The Magic Pot
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  • Added: 04/15/2019 11:48 AM
  • Last updated: 12/25/2024 01:02 PM
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Frogge
I wanna marry ALL the boys!! And Donna is a meanc
18995
04/15/2019 03:11 PM
It should be "startle" actually, not "startled." "I'm sorry, Miss" may also sound a bit more phonetically pleasing.

The map's real sweet though. Maybe a tad dark, but I'm liking the general atmopshere.
NoBody13
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04/15/2019 05:12 PM
author=Frogge
It should be "startle" actually, not "startled." "I'm sorry, Miss" may also sound a bit more phonetically pleasing.

The map's real sweet though. Maybe a tad dark, but I'm liking the general atmopshere.

Oh right! I didn't notice the mistake, my bad haha. Is it really too dark? Anyways, thanks for the correction.
Frogge
I wanna marry ALL the boys!! And Donna is a meanc
18995
04/15/2019 05:34 PM
author=NoBody13
author=Frogge
It should be "startle" actually, not "startled." "I'm sorry, Miss" may also sound a bit more phonetically pleasing.

The map's real sweet though. Maybe a tad dark, but I'm liking the general atmopshere.
Oh right! I didn't notice the mistake, my bad haha. Is it really too dark? Anyways, thanks for the correction.


A little bit, yeah. I would make the dark areas a bit brighter, or if not, I would at least add a couple more light sources.
NoBody13
534
04/15/2019 05:40 PM
author=Frogge
author=NoBody13
author=Frogge
It should be "startle" actually, not "startled." "I'm sorry, Miss" may also sound a bit more phonetically pleasing.

The map's real sweet though. Maybe a tad dark, but I'm liking the general atmopshere.
Oh right! I didn't notice the mistake, my bad haha. Is it really too dark? Anyways, thanks for the correction.
A little bit, yeah. I would make the dark areas a bit brighter, or if not, I would at least add a couple more light sources.

Alright, I'll fix it then. Thanks for the advice.
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