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First of all read this.
Other than fantasy violence and mild language this game contains non-sexual nudity. If you are offended by this please do not play this game or comment or reply.

I hope this is okay with the mods. When I asked their answer confused me.

Story:

King Valzar ruled Korsin along with his wife Queen Artina. They had two sons Nixon and Sengal. King Valzar and Queen Artina loved both of their sons very much. At night King Valzar would tell his youngest Sengal many stories about the world before he went to bed. Sengal loved his father’s stories almost more than anything.
Sengal wanted to be writer fiction more than anything. He always wrote stories for his parents and his older brother Nixon. They all enjoyed his stories and supported his dream.
However one day shortly after Sengal’s older brother’s sixteenth birthday a monster known to all as an Anigma Beast attacked Korsin. Sengal’s father and Nixon went out to fight it off. Sadly both of them were killed. Since the king was dead Sengal’s mother was stuck with his uncle Leon who was now king of Korsin.
Leon was very cruel to Sengal and his mother. He beat them for stupid reasons and punished Sengal whenever he tried to protect his mother. Sengal became angry and started to train with the knights in the training room so that one day he could kill the Anigma Beast who killed his father.
Over the years Sengal still tried to write stories other than training all of the time. The publishing office however wouldn’t accept anything he wrote. They laughed at him and told him he wasn’t cut out to be a writer. Sengal often took his anger out in the training room by completely destroying the training dummies. Almost all of the knights in training were sacred of him because of this. He also developed a very bad temper towards negative judgment.
Every time someone said something to Sengal that he didn’t like he would beat them up. Doing this scared everyone who know him. Sengal even yelled at his own mother and got into arguments with her very often. What he doesn’t know is that everything as he knows it is about to change.


Characters:




Sengal
Class: Swordsman
Profile: Sengal is the Prince of Korsin. Twelve years ago his father and his brother died fighting off an Anigma Beast that was attacking Korsin. He started to train with the knights in training hoping to one day kill the Anigma Beast who killed them. Over the years he has developed a very bad temper and resentment towards his uncle. He doesn't want anyone to know he is the Prince of Korsin. Not even his best friend Balagan knows.




Balagan
Class: Warrior
Profile: Balagan is Sengal’s best friend. He is overly friendly sometimes. Other than being overly friendly he likes to chase after beautiful woman. However he never really gets lucky and is always slapped across the face or worse due to being obnoxious. He often tries to help Sengal out the best he could though.




Credits:

Scripts:
Yanfly Core(For Res)
Battle Symphony
Mog Weather Ex
Effect Manager and Shape Shift by Tsukihime
Yanfly Save engine
Yanfly Chapter Indicator
No Auto Shadows by Neon Black
Mog Event Sensor Range
Picture Bug Fix by Raizen884
TDS BattlebackStretch
In-Depth Maps by FenixFyreX
Khas Awesome Light Effects
Yanfly Engine Ace Ace Message System
Menu Ex and picture status by Claimh
Modern Algebra Quest Journel
If I forgot anyone let me know.
Graphics:

The cut scene style was inspired by Phantasy Star 4 it was my friend’s idea to make them smaller.
Mack Characters and Mack Character Generator
DS Resouce Pack
Mack's tiles(Edited to match DS graphics)
Music:
I think it was made by Tukito. The site was Japanese and if anyone knows for sure who made the music please let me know so I can give the right person credit them.

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Decided to stick with Ace, and back in Development

I decided to keep this game in RPG Maker VX Ace. I'm going to go back, and remake the maps of the old vx version since I have it converted to Ace, fix up the story, replace the music with non rips, and the graphics with non rips. I'm sorry for almost cancelling this. I didn't think I would change my mind. I am also changing the title
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Wonderful, another game full of kids.
Ahahahaha, Monique's face. It's Joshua from the crossdressing play scene in Trails in The Sky. 8D

By the way, you should add Nihon Falcom to your credits for the face art. You credited Mack and others, but seemingly conveniently forgot to source the art. = v =
Sorry about that, I just forgot to add that. Thank you for reminding me. It's been added
I figured I would try this just to see what it was like. My first impressions after like 15 seconds of playing (talked to everyone in the castle, examined the doors and such), is that your mapping needs work (all the rooms feel a little too empty for a castle), and that your grammar also needs work. I see various errors whenever I examine a door or talk to a random guard...you really need to have someone playtest your work. I also noticed that you start with all 4 party members, rather than just the two your supposed to have.

Guard at castle gate: you think you're bored after all them time. It should be this time, and how did the castle guard that is nowhere near the prince's room even know he was bored?

Other guard at castle gate: you better becareful if you're going out of the castle. First off, be careful should be spaced, and secondly, i read in your thread that he isn't supposed to leave the castle, so why is a guard letting him just waltz out.

When you examine the throne doors: I better ot bother mom right now. should be not.

This strikes me as odd as well, but I don't see how balagan got in the castle. Seems to me if hes always getting himself into trouble (even with just women), then sengals mother wouldn't exactly approve of them hanging out (except mayby on castle grounds, where she can keep an eye on them).

Anyways, despite all these errors, the mapping, and the...rather short opening cutscene, I did download it, and i'll see this run through to the end. Hopefully i'll run into a more gripping cutscene soon.

Edit: Apparently I can put the party members I'm not supposed to have in standby. I'll just do that as to not imbalance the game.

Edit 2: The dragon kingdom guards behind the castle say: I cannot let you pass because your mother will get worried. If she will get worried (past tense), it should be I cannot let you pass because your mother would get worried.

Edit 3. I cannot talk to the people in the stalls. Even if there not a shop, they can still say what they are selling, to imply there is an economy in play. Also, I cannot open the doors in town. Even something as simple as *locked* popping up is better than nothing.

Oh come on...a bug as soon as I hit confirm...fine *Edit 4*...I can walk under the red flower by the bottom left house. By under, I mean it looks like the flowers are floating above his head when I walk in certain spots. I should also mention the stairs there are unneeded. I do not see a cliff there at all.

Edit...5. I just fully explored the town and found a whopping 2 npcs to talk too (saving the pub for last). Despite you give the impression its a big town, all the houses cant be entered, the side paths that supposedly lead deeper into town cant be visited..and I feel like this game is revolving around the main char, and that an actual world is nonexistant.

Seriously...your cliffs are terrible. A wooden platform with stairs leading to it should not be able to be stepped on from the side...or look flat. Use a mapping tutorial or ask for help if you need it, same goes for your story. Ask for help on how to emulate an actual world in a game if you need to

An edit is needed for the pub...yep...edit 6 it is. .Man: Hey, there lad (comma unneeded), Have you heard of the mermaids and merman who live in Elia Bay? I hear that mermaids trick male sailors and when they feel the man feels comfortable with them they pull them down into the ocean and eat them like a shark. Mermen do the same only they trick the ladies! (first off...i feel like im reading a tounge twister here, secondly, why an exclamation for the ladies, but not the men? Its shocking they eat them in both cases is it not? Also, a lady in the pub doesnt speak.

The barkeep and guys in bandannas dont speak either. Hah, I didnt hit cancel yet, take that edit.

Alright...forget it., I am not posting anymore grammar mistakes! Have someone completely redo it for you.

Nww that I've experienced the area outside town, heres my comments. Battles are too easy, and you have various roads leading to virtually nowhere. I'm all for more areas to explore, sidepaths and all that, but dont put a road and then tell me either: A: Nothing appears when I go on it, and it doesnt take me to a new map or: B: You cannot go there yet. If I can't go there, at least put a signpost or somethin that tells me where each road leads.

Now as my journey comes to an end...I went outside town fo an area full of monsters than I one hit with normal attacks, and has various roads I can get past (except for one), which leads to yet another town (already?), and when I followed one of the various roads in town...I got warped into an area that traps me. I'm like trapped on top of a wall in a castle...when I didn't even see a castle in that town.
Thank you for the feedback. By the way which city road do you get trapped in. Please tell which city it is. So that I can fix it, but the strange thing is I test played the whole game and didn't get trapped anywhere and I thought I fixed that error. Guess I didn't, but I really need to know which town it was.
The name of the town is harwell, and the place it traps me is dragon castle. Thankfully the name places are in the menu, and i saved before getting trapped.

Edit: Just did another trip around town, and theres a bench i can walk on.

Went to harwell castle (why did the guards not speak..and let me waltz in...got the cutscene and teleported back to my castle...went back to harwell...and examined the throne doors. Game crashed saying couldnt find faceset drago. Also, if you try to go up the stairs, mary will still say she doesnt keep the map up there...even though mary is no longer with you.
author=demonlord5000
The name of the town is harwell, and the place it traps me is dragon castle. Thankfully the name places are in the menu, and i saved before getting trapped.

Edit: Just did another trip around town, and theres a bench i can walk on.

Went to harwell castle (why did the guards not speak..and let me waltz in...got the cutscene and teleported back to my castle...went back to harwell...and examined the throne doors. Game crashed saying couldnt find faceset drago. Also, if you try to go up the stairs, mary will still say she doesnt keep the map up there...even though mary is no longer with you.
I thought that I fixed that error. Let me ask if I can reuplod it. For right now I'll tell you where to go. You actually don't go thourgh the door. You go to the room to with the map. It's 12:00 AM in the state I am in so I'll ask if I can reupload the game and upload it tomarrow as soon as I get up. I have to go to bed for now.

EDIT: I can't seem to edit the download for some reason. I really need to put up the fixed version
Its good, very good, but the characters are very, un-interesting...
UPDATED The game and fixed a game crashing error.


Ichimaru_Gin thank you for your feedback but I don't understand why you think that the characters are not interesting. I am not mad or taking it the wrong way I just don't understand. Also I hope you are not going by what I explained about them because I am very bad at explaining things like that. Again I am not mad or taking it the wrong way I just don't undertand.
I can help elaborate for ichimaru on that. It's partly because the world you made doesn't have alot of npc, and doesn't really feel alive. In fact the towns feel rather deserted. The other thing is that the cutscenes are too short, and there isn't enough dialog to really make them interesting. It's an alright start if you havn't made any games, and a good chance to get valuable feedback for future projects.
Thank you for pointing that out. I know I need to work on that. The only problem I have is that I have a hard time thinking of what to make the NPCs say. Do you have any suggestions on what I can make them say or talk about?
I have a difficult time with that as well, one way is have a theme for every city. One city experienced an assassination attempt. Another (more small town) has a child that shines above the rest of the local population. One is getting ready for war. A new law is getting passed. There are lots of different possibilities with themes, and then you have the majority of the inhabitants talk about that theme. Always have a few that talk about the bigger picture, or don't, but that's one way to broaden the dialogue of the static, NPCs.
Look nice, going to download it right now.
Looked at screen-shots, thought game looked nice so I downloaded. Will read information about your story after some in game experience. Kudos!
Thank you! Don't forgot to tell what you think but be honset it's good to know what I need to work to make my games better.
it freezes here for me after i beat the demon and go back to the castle.
someone wanna help me? ^_^
BurningTyger
Hm i Wonder if i can pul somethi goff here/
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author=Verincia
I have a difficult time with that as well, one way is have a theme for every city. One city experienced an assassination attempt. Another (more small town) has a child that shines above the rest of the local population. One is getting ready for war. A new law is getting passed. There are lots of different possibilities with themes, and then you have the majority of the inhabitants talk about that theme. Always have a few that talk about the bigger picture, or don't, but that's one way to broaden the dialogue of the static, NPCs.
Right. Also consider fleshing out the NPCs a bit. Give them relatives, quirks, and link them to other characters.
MAybe Harwell Town's bladesmith is the son of Koursin's armorer, but left after a disagreement; maybe one of the barkeeps at the pub has a crush on Alya and scrambles his words when she's in the party; maybe the potion seller in the Dragon Kingdom is afraid of frogs. Things like that.

(And don't kingdoms have princesses, towns mayor's daughters?)
@phatkookies: I'll check the event but they strange thing it didn't freeze when I test played the whole game, but I'll check the event and try to figure out why. Until I figure it out please try exiting the game nad restarting your computer to see if it continues to freeze.

EDIT:
I don't know what to do because it doesn't freeze at all when I test play it. Does anyone know why it is freezing for other people and not me? I really need help fixing this problem. If anyone knows what is going on and I can help I'll PM them the non-encrypted project to take a look at.

EDIT2: Never mind figured it out, fixed it and reuploaded it. It was just a move event error but it is fixed now. So just redownload it and put it in another folder and copy your save. I am sorry for the error.
I umm sort of figured that it was because i was walking into the desk, and that the event would not proceed until it heard the end of the movement, so checking the "ignore if can't walk" thing or whatever it was should fix the problem. Is that option in this version of rpg maker?
Yes that is an opition in this maker. What happened was after I tested the event I noticed that I forgot to make the character move and made him move the wrong way and didn't realize it. The problem is fixed now though and I reuploaded it so it shouldn't freeze this time.

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