HOW CAN AN RPG BE DENIED
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Most likely the reason your game got denied isn't the story itself but the presentation.
- You need to have at least 3 screen shots of different areas that do not include the Title or Game Over screen. The preferred file is png.
- The mapping needs to be at the very least average - check out some of the games on this site to see what is considered good.
- I think your biggest problem is spelling and grammar. The description of your game needs to be easily readable and understood, with all the pertinent information included. If you aren't sure what to write about just do a paragraph on the general plot and one on characters. That's usually deemed enough.
Take a look at other gamepages to get more ideas (the big GAMES link at the top of the page) and maybe ask for help if you still have trouble.
- You need to have at least 3 screen shots of different areas that do not include the Title or Game Over screen. The preferred file is png.
- The mapping needs to be at the very least average - check out some of the games on this site to see what is considered good.
- I think your biggest problem is spelling and grammar. The description of your game needs to be easily readable and understood, with all the pertinent information included. If you aren't sure what to write about just do a paragraph on the general plot and one on characters. That's usually deemed enough.
Take a look at other gamepages to get more ideas (the big GAMES link at the top of the page) and maybe ask for help if you still have trouble.
I get the feeling this is another roof house game.
I was worried about the new standards until I saw WIP lay it down with the screens, I think you should run the game by people and see what they say before resubmitting the thing.
And I'd play a game with demon rings and stuff as long as it's legible. I don't think it has anything to do with the story.
If I were to post on a foreign forum, I would spend hours if it really took that long for me to type a post that's clearly understandable in a different language. I will expect the same from the reverse.
I was worried about the new standards until I saw WIP lay it down with the screens, I think you should run the game by people and see what they say before resubmitting the thing.
And I'd play a game with demon rings and stuff as long as it's legible. I don't think it has anything to do with the story.
author=kentonaauthor=Yellow Magiccould be that english isn't his first language and that he is struggling with conveying his ideas.
more like obvious 10 year old is obvious 10 year old
If I were to post on a foreign forum, I would spend hours if it really took that long for me to type a post that's clearly understandable in a different language. I will expect the same from the reverse.
It takes years to absorb and learn all the nuances and grammatic rules and slang of a new language. I sometimes post in the french RM scene, and I am sure that, given the grammatical, spelling and contextual mistakes I make, I come off as a 10 year old.
i sometimes come off that way to alot of people
(maybe it's because they are actually not too far off!)
(maybe it's because they are actually not too far off!)
.please get in touch. i want you to judge and help me with my game its jamminthegreat@live.com if you know a way to get my game and test it let me know.
Just put the game in your locker so we can download it from there (if it's not too big)
author=kentona
It takes years to absorb and learn all the nuances and grammatic rules and slang of a new language. I sometimes post in the french RM scene, and I am sure that, given the grammatical, spelling and contextual mistakes I make, I come off as a 10 year old.
Yeah, but I have seen a lot of foreign posters here and their English is of a completely different calibre. In no language that I know of is it acceptable to just post endless run-on sentences. French people don't write a paragraph and think "These kooky English, why don't they ever use commas or periods?". It's possible English is his second language, but if that's the case I'd assume he isn't much better in his native tongue.
Maybe he's just foreign and 10.
I don't know, most foreign people I know in person speak and write English better than most native citizens. I know this because they show me letters and things, asking me to look over it worrying if what they write makes sense.
And those that aren't so skilled sound strange and bizarre, but they don't sound like they're 10.
And those that aren't so skilled sound strange and bizarre, but they don't sound like they're 10.
i'm not foreign i'm British. I didn't pay attention in english and i'm used to texting.As a result I don't use
proper gramma! I allso use run on sentence's. I admit. I'm working on this for my new game as a result of this.
Ill have my demo soon!
proper gramma! I allso use run on sentence's. I admit. I'm working on this for my new game as a result of this.
Ill have my demo soon!
























