author=Frogge
You should make the map a bit smaller, there is too much empty space. You can do it like this instead:
It has everything your map also does, and it is way smaller.
Also, I don't understand the purpose of those curtains. They looks wrong and buggy, maybe putting a window below them would be wise.
Hey, sorry it took me so long to reply on here!
Just wanted to say thanks for the feedback. Regarding room size, I'm not sure there's a lot I can do for this particular game (need to leave the player enough room to escape the monsters, though there is something to be said about cramped spaces, I think) but I'll definitely keep it in mind for future projects, at least. Believable maps are something I'm definitely struggling with.
How did you get the window that small? Or is there just black/transparency surrounding the walls?