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First of all read this.
Other than fantasy violence and mild language this game contains non-sexual nudity. If you are offended by this please do not play this game or comment or reply.

I hope this is okay with the mods. When I asked their answer confused me.

Story:

King Valzar ruled Korsin along with his wife Queen Artina. They had two sons Nixon and Sengal. King Valzar and Queen Artina loved both of their sons very much. At night King Valzar would tell his youngest Sengal many stories about the world before he went to bed. Sengal loved his father’s stories almost more than anything.
Sengal wanted to be writer fiction more than anything. He always wrote stories for his parents and his older brother Nixon. They all enjoyed his stories and supported his dream.
However one day shortly after Sengal’s older brother’s sixteenth birthday a monster known to all as an Anigma Beast attacked Korsin. Sengal’s father and Nixon went out to fight it off. Sadly both of them were killed. Since the king was dead Sengal’s mother was stuck with his uncle Leon who was now king of Korsin.
Leon was very cruel to Sengal and his mother. He beat them for stupid reasons and punished Sengal whenever he tried to protect his mother. Sengal became angry and started to train with the knights in the training room so that one day he could kill the Anigma Beast who killed his father.
Over the years Sengal still tried to write stories other than training all of the time. The publishing office however wouldn’t accept anything he wrote. They laughed at him and told him he wasn’t cut out to be a writer. Sengal often took his anger out in the training room by completely destroying the training dummies. Almost all of the knights in training were sacred of him because of this. He also developed a very bad temper towards negative judgment.
Every time someone said something to Sengal that he didn’t like he would beat them up. Doing this scared everyone who know him. Sengal even yelled at his own mother and got into arguments with her very often. What he doesn’t know is that everything as he knows it is about to change.


Characters:




Sengal
Class: Swordsman
Profile: Sengal is the Prince of Korsin. Twelve years ago his father and his brother died fighting off an Anigma Beast that was attacking Korsin. He started to train with the knights in training hoping to one day kill the Anigma Beast who killed them. Over the years he has developed a very bad temper and resentment towards his uncle. He doesn't want anyone to know he is the Prince of Korsin. Not even his best friend Balagan knows.




Balagan
Class: Warrior
Profile: Balagan is Sengal’s best friend. He is overly friendly sometimes. Other than being overly friendly he likes to chase after beautiful woman. However he never really gets lucky and is always slapped across the face or worse due to being obnoxious. He often tries to help Sengal out the best he could though.




Credits:

Scripts:
Yanfly Core(For Res)
Battle Symphony
Mog Weather Ex
Effect Manager and Shape Shift by Tsukihime
Yanfly Save engine
Yanfly Chapter Indicator
No Auto Shadows by Neon Black
Mog Event Sensor Range
Picture Bug Fix by Raizen884
TDS BattlebackStretch
In-Depth Maps by FenixFyreX
Khas Awesome Light Effects
Yanfly Engine Ace Ace Message System
Menu Ex and picture status by Claimh
Modern Algebra Quest Journel
If I forgot anyone let me know.
Graphics:

The cut scene style was inspired by Phantasy Star 4 it was my friend’s idea to make them smaller.
Mack Characters and Mack Character Generator
DS Resouce Pack
Mack's tiles(Edited to match DS graphics)
Music:
I think it was made by Tukito. The site was Japanese and if anyone knows for sure who made the music please let me know so I can give the right person credit them.

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Decided to stick with Ace, and back in Development

I decided to keep this game in RPG Maker VX Ace. I'm going to go back, and remake the maps of the old vx version since I have it converted to Ace, fix up the story, replace the music with non rips, and the graphics with non rips. I'm sorry for almost cancelling this. I didn't think I would change my mind. I am also changing the title
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for child's game.not suited in teenager.
author=Natsu_Luffy
for child's game.not suited in teenager.

Please be contructive, if there is something that you don't like about my game, please express it contructivally.
Hey i hope you read this but this was a great game. I hope you make another :)
This game's battles are too easy and there aren't a lot of abilities for the character
Hi sorry I have not replied to this in a while. I knew this is very late I just haven not been here in awhile.

@Warprincess116
Thank you very much! I do plan to make another game. I am currently working on two right now that are called Mystic Knights, and a scfi fantasy Soul Reign in the new RPG Maker VX Ace. I will make sure I put them here :)

@andrepawny
I agree I did make them a little too easy. I just didn't want anyone to get frustrated or the monsters and bosses to do too much damage in the beginning, but now that I know people want a challenge I will try my best to make my next games harder. I do agree the characters don't have a lot of abilities the problem I have there is I get a little bit of writers block in that area but I will try to give my characters more abilities in my next games. Thank you for replying. :)
Excellent game. Waiting for the next.
I read a topic you posted recently, and got curious. It's the one that talks about not getting enough exposure for your games, so yeah...

I'll give the game a spin and tell you how it went for me in a while :D

EDIT: Not sure that I could see any evidence that your games are not getting exposure... I mean, look at that whopping downloads! You have four digits there!
The others, it seems are incomplete, I guess? which would be why they're not gathering as much attention as this one...
I played with it for a few minutes until I gave up. Not that it was terribad and all, but it sure could use some improvements. Now, on to the list of complaints:

  • This game lacks a proper introduction. I was more confused than interested when I was plopped right in the middle of the scene with no info of any sort. This may be good for other people, but for me, I need that intro. A short but concise one will greatly improve player experience.
  • This game also lacks in options. I know that some would want there hand held for them the entire playthrough, but generally that is not good.
  • You also need more dialogue and interactions with the immediate environment. Yeah, it's no easy work, but it greatly improves the quality of the game.
  • The maps need a rework. I was wandering hopelessly for some time trying to look for the next destination. The layout, for me, is generally confusing
  • Grammar, please. It's kind of an eyesore. Not that mine is perfect and all, but you still have to try your best to make it acceptable.
  • I'd also like to add an annoying thing: When I escape from battle, the enemy is still right next to me, so it triggers yet another battle, rendering the 'Escape' command practically useless. I suggest you put an 'Erase Event' under the condition of 'If Escape' in the 'Battle Processing' portion of the event.


Now, I know I am not a well-known figure in this community, and that I have no form of credibility. Heck, what am I doing? I'm a noob criticising a pro's work.
Heh, I guess it's up to you, Miss Rose, as to whether or not you listen to this noob.

Have a nice day :)
It's okay, don't worry about it :) By the way unfourtenatly I do not have RPG Maker VX On my new lap top :( I only have RPG Maker VX Ace, RPG Maker 2003, RPG Maker XP. Anyway thank you for your reply. However there was lot I didn't know I could in RPG Maker when I made this game. I also had no what was cliché and what wasn't at the time. I also wasn't sure how to do certain scenes which rendered this game a bit of a mess.

EDIT:
I decided to put RPG Maker VX on my new lap top along with all of my other rpg makers so that I can work on this game. I am going to redo it so that it is better and easier to understand.
Now these characters look awfully familiar .. like the ones of Trails in the skies (The Legend of Heroes). Is that intentional?





I gave credit to falcom for the images and no it wasn't intentional do not ACUSE me of copying or playgerizium. I am not using them in the remake. I hate it when people try to say I stole something or copied. No offense and sorry if I sounded rude but you really got e upset and I DO NOT WANT to be banned or suspended.
I'm sorry, I didn't mean to do that. I was just curious and apparantly am too stupid to read properly
It's okay. I made this game before I knew how to draw on the computer. It was also before I played that game. After playing it I took a look at them and couldn't see them as my characters any more. So now that I can draw on both paper and computer with a tablet I am going to draw my own characters but I am keeping the character sets the same since the outfits don't really look like the characters in that game.
Hi,

I just want to put my two cents into it, I actually like the game, it's easy and enjoyable. My problem is there is not enough direction. Yes somebody says we should go to "....." this city or that city. How would the player know, where that is?

When you enter the city, you should show the location somewhere, or at least have a NPC welcome you to the "..." name city. I usually don't like go around new area and talking to every NPC in town, but here it would be welcome, if some of them tell you something, or even better, give some hints. Other than that, I really like the game.
Thank you. I am only remaking it so that it is better. I know it's good already but I been wanting to remake this game for quite some time. I really want to use my own artwork in the remake which has gotten better since I last updated my other game. I'm going to try to make it more clear about where to go in the remake.
TOTALLY pissed off, started this game, and beat the first boss Sorsha, then decided to go and level up in her castle. After almost 2 hrs of grinding (and saving) I now find i CANNOT leave the castle,going back out the way I came in, now puts me onto the wall of the castle and i can't move, so all that work was for nothing, and as I saved over the save points I had prior to that I would now have to start again, not happening sorry.
You need to calm down. Did you not read the blog? I am remaking this game anyway. But if you're going to give me an attitude like that then don't bother replying to this game. You're being mean nasty and very unconstructive.
Actually, just sounds like he's upset about not being able to progress in a game. Nothing wrong with that. He told you about the bug and expressed how upset he was that he couldn't play. The way he put it is rather tame to be honest. Now, if he'd said that you were a shitty game creator or that your game was a pile of festering feces then he might be going a bit too far, but he didn't so there's no issue with what he said.

He didn't attack you, pointed out the issue with your game and expressed his discontent. Ain't nothing wrong with that.


Also, for someone who used the faces from a game, say they gave credit then said it wasn't intentional... well, that just really sounds weird. Especially how you get so defensive about it. Calm down. Not every thing someone says is a personal attack against you and yours. Some people are just curious. He wasn't saying you were plagiarising, only that he wanted to know if you'd chosen those characters deliberately or not.

You could afford to be a little less touchy about anything that seems to you to be negative.
Sorry. I tend to jump to conclusions. I thought he mad at me for the mistake. I'm extremely sorry. I didn't me to upset him in any way.
No worries, just remember that people are allowed to get upset as long as they don't make it a personal attack. To be a good game creator you need to grow some thick skin to deal with those who don't like your game for whatever reason, but when they have a valid point - that is, bugs that stop progress - you need to take them seriously.

Just remember that sometimes people will just download a game without reading about it (I do that all the time >.<; ) or checking out the blog posts so when they're caught unawares they tend to get upset.
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