WHAT DO YOU THINK ABOUT THE HISTORY OF GAME????
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EDIT: Wtf did i write on the title o-o???? I think i mixed the original with RE: AF and it ended like that xP
I am working on a new project, a traditional Rpg. But i dont know if the story is Ok... or jsut bad, can you give me an opinion??? if you need more info of what happens next (i wrote the entire story already xDDD) just ask
I am working on a new project, a traditional Rpg. But i dont know if the story is Ok... or jsut bad, can you give me an opinion??? if you need more info of what happens next (i wrote the entire story already xDDD) just ask
Another creation story... Why can't there just be no intro story and instead the player finds out what happened?
*EYES POP*
wait a second whoa what's with the high-quality FMV?
Did you make it yourself or is it royalty free public domain stock clips type deal?
Anyway, I agree with Radnen's general feelings about expositional crawls. What I read seemed fairly generic, and it's probably a bit early for feedback honestly. But I have to say the writing quality is a treat compared to that of your posts.
: )
wait a second whoa what's with the high-quality FMV?
Did you make it yourself or is it royalty free public domain stock clips type deal?
Anyway, I agree with Radnen's general feelings about expositional crawls. What I read seemed fairly generic, and it's probably a bit early for feedback honestly. But I have to say the writing quality is a treat compared to that of your posts.
: )
hahahahaha xDDD yeah, i think is because the first thing that i did was create the plot and story (this was, in fact, my first project. But i scrapped it cus it was soooooooooooo bad)
Radnen, yes, this is the creation history. The story of my game is pretty long, and the game itself is long :
EDIT Really dont know, i jsut searched a random Big Bang video about big bang on youtube xDDDD
or are you talking about the tittle screen????
Radnen, yes, this is the creation history. The story of my game is pretty long, and the game itself is long :
Well, you opened the spiler so XD
Short history: The other Highs (oh, true, the people of the High era are angels) tried to stop Xynox/orfeo , but they couldnt cause xynox was too powerful. In a last attemp attemp an high called kristya sacrificed himself to stop Xynox (another important point. When krystia did that, he didnt die, he lost his wings, the most appreciated thing for an angel, thats how the Humans were created). With the help of the Other highs, they sealed Xynox on the world, and then they divided it into 6 different worlds (another spoiler xD 7, not 6, the seventh world is the lost world, the world of Xynox). then, each high were sent to a world to custody Xynox.
Short history: The other Highs (oh, true, the people of the High era are angels) tried to stop Xynox/orfeo , but they couldnt cause xynox was too powerful. In a last attemp attemp an high called kristya sacrificed himself to stop Xynox (another important point. When krystia did that, he didnt die, he lost his wings, the most appreciated thing for an angel, thats how the Humans were created). With the help of the Other highs, they sealed Xynox on the world, and then they divided it into 6 different worlds (another spoiler xD 7, not 6, the seventh world is the lost world, the world of Xynox). then, each high were sent to a world to custody Xynox.
EDIT Really dont know, i jsut searched a random Big Bang video about big bang on youtube xDDDD
or are you talking about the tittle screen????
LockeZ
I'd really like to get rid of LockeZ. His play style is way too unpredictable. He's always like this too. If he ran a country, he'd just kill and imprison people at random until crime stopped.
5958
Don't start the game with mythology. Start it with characters.
I think this is well done enough to leave as-is. But put it later in the game, when it becomes necessary to know.
I think this is well done enough to leave as-is. But put it later in the game, when it becomes necessary to know.
author=Max McGee
Both.
I think 'Highs' might not be the best translation. Up to you, though.
No, is a poetical name, in Spanish i call them "Altos", thats why i translated it like "Highs". (Calling them Angels would have been too generic XD)
The main menu of the game have a Great Particle efect as background ( A little bit laggy, but it looks mad cool XD)
EDIT: Lockez, after the "this is how the high era ..." the gameplay is gonna start:
Another spoiler XD
You play as kristya ;D Thats why i need to explain the mitology, because this is jsut the beginning, Kristya is not the main character. The game is going to start in a modern World.
LockeZ
I'd really like to get rid of LockeZ. His play style is way too unpredictable. He's always like this too. If he ran a country, he'd just kill and imprison people at random until crime stopped.
5958
I would continue to use the term Alto in the English version, actually.
Others might disagree, but the perceived quality of a story lies in how you present it. That said, your presentation is great. :) Not sure if a huge mountain of text and names is a great thing to plop down in the non-interactive beginning of your game, though.
Yeah, i am not going to to kill my players with words XDD This is the official intro now (becuase it hink it looks goods XD). inmediately after this you start playing as a high. The details and the others thing are going to be explained later in the game.
I am having problem with the Animations.... Anyone KNOWS how to edit them????? I think they are awful :S
Awesome looking intro, Felipe. I was kind of blown away by the sudden animation you had there and was wondering how you did that. I'm guessing it's a script to run movies in your game? Looks good, keep at this.
Instead of just text, make an option that allows for text to show, and another that does voice overs. This way, it would add more 'quality' so to speak to it. In my opinion.
If you need people for voices, go to voiceactingalliance.com/forum
If you need people for voices, go to voiceactingalliance.com/forum
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