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The beginning of the game.
  • ChrisMastery
  • Added: 01/10/2020 08:32 PM
  • Last updated: 12/28/2024 04:06 AM
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Liberty
RTP Princess
24266
01/13/2020 05:00 AM
I recommend getting a natural english writer/speaker to take a look at your dialogue. This should probably read something more like:
"This teleportation was so disastrous, it was like an albatross landing."
ChrisMastery
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01/19/2020 09:16 PM
author=Liberty
I recommend getting a natural english writer/speaker to take a look at your dialogue. This should probably read something more like:
"This teleportation was so disastrous, it was like an albatross landing."


Thanks for the tip, my friend ^^
I'll take a look into this.
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