Promise

love the avatar for the starting character

that knocking....is so fucking annoying!

people mis using need drives me crazy
the only needs in life come after wants
once you want to live then you need food water and shelter
you do not need to know about your past that is a want

sounds are too loud and unpleasant

in terms of it making sense the mapping is horrible,in terms of looks its fine

paper north exit cant read

doll room green haired doll useless trigger

you cant help her!? this some messed up stuff : (

betrayed : ( cant say its surprising was bound to be betrayed or she would die

*stopped making notes at this point :3

add a save location in the final room

i found no glitches and little to no grammar issues(may of been a tad ? at the intro)
the puzzles were simple(if you have common sense)
but very well executed
i found the white area with dolls to be the scariest/most uncomfortable to be in
the plot...im a bit ify with

i personally don't in fact hate dark events but im going to put that aside
and say some things needed explanation
why did the red haired girl push you?
for what reason were there supernatural things going on?
what happened to the adults that did it?
why do they hold a grudge against you?
what did you to to make them feel better?
what did going there accomplish?

that aside because your character has amnesia,were lacked some explanation with the Tawny and Emy
they were all friends but we still know little to nothing about them
while Veronica has plenty of information to figure what kind of person she was the other 2 did not
heck Tawny said she would tell you everything and disappeared :/ (even if she was already dead or something it felt messed up we did all that for her just to be trolled)

The real ending(as i assume) just leaves more questions then answers