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Revenge is horror and mystery RPG game.
Story:
Yuri, a 18 years old girl, seems normal but everything all around her looks abnormal. The world became strange to her. She doesn't remember a single thing about her past. She only remembers her mother who everyday stays by her side and looks after her in the hospital. The question is why she is in the hospital! What happened to her? Her mom said that was an accident according to her and doctor's opinion. But no one knows what kind of accident was that. Will the girl be able to remember everything?
Contents:
Horror Scenes
Creepy Sounds
Blood
Darkness
Jump Scares
Violent Pictures
Quote:
"One day I am gonna hurt you. I promise."
Characters:
Yuri
Ben Mitsomonu
Nirou Kazama
Miura Lin
Nova Kayra
Sofia Sufi
Mrs. Minami Yuna
To know all the mysteries hidden in the story, play the game.
(Full game will be available soon)
Revenge is horror and mystery RPG game.
Story:
Yuri, a 18 years old girl, seems normal but everything all around her looks abnormal. The world became strange to her. She doesn't remember a single thing about her past. She only remembers her mother who everyday stays by her side and looks after her in the hospital. The question is why she is in the hospital! What happened to her? Her mom said that was an accident according to her and doctor's opinion. But no one knows what kind of accident was that. Will the girl be able to remember everything?
Contents:
Horror Scenes
Creepy Sounds
Blood
Darkness
Jump Scares
Violent Pictures
Quote:
"One day I am gonna hurt you. I promise."
Characters:
Yuri
Ben Mitsomonu
Nirou Kazama
Miura Lin
Nova Kayra
Sofia Sufi
Mrs. Minami Yuna
To know all the mysteries hidden in the story, play the game.
(Full game will be available soon)
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TheCrimsonValley
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CloseSo I decided to play through the demo and I wanted to share some of my thoughts on the game so far. Considering this is only a demo I'm leaving a comment rather than a rated review ^^.
The character sprites are kind of a nice touch I have to say right of the bat, it is really nice to see that you've decided to use half body pictures rather simple engine pictures.
On the flip side, I have to say that the maps are a tad too enormous. The hospital room feels like the size of a small flat to be honest. I don't know if this is your first game published or not but I do remember that I used to make this mistake when I began too! Just suggesting maybe making the maps a tad smaller in either this game or the next.
Also the story feels a little on the nose in the way it is told. Everything happens so sporadically and a lot of it is only told through text such as the "she awoke by a noise". Show don't tell would be a good approach, instead of saying so, why not show her waking up with a noise sound effect? Just a suggestion.
I do see that this might become really good and I will play the full release once it hits the market but I do hope that you can take some of the things I've said into consideration.
Best of luck mate!
The character sprites are kind of a nice touch I have to say right of the bat, it is really nice to see that you've decided to use half body pictures rather simple engine pictures.
On the flip side, I have to say that the maps are a tad too enormous. The hospital room feels like the size of a small flat to be honest. I don't know if this is your first game published or not but I do remember that I used to make this mistake when I began too! Just suggesting maybe making the maps a tad smaller in either this game or the next.
Also the story feels a little on the nose in the way it is told. Everything happens so sporadically and a lot of it is only told through text such as the "she awoke by a noise". Show don't tell would be a good approach, instead of saying so, why not show her waking up with a noise sound effect? Just a suggestion.
I do see that this might become really good and I will play the full release once it hits the market but I do hope that you can take some of the things I've said into consideration.
Best of luck mate!
LamiaJerinLJ
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author=TheCrimsonValley
So I decided to play through the demo and I wanted to share some of my thoughts on the game so far. Considering this is only a demo I'm leaving a comment rather than a rated review ^^.
The character sprites are kind of a nice touch I have to say right of the bat, it is really nice to see that you've decided to use half body pictures rather simple engine pictures.
On the flip side, I have to say that the maps are a tad too enormous. The hospital room feels like the size of a small flat to be honest. I don't know if this is your first game published or not but I do remember that I used to make this mistake when I began too! Just suggesting maybe making the maps a tad smaller in either this game or the next.
Also the story feels a little on the nose in the way it is told. Everything happens so sporadically and a lot of it is only told through text such as the "she awoke by a noise". Show don't tell would be a good approach, instead of saying so, why not show her waking up with a noise sound effect? Just a suggestion.
I do see that this might become really good and I will play the full release once it hits the market but I do hope that you can take some of the things I've said into consideration.
Best of luck mate!
First of all thank you for sharing your thoughts. Actually this is my first game. I was so curious for releasing my games' demo that I had submitted it as soon as I prepared it. I know that hospital room size is bit enormous. That's why I have decided I will do map size smaller in future in this game.
Actually I realized it by myself after submitting my demo to be honest.:D
Right now I am focusing on the game and its storyline properly not to do any minor mistakes.
I will obviously consider your thoughts.
And again thank you for your suggestion. ^_^
Mystyk
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Hey, I just played this and noticed a few things:
1. After they are teleported back to the entrance to go into the hospital, if I try to go home without going in to the hospital (so go to the map with the houses), I can't go back to the hospital.
2. The edges of the sprites were not always smooth, sometimes they just looked pixelated (or how to say that...).
Also, even though it was a demo I thought it was short even for a demo (but that might be just me).
It's not bad so far, I like horror rpg maker games, so good luck!
1. After they are teleported back to the entrance to go into the hospital, if I try to go home without going in to the hospital (so go to the map with the houses), I can't go back to the hospital.
2. The edges of the sprites were not always smooth, sometimes they just looked pixelated (or how to say that...).
Also, even though it was a demo I thought it was short even for a demo (but that might be just me).
It's not bad so far, I like horror rpg maker games, so good luck!
LamiaJerinLJ
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author=NoBody13
Hey. I played the demo and it's pretty good. I can't wait for the full version :)
Thank you for playing and for your nice comment. :)
A quote for you: ;)
Patience is not the ability to wait,
but the ability to keep a good attitude while waiting.
:D
LamiaJerinLJ
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author=Mystyk
Hey, I just played this and noticed a few things:
1. After they are teleported back to the entrance to go into the hospital, if I try to go home without going in to the hospital (so go to the map with the houses), I can't go back to the hospital.
2. The edges of the sprites were not always smooth, sometimes they just looked pixelated (or how to say that...).
Also, even though it was a demo I thought it was short even for a demo (but that might be just me).
It's not bad so far, I like horror rpg maker games, so good luck!
Yeah. I know. I fixed that after submitting demo.
In full version you will not find this problem or any other problems like that. I will be more careful and I will do my best. :)
By the way thank you and hope you will play the full version when it will be released. :)
I like your game. To be the first game is fine. It reminds me a Little of the rpg game `Paranormal Syndrome´ (maybe because of the paranormal theme :)
I think the characters are correct and adequate for the game. The story is also interesting. I want to know more about Yuri´s story.
About the problems during the game I didn´t find anything. But during a second playing there is a part when you are with Ben where you can go from the map of the houses to the fields map.
At first it is not a problem, but once you enter into the map you can´t go back and you have to leave the game and re-enter again.
It´s not a serious problem, but I think I should mention it.
Sorry for my gramar. English is not my first lenguaje.
I would like to ask if someone has told you to translate your game into a language. I am starting to translate games, but I would like to translate your demo into Spanish, if you give me permission.
Good luck with the game.
I think the characters are correct and adequate for the game. The story is also interesting. I want to know more about Yuri´s story.
About the problems during the game I didn´t find anything. But during a second playing there is a part when you are with Ben where you can go from the map of the houses to the fields map.
At first it is not a problem, but once you enter into the map you can´t go back and you have to leave the game and re-enter again.
It´s not a serious problem, but I think I should mention it.
Sorry for my gramar. English is not my first lenguaje.
I would like to ask if someone has told you to translate your game into a language. I am starting to translate games, but I would like to translate your demo into Spanish, if you give me permission.
Good luck with the game.
LamiaJerinLJ
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author=WonderlyneWorld
I like your game. To be the first game is fine. It reminds me a Little of the rpg game `Paranormal Syndrome´ (maybe because of the paranormal theme :)
I think the characters are correct and adequate for the game. The story is also interesting. I want to know more about Yuri´s story.
About the problems during the game I didn´t find anything. But during a second playing there is a part when you are with Ben where you can go from the map of the houses to the fields map.
At first it is not a problem, but once you enter into the map you can´t go back and you have to leave the game and re-enter again.
It´s not a serious problem, but I think I should mention it.
Sorry for my gramar. English is not my first lenguaje.
I would like to ask if someone has told you to translate your game into a language. I am starting to translate games, but I would like to translate your demo into Spanish, if you give me permission.
Good luck with the game.
Thank you for playing demo.
About the problem that you have mentioned is already discussed in previous comment.
I forgot to fix it. But after submitting game, I had fixed it. You will not find this problem in the full version game.
Right now, I can't give you permission for translating this demo. After the completion of this game, I will think about it. :)
I tried the demo and I think it's very interesting, it has also a very nice dark atmosphere. Subscribed!
(Sorry for my bad English)
(Sorry for my bad English)
LamiaJerinLJ
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author=cutiesbae
I tried the demo and I think it's very interesting, it has also a very nice dark atmosphere. Subscribed!
(Sorry for my bad English)
Thanks for trying it. ^_^
That doesn't matter. My English isn't also good as English isn't my language. :)
I played the demo and found myself surprisingly interested in the story!
Also a question about the development of the game: Are you interested in someone to help you with the dialogues English? English isn't my first language but I consider myself to be pretty fluent in it and could lend you a hand.
Also a question about the development of the game: Are you interested in someone to help you with the dialogues English? English isn't my first language but I consider myself to be pretty fluent in it and could lend you a hand.
LamiaJerinLJ
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Thanks Surfsushi for your concern. :)
Recently I am working on those mistakes. I fixed them. Now I believe everything is fine and will be fine.
Recently I am working on those mistakes. I fixed them. Now I believe everything is fine and will be fine.
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