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Story

The story is of a scientist, Garet, who invents a spectacular invention in the town of Lirrin Hills. This invention was designed so that when a form of DNA is placed on the alter of the invention then a prehistoric creature will be created (In this case a dragon) in the image of the person who donated the DNA. The machine back-fired though. It attacked the people of Lirrin Hills and contained the dragon gene within their DNA, transforming them into dragons as well. Now Garet with his friend Eve, both as dragons, search out for a friend of Garet's to see if he can somehow return them back to human form. But it turns out that becoming a human again was going to be a lot more challenging than Garet thought.


Characters

Garet

Garet is the most famous, well-known scientist in a rural area. He is the designer of the machine that turned everyone into dragons. Now it is his duty to make everything right again to find the cure of everyone's form.


Eve

Eve is Garet's best friend. She knew him since he was a kid and has been good friends with him ever since. She even has a bit of crush, but since he's so famous, she is too afraid to say that she likes him. As Garet sets off to find the cure to transform everyone, she accompanies him.



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Credits

Graphics

ozumadrew - Logo/Title
Mack - Tilesets
Xiie - Facesets
GrandmaDeb - Dragons
Allie (Found by GrandmaDeb) - Other Tilesets


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Map Design

I got rid of the screenshot of the town that everyone disliked and replaced it with a different town map. I'd like to think that the map was a very huge fluke and I don't why I made it as large as I did. So later on when the game is nearing completion (or nearing demo release), I will wipe the entire town and start from scratch. So check out the Minsin City screenshot and tell me what could possibly need improvements.
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Rekitsu
0
08/06/2011 11:35 AM
Meh, looks alright. I'll probably give it a try when it releases.
Adon237
if i had an allowance, i would give it to rmn
1743
08/06/2011 11:43 AM
Eww, the mapping looks odd, I don't think I am subscribing just yet..
That man is standing on top of a house!
moneymenace
121
08/06/2011 07:30 PM
author=Adon237
Eww, the mapping looks odd, I don't think I am subscribing just yet..
That man is standing on top of a house!


That's not a house... House aren't that small. It's one of those talking pedestals that people of importance go up to to make announcements. Kind of how the presidents make speeches and what-not.
Marrend
Guardian of the Description Thread
21806
08/06/2011 07:59 PM
It's one of those talking pedestals that people of importance go up to to make announcements.

Methinks the word you're looking for is "podium". Saying that, that's a pretty big podium! Now, if that's supposed to be a podium on a stage, or whatever, there should be a way to get up there. Like a staircase, or something?


*Edit: Unless I'm missing something, there should also be another image, right? The first one is just a title screen, that should not have counted for the three image minimum.
Dezz
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08/06/2011 09:57 PM
Woah, and so MoneyMenace comes here too...
Looking at the screenshots I'd recommend making the maps smaller by around half or add more stuff to the areas. The houses could do with more windows and the ground could do with more nature/life/clutter depicting the map-type.
Anyway, good luck on this.
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moneymenace
121
08/06/2011 11:24 PM
Methinks the word you're looking for is "podium". Saying that, that's a pretty big podium! Now, if that's supposed to be a podium on a stage, or whatever, there should be a way to get up there. Like a staircase, or something?


Thank you, I couldn't find the right word for the life of me. That's just a make-shift podium until I either find someone to make me a decent one or find someone who already has made a decent one.

Ben_Random
1019
08/07/2011 04:08 AM
It looks like you went crazy with the underlines.
ShortStar
CONSIQUENCE!
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08/07/2011 09:39 PM
Watching the video... I'll tell you what people seem to complain about.

- Pauses in talks.
- Never ever have them.

Anyway, I think you need to spice up the opening music from less mellow to more we're gonna see something big.

Your scene here needs some walls, fountains or chairs or something to fill up the empty space.

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