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author=Gretgor
IamDavej: I have to say your plot is somewhat confusing to me, I'm so sorry. What would the industry, or the government, have to gain by shutting industries down and reaching an 100% unemployment rate? And how exactly would that lead to slavery? These things need to be clarified for the plot to be consistent.

As for the government using tax money to support non working men... that's true since feudal ages (royal families were full of rich parasites). It'd be better if you specified what non working men you're talking about, so we don't get confused.

I have to say, though, that you seem to be using some very interesting puzzle mechanics in your game, judging by your video! :)

Keep it up, but try to clarify the plot a bit more.

Here is a new and better(?) one.


The new government uses tax money to support the unemployed.
The industry should shut down for a clean environment.
No energy production is needed. 100% unemployment is their goal.
With no factories and no workers, there would be no emission at all.

The new world is beginning to form. What could be their ultimate goal?
A war is at hand as some tries to bring the government's plan down.
Will they succeed or will humanity just watch as the world as we know it cease to exist?
Will there be a new world without humans where the environment can thrive?

One person can stop this. You are that person, the chosen one.
Will you do it?

You must decide what to do...
The decisions you make will affect how the War begins and who will benefit from it.

Will you go back to change what have happened?

You change things in the Pre War time..
..they will affect the future....

Will you be able to stop the War.. ..or do war never change?

Whatchu Workin' On? Tell us!

author=Gretgor
IamDavej: I have to say your plot is somewhat confusing to me, I'm so sorry. What would the industry, or the government, have to gain by shutting industries down and reaching an 100% unemployment rate? And how exactly would that lead to slavery? These things need to be clarified for the plot to be consistent....

Yes, I understand the confusion. The game begins where you turn the TV on and get this as news:

"The new government uses tax money to support the non working man.
The industry should shut down for a clean environment.
No energy production is needed. 100% unemployment is their goal.
With no factories and no workers, there would be no emission at all.
The world shall be a place of enslaved humans under total control by the society."


It is like an "extreme parody" of the government we have today.
The "non working man" the unemployed.

The fact is that they ARE shutting down more and more factories and giving more and more money to the unemployed who almost gets more money than a hard working person. They are also shutting down our power plants to get a clean environment.

THAT is what this game is about.. But more extreme as it is a "fantasy/fiction game". In the game they take it all the way. 100% unemployment and NO factories.

What would humanity be if no one is working and we all get our money from the government? Totally dependent? Enslaved?

Is it a bit clerer now?

OH! I Forgot... Why would they do that?
Well.. that is a bit of a spoiler. But I can say this:

They are not doing it for themselves. They are doing it for the environment.
In their "ultimate plan" there would be no humans that can destroy the environment.

I rewrote it a bit:



The new government uses tax money to support the unemployed.
The industry should shut down for a clean environment.
No energy production is needed. 100% unemployment is their goal.
With no factories and no workers, there would be no emission at all.
The humans shall be completely dependent on the new government.

Will humanity obey and just watch as the new world is forming?
Will there be a new world without humans where the environment can thrive?
There will be War...

One person can stop this. You are that person, the chosen one.
Will you do it?

You must decide what to do...
The decisions you make will affect how the War begins and who will benefit from it.

Will you go back to change what have happened?

You change things in the Pre War time..
..they will affect the future....

Will you be able to stop the War.. ..or do war never change?



Whatchu Workin' On? Tell us!

I am working on this game:

TIME: WASTELAND

https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=eC9WGIdrzJM


PLOT:

The new government uses tax money to support the non working man.

The industry should shut down for a clean environment.
No energy production is needed. 100% unemployment is their goal.
With no factories and no workers, there would be no emission at all.
The world shall be a place of enslaved humans under total control by the society.

You must decide what to do...
The decisions you make will affect how the War begins and who will benefit from it.

Will you go back to change what have happened?

You change things in the Pre War time..
..they will affect the future....

Will you be able to stop the War.. ..or do war never change?
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