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1st archived artistic content creation thread. For the active thread, click here.
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Mute
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Closeauthor=BDFalcon
Decided to post this character, since I'm seeing some headway with them. I did sorta post her earlier, but it was mostly just second handedly.
Presenting Tsuchitsuru Airi!
-snip-
Don't wanna spoil it and stuff. Of course, revealing more might help the community to give me suggestions... Meh.
Airi is really adorable, and I have a bit of a sweet spot for shy girls, so bonus points. ^-^
As for the other point, if you want suggestions, feedback and testing, you can get like one or two people you trust to give feedback and testing before the character is released to the public. It definitely helps to have someone else's point of view.
Don't we already have Akari and Shoko to fill the 'shy girl with issues' niche? I dunno. I guess it's fine, since Airi's issues are physical in nature?
Mute
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If you happen to be in charge of the ID list (I believe the people in charge were Dozen, Marrend & flowerthief), I would like to reserve the IDs 51 and 63. That's Kimura Shizuka and Kimura Sachiko respectively.
You require proof of work, right? I hate to spoil a little bit, but there's the descriptions on some previous page, my girls' tachies, and a snippet of story below.
May I have those IDs reserved? If not, that's fine..
You require proof of work, right? I hate to spoil a little bit, but there's the descriptions on some previous page, my girls' tachies, and a snippet of story below.
ID = 0
(She starts humming some unrecognizable tune. It's both calm and somber.)
ID = 51
Mmmm..hmm..
ID = 0
(As she turns her head toward the window, she asks..)
ID = 51
What kind of cloud do you like?
ID = 0
I dunno. I don't think about clouds very often.
ID = 51
You should, a little bit. They're nice. Cloudgazing helps relax one's eyes, and..
Well, it helps me gather my thoughts.
ID = 0
If I had to say, I guess standard fluffy clouds, the ones that look like cotton candy and don't come with rain.
ID = 51
Cumulus, you mean?
ID = 0
I don't remember the types of clouds. That was fourth grade or something.
ID = 51
You're referring to cumulus clouds.
I like nimbus clouds.
ID = 0
What kind of cloud was that?
ID = 51
Like.. low-level clouds that cause rain and snow.
ID = 0
Ah.
You do like rain.
ID = 51
OTHER2
Snow is great too.
(She starts humming some unrecognizable tune. It's both calm and somber.)
ID = 51
Mmmm..hmm..
ID = 0
(As she turns her head toward the window, she asks..)
ID = 51
What kind of cloud do you like?
ID = 0
I dunno. I don't think about clouds very often.
ID = 51
You should, a little bit. They're nice. Cloudgazing helps relax one's eyes, and..
Well, it helps me gather my thoughts.
ID = 0
If I had to say, I guess standard fluffy clouds, the ones that look like cotton candy and don't come with rain.
ID = 51
Cumulus, you mean?
ID = 0
I don't remember the types of clouds. That was fourth grade or something.
ID = 51
You're referring to cumulus clouds.
I like nimbus clouds.
ID = 0
What kind of cloud was that?
ID = 51
Like.. low-level clouds that cause rain and snow.
ID = 0
Ah.
You do like rain.
ID = 51
OTHER2
Snow is great too.
May I have those IDs reserved? If not, that's fine..
Mute
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author=dewelarHuh. The FAQ on the website says those are both vacant. Is it outdated?
51 and 64 are both already reserved.
Anyway, let's try 53 and 67.
dewelar
627
author=Muteauthor=dewelarHuh. The FAQ on the website says those are both vacant. Is it outdated?
51 and 64 are both already reserved.
Must be - my ISP doesn't let me view the website for reasons nobody has yet figured out. I think Marrend is the only one who updates that these days. Anyway, you should probably use the list at the top of the (technical) board for future reference.
Anyway, let's try 53 and 67.
Both available, and I have updated the aforementioned list accordingly.
Mute
50
author=dewelar
-snip- Anyway, you should probably use the list at the top of the (technical) board for future reference.
Right, I'll do that. sorry I didn't notice this was the creative board!
Thanks, dewelar. ^-^
Eh? I've totally got ID 64 filled out on the official site! Not so-much 51, though. Now 53 and 67 too.
There is this too. Geeze, that's lazy.
author=official site FAQ
*Content edited/updated by Marrend on 1 August 2013
There is this too. Geeze, that's lazy.
BDFalcon
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author=Marrend
Don't we already have Akari and Shoko to fill the 'shy girl with issues' niche? I dunno. I guess it's fine, since Airi's issues are physical in nature?
Well, my not really intending to 'fill a niche' aside, it is entirely possible for there to be more than two shy/nervous/troubled girls in a single school, no? ^.^ Besides, I don't know about Shoko because I haven't played any custom content yet (will be remedied soon), and I know you can't really tell because I haven't shown anything regarding her personality, but I know for a fact that Airi's shy is a largely different flavor from Akari's. -Side Note- Hurray for run-on sentences and excessive commas! :D
author=BDFalcon
Besides, it is entirely possible for there to be more than two shy/nervous/troubled girls in a single school, no?
This... is a fair point.
author-BDFalcon
I don't know about Shoko because I haven't played any custom content yet (will be remedied soon)
Oh, hey, I recently updated Uchioniko too! I'm more than a bit worried about the new scene with Ruri/Izumi/Shoko, so I hope that you get it. Should you not, well, you can look at the code anyway?
Render
0
Hello!~
You all seem like lovely people that can direct me in the right direction of making a -successful- custom character. This is a great game, and it interested me into wanting to make a character. Also, I'd just like to note that I have experience in writing, and I'm aiming for my character to be -flawed- not perfect.
Her name is Megumi Nakamura, I'd like to reserve ID 94 for her. But without further ado, I'd like to paraphrase the story I have so far. She's returning to the players school after moving various times. However, she did live in the area, and was acquaintanced with Miki as a first year student (Note: Megumi is a second year student currenty).
Now for personality, she's very inattentive and doesn't aspire for much (perhaps "realistic" in a sense?). I'm planning for her to have a dry wit at times, and, at some points be a little irritable.
So that's basically what I've got so far. Please constructively criticize, if you will.
You all seem like lovely people that can direct me in the right direction of making a -successful- custom character. This is a great game, and it interested me into wanting to make a character. Also, I'd just like to note that I have experience in writing, and I'm aiming for my character to be -flawed- not perfect.
Her name is Megumi Nakamura, I'd like to reserve ID 94 for her. But without further ado, I'd like to paraphrase the story I have so far. She's returning to the players school after moving various times. However, she did live in the area, and was acquaintanced with Miki as a first year student (Note: Megumi is a second year student currenty).
Now for personality, she's very inattentive and doesn't aspire for much (perhaps "realistic" in a sense?). I'm planning for her to have a dry wit at times, and, at some points be a little irritable.
So that's basically what I've got so far. Please constructively criticize, if you will.
I swear that Miki in her second year.
*checks*
Yep, she is. Well, okay, so, they met each other last year, got acquainted, but Megumi needed to move again. When she comes back, reconnecting with Miki sounds like a possible backdrop for the introduction scene.
The only other comment I wish to make at this time is that I'm interested in this dry wit that you speak of.
*checks*
Yep, she is. Well, okay, so, they met each other last year, got acquainted, but Megumi needed to move again. When she comes back, reconnecting with Miki sounds like a possible backdrop for the introduction scene.
The only other comment I wish to make at this time is that I'm interested in this dry wit that you speak of.
Mute
50
author=RenderWelcome, Render. :>
Hello!~
You all seem like lovely people that can direct me in the right direction of making a -successful- custom character. This is a great game, and it interested me into wanting to make a character. Also, I'd just like to note that I have experience in writing, and I'm aiming for my character to be -flawed- not perfect.
I have two comments. First, she looks a whole lot like a taller, darker-haired Akari. Second, realism doesn't always mean pessimism. That depends on the reality she faces.
Anyway, I'm looking forward to reading Megumi's story. There isn't really that much to criticize right now, so I'll just say that you should take your time to make quality content.
Dozen
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Pictured: Marrend's dry wit.
....Nobody called me that before...
Any case, welcome to the Heartache forums. I'm Custom Content Overseer Tom 'Dozen' Ambrose, professional devil's advocate, happy to bash YOU and whatever route you put on the table. And, for reasons not foreclosed I was actually hired to do it.
'parently I'm that good. Or so annoying that flowerthief would rather put the weight of the community on top of me instead of dealing with them and me at once. Wonder which one is it...
I expect a close to perfect ROUTE, which is admittably easier with a flawed character. Please do your best.
About that, dewelar, I'll be with you in private about the changes in Noriko's route.
'til then we part ways. Overseer off.
You all seem like lovely people that can direct me in the right direction of making a -successful- custom character. This is a great game, and it interested me into wanting to make a character. Also, I'd just like to note that I have experience in writing, and I'm aiming for my character to be -flawed- not perfect.
....Nobody called me that before...
Any case, welcome to the Heartache forums. I'm Custom Content Overseer Tom 'Dozen' Ambrose, professional devil's advocate, happy to bash YOU and whatever route you put on the table. And, for reasons not foreclosed I was actually hired to do it.
'parently I'm that good. Or so annoying that flowerthief would rather put the weight of the community on top of me instead of dealing with them and me at once. Wonder which one is it...
I expect a close to perfect ROUTE, which is admittably easier with a flawed character. Please do your best.
About that, dewelar, I'll be with you in private about the changes in Noriko's route.
'til then we part ways. Overseer off.
dewelar
627
author=Dozen
...I'll be with you in private...
*Trips over self while trying to barricade the door, nearly breaking several major bones*
...
Don't SCARE me like that!
author=dewelarauthor=Dozen*Trips over self while trying to barricade the door, nearly breaking several major bones*
...I'll be with you in private...
...
Don't SCARE me like that!
I'm not sure if I should just quirk my eyebrow at this or what.
Kevincalanor
519
Hello again guys ^^
For the new peopleand those that forgot who am I, I'm Kevin Calanor, unstable modder from DarkComet Labs, almost finished my Custom character "Eliza Yamisaki" last year, but unintentionally aborted the develeop during beta cause my crappy English :p
Pleased to meet you :3
On the time I was off I've managed to get someone to "translate" my story, so expect Eliza to be back soon, I just need to re-check the things up and maybe change a thing or two, (images and sounds only. I'll contaminate the text if I touch it again), maybe change ID's to a vacant one too.
That's all for now, over and out. ;)
For the new people
Pleased to meet you :3
On the time I was off I've managed to get someone to "translate" my story, so expect Eliza to be back soon, I just need to re-check the things up and maybe change a thing or two, (images and sounds only. I'll contaminate the text if I touch it again), maybe change ID's to a vacant one too.
That's all for now, over and out. ;)
Right. Eliza. The lead "WolfPack" character. I definitely recall swiping Rachel's theme (LimeDisiple's "Irish Coffee") from that pack. Not that I've used it anywhere, but this seems very much beside the point.
Kevincalanor
519
I was wandering trough the threads to catch up all I've lost the time I was off, I noticed that we have a lot of good chars developing but we're getting a little short on visual options :p
So I tried to give the local hairdresser a hand ^^
I'll try to make some new parts for the 'Meduim build', however, make a 'Medium build +' will be harder than expected, I'm having a bad time to match the original shades :\
Edit: Oh, Falcon is already at it. Here am I being all impulsive again :p
I'll stick to it anyway, more parts the better right? ^^
So I tried to give the local hairdresser a hand ^^
I'll try to make some new parts for the 'Meduim build', however, make a 'Medium build +' will be harder than expected, I'm having a bad time to match the original shades :\
Edit: Oh, Falcon is already at it. Here am I being all impulsive again :p
I'll stick to it anyway, more parts the better right? ^^
author=Render
Hello!~
You all seem like lovely people that can direct me in the right direction of making a -successful- custom character. This is a great game, and it interested me into wanting to make a character. Also, I'd just like to note that I have experience in writing, and I'm aiming for my character to be -flawed- not perfect.
Her name is Megumi Nakamura, I'd like to reserve ID 94 for her. But without further ado, I'd like to paraphrase the story I have so far. She's returning to the players school after moving various times. However, she did live in the area, and was acquaintanced with Miki as a first year student (Note: Megumi is a second year student currenty).
Now for personality, she's very inattentive and doesn't aspire for much (perhaps "realistic" in a sense?). I'm planning for her to have a dry wit at times, and, at some points be a little irritable.
So that's basically what I've got so far. Please constructively criticize, if you will.
She's very cute, though she bears quite the resemblance to Akari. i'd also like to mention she bears the same last name as my character. I'd hate to ask this of you, but would it be too much trouble to change that.
Oh and it's been a while since I've posted here. Ai's rout is going smoothly and should come to a close soon! Also, involving that hair style made by @Kevincalanor I think it's quite adorable and fitting. Please continue to make new parts that we could download!!
