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This page is for discussion of the artistic side of content creation, such as writing and characterization, as well as for the posting of incomplete content for the purpose of receiving feedback from each other.

Feel free to discuss characters and stories you are working on.
The old Custom Content thread can be found here. The first archived artistic discussion thread can be found here.

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author=Zakariya
An updated design for a character originally meant for my initial HTC content.


Any constructive criticism is welcome. XP
First: she's really cute, I'd expect her to have an upbeat personality.
I guess I'd like to learn her story some time ;)

I like the design on her dress, which could do with some brighter color (the dress that is).

I really like the little ribbons and what you did with her hair in general.

There's some minor points:
As Dewelar made me aware some time ago, that nose-dot-thingy in the original .PSD is a bit off.

And the front bangs could blend a bit better with the rest of the hair.

One last thing ... is there a hole below her left armpit?
Zakariya
Every misdeed has its own punishment, and every good deed has its reward.
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author=Garage
I like the design on her dress, which could do with some brighter color (the dress that is).


What specific shade would you recommend?

I really like the little ribbons and what you did with her hair in general.


I provide you my thanks. :3


As Dewelar made me aware some time ago, that nose-dot-thingy in the original .PSD is a bit off.


That's a good point...


...does anyone else think I should remove the dot? >_>


And the front bangs could blend a bit better with the rest of the hair.




Like this?

One last thing ... is there a hole below her left armpit?


Fixed that. :)
author=Zakariya
author=Garage
I like the design on her dress, which could do with some brighter color (the dress that is).
What specific shade would you recommend?

Tough question. It depends on her personality (what's HER favorite color?) and stuff.

Maybe some sort of green to match her hair? Maybe something pinkish?
Myself I'd probably try orange or yellow, but I don't know HER taste.

Like this?

Perfect.

author=Zakariya
Did you try using the free select tool?


Late, but will try later.

author=Zakariya




The shirt design reminds me of the Azorius guild from that one Magic release a few years ago, for some reason. Looks good to me overall, tho.
oops doublepost. how do you delete a post xD
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author=ScarbucksCoffee
The shirt design reminds me of the Azorius guild from that one Magic release a few years ago, for some reason. Looks good to me overall, tho.

Well, it's probably the Tri-force of The Legend of Zelda fame, but...



...I can understand where you're coming from.

author=ScarbucksCoffee
oops doublepost. how do you delete a post xD

As a site, we usually don't delete anything. Even double-posts, despite them being frowned upon. However, mods have the capacity/ability to delete posts.

*Edit: As a random point of trivia, Ravnica Allegiance, which I think is releasing next weekend sometime, includes the Azorius Senate as one of the guilds.
author=Marrend
*Edit: As a random point of trivia, Ravnica Allegiance, which I think is releasing next weekend sometime, includes the Azorius Senate as one of the guilds.

Free? Pc? Download at safe?
Zakariya
Every misdeed has its own punishment, and every good deed has its reward.
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author=ScarbucksCoffee
The shirt design reminds me of the Azorius guild from that one Magic release a few years ago, for some reason. Looks good to me overall, tho.


It's actually the Triforce from Legend of Zelda covering the Master Sword (which is also from that series).
author=Zakariya
author=ScarbucksCoffee
The shirt design reminds me of the Azorius guild from that one Magic release a few years ago, for some reason. Looks good to me overall, tho.
It's actually the Triforce from Legend of Zelda covering the Master Sword (which is also from that series).

Ah i see... or?
Zakariya
Every misdeed has its own punishment, and every good deed has its reward.
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i see... or?


I apologize, but I do not understand your meaning.

>_>
author=Zakariya
i see... or?
I apologize, but I do not understand your meaning.

>_>

Hmm... i donĀ“t remeber self anymore...
Zakariya
Every misdeed has its own punishment, and every good deed has its reward.
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Just thought I'd share...this....





This is Evangelyne, a nice girl who was sadly disillusioned with society. I'm not sure if I'll make HTC content featuring her yet.
author=Zakariya
Just thought I'd share...this....

I'm pretty sure Kazuhiko'd like to get to know her.
Or Hina.
Zakariya
Every misdeed has its own punishment, and every good deed has its reward.
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author=Garage
I'm pretty sure Kazuhiko'd like to get to know her.


Perhaps, but he would have to deal with Evangelyne's...strange cousin, who would (depending on the events) try to take him first.

Or Hina.


Which Hina? :P
author=Zakariya
Perhaps, but he would have to deal with Evangelyne's...strange cousin, who would (depending on the events) try to take him first.
Take him for herself or take him out on a date or ... take him out.

author=Zakariya
Or Hina.

Which Hina? :P
I don't know who made me say this ...
Zakariya
Every misdeed has its own punishment, and every good deed has its reward.
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author=Garage
Take him for herself or take him out on a date or ... take him out.

Just as a reference...


Ashley, the cousin of Evangelyne.


The expression implies much more than one would think.

I don't know who made me say this ...

There is no penalty for saying it, do not feel guilt.
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...Have we forgotten how to scale images? Darigazz, they are huge.
Zakariya
Every misdeed has its own punishment, and every good deed has its reward.
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author=Marrend
...Have we forgotten how to scale images?


No, but I will alter them if this resolution is presenting significant problems.
Offtopic: Riku is a bit nervous about the upcoming games.
Zakariya
Every misdeed has its own punishment, and every good deed has its reward.
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She doesn't look too nervous...

XD