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I have high-functioning Autism. My brain is wired differently. When given a task, I expect to be given explicit details as to how it's done or I fuck up. I can't process information without all the details.
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A Dream Home
author=NaoKernel
Hey!
I really liked the premise, cleaning games are always so satisfactory.
Here are my thoughts:
Again, I love the idea! It feels nice to see place getting cleaner and less chaotic as you perform your actions.
Cutting grass became a bit boring after a while, though, as I basically had to walk around pressing the same button again and again. Maybe there is a way to make it less repetative, like putting ability to cut grass by walking while holding some button? There should be some scripts out there.
I would also prefer the game to notify me when I cut all of the grass - I wasn't sure if I copleted the task as there was no reaction from the game and so wandered around the house for some time just to check if there are any places I forgot to clean.
And as mentioned earlier, I expected I will have to clean the house all by myself, but instead I just had to go for a work several times and make two calls. This, again, is quite repetitive. You can either allow player to repair and clean house on their own, but use phone and work system for some other purposes (order mterials or equipment, for example, get some people to put furniture, etc), or you can create some gameplay for work (e.g. player has to do some actions and the better is their performance the more they earn), but that might turn it into working game rather than cleaning game.
In conclusion, once again, I liked the idea a lot! Not part of the feedback, but it can actually be a nice base for a story... Like, you know, the girl's grandmother mysteriously disappears, so she moves to her house, but as she cleans up and repairs it, the girl finds some clues as to why grandmother has disappeared and more about her life... But those are just some ideas I got about your game. Anyways, good luck with your further projects!
Thank you for your constructive criticism. As for the mansion, the term "inheritance" should imply that the girl's grandmother passed away, but I appreciate the criticism. I guess I should have thought about it. ^_^
A Dream Home
author=RayneMercury
Heya, this was cool! Here are some bugs I found while playing and some suggestions for the game:
Examining grass without scythe: the word grass is cut off.
First version of house: east wing, second door on the bottom. When you exit, you end up in West Wing.
After taking the scythe: The shed door remains open until you touch it. Fixes itself after you leave and come back.
Having the player interact with the car to go to work might make sense.
If you're looking to expand the game further, having the player go to a different map and accomplish something to earn money might be a neat feature.
After choosing the 100G option: North wing, all room doors are set to Action Button to exit instead of touching the event, when trying to go back to the wing.
Choosing the 100G option before acquiring the scythe results in being unable to acquire the scythe. It also affects the garden map.
West wing, first door on the bottom: Guest Room, the dresser is kind of in the wall.
West wing, second door on the bottom, Study, the bookcase is in the wall.
After 175G option: East wing, first door on top, Cold Storage: Some furniture is in the wall, but it looks more appropriate here. It loses the door into the kitchen. Kitchen also no longer has a door to the dining room.
After 175G option, garden: Yellow flowers behind the big tree are above the player.
Never grabbing the scythe results in all the grass being cut anyway! To fix this, you could disallow the player from using the phone until the scythe is obtained and/or the grass is all cut.
This was fun to play, and I tested all the doors I could in every version of the house. I'd like to see what you can do in a bigger project, whether that's expanding this one or making something new!
Thank you. This is my first game I made, and I'll do my best to make my second game better. I appreciate the constructive criticism.
By the way, nice MLP Profile pic.
A Dream Home
author=zenla
Hmm game is rather tutorial about how to make a place beautiful in rpgmaker and it sure is fun for eyes to see restored rooms. For gaming though it is rather demo like rather. Still a good foundation for another game I guess.
It's a brief game, that's why it feels like a demo. It was me trying to get some practise into my game development so I actually can do well enough to do commercial games.
A Dream Home
author=eevee93
There are a lot of files missing!!! Here they are...
1A] I get these errors immediately when i start a new game..
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D] The door is missing here but I can still enter the house normally..
2] I get this error when i enter the shed to take the scythe..
3] And this error keeps popping up every time i cut the grass..
4] It gets stuck whenever I go into a door going upwards and try to exit it in the the west and east wings. It freezes and I cannot move but the ESC/Menu was working..
The game is working even with the error messages but I stopped playing it for the meantime... :) I hope you can fix these soon..
(Sorry for the long post)
Oh shit! I'm so sorry. I'll get to fixing that.
A Dream Home
author=eevee93
EDIT- Never mind. I completed the game.. It was extremely short! I was expecting that the player would be able to actually to go to every room individually and clean/fix it up but instead.....I just make 2 magic phone calls and the entire house is fixed!!
I just wanted more actions to do like cutting the grass since there were so many rooms.. :)
But thanks for the game! It was a good effort! I hope in the future you can make something more detailed & interactive and with a longer play time!! :)
Actually, you need the scythe. I posted a tutorial blog on Blogger as GamePegasister91. The scythe's in the shed. Equip that, then press the action key on the grass.
A Dream Home
author=eevee93
I want to play this! When will there be a download?? :)
Now that I'm up and fully functioning, I'm proceeding to upload the compressed files.
A Dream Home
author=El_WaKa
Weird, I thought VL Gothic was included with every game on rpg maker (or that it was a common font that is included in almost every pc, like Arial or Comic Sans)
I will give it a try
Btw, make sure to remove the "Commercial" tag, so more people can come and play your game (unless you already have it uploaded on steam or another site where we have to pay to play it, besides, this looks like one of your first projects, you should get a bit more experience before thinking on selling your games)
EDIT: Unable to find file: Graphics/Titles/Castle
Huh, I already have the RTP installed, I have no idea on what the problem could be, maybe you should try uploading the game with the RTP included?
Thank you for that.
A Dream Home
author=Rinaauthor=CrystalSF91I see. That's okay. I was just wondering. :Dauthor=RinaIt's available here now. Had to figure out where to upload the actual game.
When and where will it be available? Steam? :)
Edit: Can't start the game: Unable to find VL Gothic font. ^^"
All right. I updated the game after compressing it, making sure that the font data was in there. If it still doesn't work, try installing the font to your computer.
A Dream Home
author=Rinaauthor=CrystalSF91I see. That's okay. I was just wondering. :Dauthor=RinaIt's available here now. Had to figure out where to upload the actual game.
When and where will it be available? Steam? :)
Edit: Can't start the game: Unable to find VL Gothic font. ^^"
Thank you for notifying me of this. I'll ask around how to fix that. This is my first game to be submitted and I hope to avert this problem next time around.
Have a great day.
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