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- Added: 06/17/2012 02:34 PM
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Is the middle room like a lunch room? It has tea and cups and what not, but also a teacher and desks and books. Looks cool though, nice lockers. :)
I'm not too certain of those "lockers" on the side paths, and using the bucklers as school bells. Also, is the teacher's lounge in the center a bit too accessible? It does seem a little large, if nothing else. Also, those windows are really off. I know those are better off being used on the back of a building rather than the front, and, Darigaaz, there seems like there should be more stuff on the front of that building!
Actually, I'm probably just posting this to see if I'm even going in the right direction with this concept!
Actually, I'm probably just posting this to see if I'm even going in the right direction with this concept!
I do think the lockers on the side just seem out of place. I dont usually picture school lockers not propped agaisnt the wall facing out. Also yeah Id say throw some doors on the teachers lounge. Maybe even cut it down to 1 or 2 doors, although that might ruin the pattern you were going for. I didnt even get the bucklers as bells, is there no little things you can shove under them to illustrate the object that knocks the side of the bells over and over. I do think this is a good general direction though.
Japanese schools have the lockers together at the entrance, so students can change into their indoor shoes. I'm sure you could do something like that by making the main entrance from the side, as so:
Having them together should make them look much more "lockery"
Having them together should make them look much more "lockery"
author=bigtime
I do think the lockers on the side just seem out of place. I don't usually picture school lockers not propped against the wall facing out.
The RTP doesn't have side-facing objects like that. If they did, I would use them. All day. As it stands, I can probably get rid of them, and allow the side halls to have more breathing room.
author=bigtime
Also, yeah, I'd say throw some doors on the teachers lounge. Maybe even cut it down to 1 or 2 doors, although that might ruin the pattern you were going for.
I was going to have Ruri have this conversation with that green-haired teacher about how going through the lounge was faster/easier than going around it, but that can still be essentially true with only two entrances. Then again, I am all about symmetrical patterns, arean't I? It's probably going to remain being symmetrical, to be honest.
author=bigtime
I didn't even get the bucklers as bells. Is there no little things you can shove under them to illustrate the object that knocks the side of the bells over and over?
Not that I'm aware of, but it's something to research!
author=bigtime
I do think this is a good general direction though.
Well, that's something!
author=papasan96
Japanese schools have the lockers together at the entrance..
I seriously thought this "lockers at the entrance" concept was just a thing that Shin Megami Tensai Persona 4 did. Though, I think I can work with that, given what I want to do with this school. I'll make that attempt a different image, though, rather than updating this one.
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