freeze together. It bites at your skin and purses your lips, makes your teeth chatter to the point that they start to wear down. It swells your feet if they start to sweat. If your feet start to sweat then your feet start to freeze. I'm a couple of toes short now, because of how cold it was. Luckily, they were not the important toes.
I was lying, prostrate, weak and unable to move. It would take all my effort to turn my head and open my eyes, just to look across the inside of the steel case I was being carried in. I was tied down, like a piece of cargo strapped in for a bumpy ride. Why was it so cold? Someone had cut a hole in my sweater and put a tube in my arm, and there were some wires and pads strapped to my chest and head. I would weakly try to move and the cold steel of the needle would pierce deeper into a muscle, scrape against the bone. If it was on the surface, I wouldn't have felt it, but it was in deep. Whoever put it in there did a damn shitty job. I lied there and listened to the hum of outside machinery, and felt the vibrations of locomotion underneath my aching bones.
I open my eyes and turn my head every once and a while. I didn't have the strength to talk, but the two others I saw huddled up in the corner of the ice box would throw words at me everyone once in a while. I couldn't understand what they were saying. A thickly built, powerful looking bearded, graying man, and a twenty-something woman, blond. They were curled up, covered in each other's limbs, trying to keep warm.
It must have been hours. It's almost always shorter than you think it was when you are cooped up alone in a box like that, but it was, at the very least, hours. It was too cold to sleep, and I was too weak to get up and untie myself. Eventually the vibrations slowed and the machinery began to rev slower, sputter and stop. An airlock unsealed and a metal door swung open near my feet, and light poured into the compartment. A breath of warmer air entered the fridge. It was still freezing cold.
I was too tired to even open my eyes, and by this point I am fairly certain they were frozen shut. I felt the not-so-warm breeze flow in, and then heard the boots of a couple of men tromp past. From what I could tell, they picked up the man and woman, from whom I hadn't heard a sound in a while.
“Geez, its cold in here.”
“Enviro must have broke. We'll check it on the way back.”
“Uh, I think this one is dead.”
“Oh, shit. He was a big guy, too. We just won't tell the boss about that one.”
“What do I do with him? Just throw him in the garbage or something?”
“I guess.”
They shuffle about, and I hear the dragging of bodies and the clatter of unloading, and the wind outside. Its a while before they come back.
“We're going to have to unhook him.”
“Whatever. Just pull that shit out him and let's go.”
A couple quick yanks pull the wires off. Another one does it for the needle. I feel a warm ooze of blood come out of my arm after a shocking tear of cold steel against my bone. Thank god they pulled the needle out. I wondered why these two guys weren't being more graceful and gentle with human passengers.
They wheeled me out into the wind. It threw wet clumps of snow onto my face. A snowflake lands on my eye and starts to melt the ice on my eyelashes, the cold water beading over and around the fine hairs. I force it open, and the overexposure of the sun makes me wince.
“He's waking up.” I've been awake for hours. The other one pipes in to give me “something.” I hear a shuffle in a bag and then feel a prick on my neck as the injector let out a little puff. I started to feel a little less cold. Too bad I wouldn't be awake to enjoy it.

I woke up when my body was dropped onto a concrete floor and just about every bone in my body felt the impact. I was still weak, and managed to let out a little yelp, and roll over to move most of my aching body off the cold floor. The air in the room is stagnant, hot, stuffy, but the floor is ice cold.
One of the two voices from before echoed across the room, “That one is pretty strong but he's taken a bad hit to the head, lost a lot of blood, and I think he's sick. Probably just a really bad case of the flu or something.”
A woman replies, “Right. Give him a tat and we'll see if we can't fix him up before we put him on the block.”
“He seems like the kind who might run,” said the guy.
“Then drug him.” Not a warm and cuddly sort of lass, I guess.
I was still coddled up on the floor, trying to deal with burning feet, frost bitten skin that feels like its melting off, and a hole in my arm the size of a penny. Steel shanked boots stomped against the ground over to me and I got another injection. I was picked up and slowly my thoughts started to blur together. Voices began to echo incoherently. There was poison in my blood, I kept thinking. They've poisoned me. Why would they poison a sick guy like me? Why can't they just leave me alone?
For a while I was dragged by the arms by a couple of pairs of boots. My eyes stayed closed, but I was seeing multi-colored, antiseptic, and terrifying images of the man and the woman freezing to death in the box with me. He's dead, I remembered. She's wasn't, though.
Through the azure apocalyptic haze of the narcotic, I made sure to remember certain things as my knees start to throb by repeatedly being banged against the floor. I remember a number, 6-0-4-3-7, spoken by a woman with a soft voice. I remember them labeling me as an off-worlder and then, when they had finally set me down and I began to reel, they strapped a machine to my arm that branded me with a laser. It dug into my skin like a shovel.
The pain was enough to make me puke again. I lost control, turned my head, and threw up on my own sleeve. I apologized through a series of slurs to whoever was watching. Not very dignified, I imagine. Its amazing how through the thickest of narcosis you can still feel embarrassed. They let me sit for a minute, and I was thankful that I passed out again within a moment or two.

I stirred awake. I was in a bed, and a fairly comfortable one at that, albeit I was tied to the fucking thing. I had gained back a little strength, and so I opened my eyes to see a spectacled and bearded gentleman in a white coat, pulling a catheter out of my arm. He seemed friendly enough to do it gently and patch me up when he was done.
“You were in bad shape, son.” I don't bother to answer. I stare blankly at him and turn my head to stretch my neck, and my swollen skin burns against the fabric of the sheets.
“You've lost a couple toes from frostbite. You got lucky though. They're not important toes.” The bastard chuckles. “Your ears are pretty bad too, but they will heal up. You were severely dehydrated and had a pretty bad case of acconnosis.”
I still have no idea what acconnosis is. I was in a hospital or a clinic. The walls were white-painted brick, and there were bars on the windows. I looked down the row of about half a dozen empty beds and medical machines and saw that the one on the end had a girl in it.
“That's the girl who came in your lot, eh? Don't worry, she's not as bad as you are. She'll be okay. Maybe you'll get lucky and wind up in the same lot on the way out.”
I turned my head back up at the bearded gentleman, who is jotting something down on a chart. “We're going to keep you here for three more days. I think it would be best if we kept you under sedation until it's time for you to go.”
I wanted to plead with him not to drug me again, but I wasn't about to beg. Its not like I had much choice in the matter. I saw him pull out a needle and load it up with whatever it was that he was going to give me. I still had no real idea where I was or what I was doing there.

What I suppose was three days later, they roused me awake. I felt a lot better, like a healthy guy might feel on the worst hangover of his life, but still, it was a definite improvement. They had shaved me when I was asleep. A couple of old, stocky nurses got me to sit up, and then coaxed me into trying to stand, despite the fact that I was bare-ass naked. I let go of my modesty and dropped my feet out of bed. It was hard, and they burned weirdly when I stepped down without all my toes onto not-quite-healed stitching. They gave me a black woolen sweater and a knitted cap and some fatigue pants, underwear, socks, and boots to put on. Nice clothes, I suppose. I was really hungry.
The doctor walked down the aisle, stopping to push a couple buttons on the girl's monitor. She wasn't awake yet.
“Feeling okay?” he shouted from down the hall. I shrugged. I just wanted to get out of there. I fingered at the bandage on my right arm, where the laser had dug its mark into me.
“Well, if you can walk, come with me.”
It takes me a minute to gain the wherewithal to shuffle down the aisle while holding onto bedposts. I pass the blond girl, she's out like a light. Probably won't be getting up anytime soon. Her skin is frostbitten and her pretty face is all blistered. At the end of the hall and around the corner, a giant steel door barricaded us in. The doctor opened it with his keycard, and we entered a security chamber. A short black woman sat behind a desk with an x-ray machine.
“We're checking him out,” said the doc. “0-6-0-4-3-7.”
The security officer punched it into the computer. “He's not listed with a name.” The doc turned to me, “You got a name, son?” I stared blankly at him. If I had a name, I didn't remember it.
The doc chit-chatted with her, "He's an off-worlder, so I wouldn't be surprised if his DNA isn't in the database.”
The lady finished her imputation and I was shuffled through a series of anti-chambers to what looked like a waiting room. A middle-aged, tall, thick, blond and bearded man sat waiting for me. He stood to greet the doctor.
“How do you do, doctor?” he had a thick accent, I couldn't tell from where.
“Just fine,” the doc pulled out a pen and checked a couple things off on his clipboard. The viking smiled at him, “And how is he?”
“He was in rough shape but he's healing up. Just sign here.”
“Good, good. No, he looks good, aside from the skin.”
“Looks like you got a pretty good deal,” said the doc as the man scrawled his mark on the clipboard. “We don't get many off-worlders anymore.”
“Well, that's why Ichabod bought him.”
That's when I realized I had been sold into slavery. Could be worse, I thought.
Yeah, I made that up. :P Its sort of an arctic, proletarian, industrial, desolate, heavily survivalist, ____-punk sort of setting. Like Mad Max meets Blade Runner on Hoth. I like the tag.

Has anyone read it? Post something! I am bored! I need attention! Asdf!
Very cool way to start a story. I'm already wanting to read more :) I'm curious to find out all that was left unsaid! How long do you plan to make this?

The only thing I have to mention is that you switched tenses in a couple of parts. I'm a huge grammar freak, so I couldn't help but notice (At "A couple of quick yanks... " and "It takes a minute..."). There is also a couple of places to keep an eye on like using "She's" instead of "She". I know this is irrelevant to the writing, but there is nothing worse than being distracted from a story by grammar or type errors.

I really liked your descriptions and similes "Dug into my skin like a shovel" was awesomely gross.

Yeah, great work, I look forward to the rest :)
CHAPTER 2

I followed the viking about 100 meters outside the doors he helped me into a VTO1 at the landing pad. I sat in the back seat as he clamped down the hatch and prepped the nav for takeoff. My stomach grumbled loud enough for him to turn his head back and say, “We'll feed you once we get home. My name's Georges, by the way.”
The cockpit was stuffy and I fell asleep about five minutes into the flight. I woke up when I felt the ship land. “We're here.” The airlock hissed and Georges swung the hatch open. I hobbled out of the VTO, making the mistake of trying to jump down onto unhealed feet.
I took a look around at the complex Georges called home. It looked more like a prison than anything else. Georges led me inside and introduced me to a very large and muscle-bound fellow, who shackled my hands and feet. He rolled up my sleeve and tore the bandage off my arm, took a scanner and ran it over the scabby print. The goon squinted at the readout on the scanner's screen.
“Its the off-worlder. I think Pryce wanted to see him when he came in,” said Georges. He nodded goodbye to me and I was led into a lift and down a couple of fancy, wood-paneled halls, past empty desks and offices with their lights turned off. Must've been a weekend. We ended up in front of two tall, glass doors that led into a big office with a polished concrete floor. It was dark in there, despite the fact there was someone sitting center-stage, at a desk, working away on a flickering blue monitor and keyboard. He looked up when we entered, and straightened his back in his chair.
“Ah, you must be the new guy. I have to say that I don't usually meet acquisitions in person, but you are a bit of a special case then, aren't you?” He was tall, slim, with a bit of a long face and his hair slicked back. He had on a really nice suit. “I'm Adelaide Pryce, Operations Manager.”
We stood in silence for a beat after the introduction. I worked up the gall to say something. “Mister Pryce, where am I?”
“You don't know?”
“I hadn't asked, until now.”
“Oh, well, you're in the Office and Administration wing of the Harland Ichabod Corporation complex outside of Garenthal, Hallicarn.”
“And where is that?”
“...In Hallicarn.”
“No. What planet?”
“Niveon.” The name didn't ring a bell. But then if I couldn't remember my own name, how could I be expected to run an index of planets through my head.
“Uh-huh.” I took a look around the room and shook my chains a bit before looking up at him and saying bluntly, “So... how do I get out of here?”
He breathed a short, condescending sigh as he thumbed at the pen on his desk. “You need to understand something. There is no sentence, there is no visitation schedule, there is no parole, there is no time off for good behavior. You are not a prisoner, you are a slave. We own you. You the property of Harland Ichabod Incorporated. Your cell is your storage area, your purpose is your labor.”
I blinked vacantly at the floor in front of my feet. My shackled hands started to quiver and shook the chains that were sticking to my skin. He got up out of his desk and walked around the front to lean up against it.
“I run this complex. I decide who does what, who goes where, who gets fed, who gets clothes, who gets to shit, who gets to breathe. As long as you are here, you are mine.” He stood up and started pacing the room, “Having said that, there are some things you can expect from us. If you work hard, you'll be well fed. If you do what you're told and generally don't cause a fuss for us we'll leave you to your way. Most of us are not unreasonable. You'll be given a job and you'll be expected to do it. I know you're an off-worlder so this must be all sort of new to you.” I was still reeling from the past few days, and starving. I wasn't really taking it all in, at the time. He started a bit of an interrogation.
“What did you do before?”
“I don't remember.”
He looked me up and down, and said “You have a good body. Did you do athletics?”
“I don't know.”
“Where are you from?”
“I couldn't tell you.”
“Couldn't or won't?”
“Couldn't.” I almost said “both” but I decided this wasn't the kind of guy who would want to take a joke. He paced the floor, fingers tented and against his lips, looking over at me every once in a bit.
“How would you feel about killing another man?”
I shrugged. “It depends.”
“On what?”
“On the man, I suppose.” I worked up the nerve to ask something that I had been dying to know. “I'm really hungry. Are you going to feed me?”
“Yeah, you'll be processed and in the population before dinner time, don't worry.” He sat in his chair and spun around a couple times, put his feet up and grabbed his keyboard and dropped it onto his lap and plucked away at it. “I think we'll put you into Hydroponics, to build up your strength. After that, I'm thinking you'd make a good fit for E and P.”
“E and P?”
“Events and Performances.” There was a pause and he looked up at me as if he expected me to say something.
“I dunno how I feel about that.”
“Well, Mister...” He was waiting for my name. I said nothing. “You don't have to feel any way about it. You don't have a choice.”
He motioned to the entirely-too-large fellow behind me to take me for processing. After a scrub-down and a delousing, they gave me a gray woolen sweater and some thick pants and walked me down a hall to my cell. The iron bars slid open, and I saw a cot, a sink, a toilet, and up in the corner, a tiny window, snowed over from the outside. I took two steps in and they shut the cage behind me.
When you're the new guy anywhere, its always the same. You don't know anybody so the people who are first to come up and introduce themselves are either people who are far too friendly or those lacking in friends. Chow time was no real exception. They had us at tables in a giant cafeteria that looked more like an assembly line than an eatery. I really didn't care to make friends, I was too busy eating. For all the shit they put you through, they feed you well, I'll give 'em that. There was steak and potatoes and gravy, macaroni salad, fried chicken, tropical fruits of all kinds. I thought to myself that maybe these guys were spoiled if they ate like this every day. I stuffed my gullet to the point that when they waddled me back to my cell, I passed out nearly right away, but woke up at least three times during the night to drop cargo.

Come sunup, Pryce was standing outside the cell flanked by two toughs. I know now that this is not a courtesy he performs for everyone. “Get up, I'm going to show you Hydroponics.” I got up, got dressed and they let me out of the cell. They didn't shackle me this time. I guess he figured I wouldn't try anything with the two brutes following us.
“You really do need a name, Mack.” Pryce and I walked beside each other, down the aisle of iron bar doors.
“I wish I could help.”
“I guess we'll just call you Mack for now. It was my dog's name when I was a kid.”
“That's sentimental.”
“You're going to be a personal project of mine.”
“A pet, you mean?”
“Sort of.” We walked into a lift.
“I don't cuddle.” The doors closed on us.

Hydroponics is basically what it sounds like. There is a giant underground greenhouse, it must be miles long, filled with nurseries, stacks of plants and lights about 40 meters high, and long, narrow stretches for trees. Its hot and generally a bit humid down there. Pryce brought me to the foreman. “Our planter died of a stroke last week. He'd had the job for twenty-six years. He was as strong as an ox, he was.”
“This job is not so bad,” said Pryce. “Its hard work but it will get you in shape.”
“What do I do?”
“You're gonna plant trees. We've prepped about 40 miles of soil beds, and you just basically have to put the seedlings in the ground.”
The foreman interjected, “Firion makes robots that does this sort of thing but they are pretty expensive, and they are actually sort of slow compared to a well trained planter, who might do seven thousand trees a day, so we've always just used human labor.”
So they gave me shoulder bags and a shovel and for the next nine days I put fake trees into fake dirt so they could grow fake apples. It was really hard work, but I didn't see anyone all day except the foreman, and once in a while Pryce would come down and ask me how it was going. I usually said 'fine' without looking up. Those days run together. Work all day, chow time in the mess, and then back to bed. It didn't take long for me to adjust to the new balance on my feet, and the moist air was good for the frostbite. I ate well and slept well, and I felt healthy again by the end of it. In fact, I came back to my room at the end of the ninth day of planting to a note on my bed saying, “Tomorrow we're going to put you in the arena.”

Pryce met me the next morning much as he did the week before. We took the walk over to the lift, passing rows of men still asleep in their bunks. I decided to pick his brain as long as I had his attention.
“I haven't seen any women since I got here.”
“We keep females on different levels.” I processed what this meant.
“So these guys never have sex?”
“They don't need sex.” I guess he was right. If you work hard enough you don't even think about it, as long as you are kept busy. “Manual override” once in a while was enough to keep a man from going sick, I suppose.
“What about kids?”
“There are no kids here.” The thought depressed me a little.
“So how many people do you have here?”
“17 654 labor, 2 341 staff, 178 administration.”
“What do you guys do here again?”
“Lotsa things. We make shit.”
“What kind of shit?”
“Whatever we can sell. There was an opening in the shoe market in this sector so we turned one of our divisions to producing shoes last month.”
“What else?”
“Replaceable machine parts, mostly. We do hydroponics to keep labor fed, but we've been know to sell overstock of that as well.”
“Do you make a lot of money?”
“Yeah, I do.”
“I meant the facility.”
“Oh. Sometimes.”
“So where does Events and Performances fit into this?”
“Most of the operations on this planet have similar things for entertainment.”
“So I'm going to be an entertainer?”
“In a sense.”
“What do you mean?” Pryce looked over at me with a bit of a grin on his pale, conniving face. “There's lots of money in bloodsport in Garenthal. Lots of it. You're an oddity. You'll be a draw.”
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I don't read much.

This is wildly incompatible with being a writer.

Anyway, I will read/C&C this when an influx of freetime occurs. It sounds interesting.
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