MAGIAVW'S PROFILE

author=Liberty
You're using the wrong tiles for cliff walls and ceilings. The tiles are paired on the canvas in MV. To give an example of how it should be done:

author=Marrend
In the Iron Chef's wok, he has prawns, scampy prawns, masatake mushrooms, sweet and sour sake, truffles, and... is that a piano!?

author=coelocanth
The fear and hunger screenshots look like they are using tiles, but with a parallax foreground layer for the fog.
There is definitely a plugin for foreground fog layer, I've seen it in lots of games.

They aren't using the default "RTP" tiles, not sure if they are unique to that game or come from elsewhere.
Another thing I'm possibly seeing is a "fog of war" where the map is covered in blackness and erased after you explored an area. It's a common mechanic but I haven't seen it elsewhere. Certainly something a plugin *could* do, but don't know if one exists already.

I'd actually suggest to pull back your scope, and concentrate on the things you are good at. If that's writing dialogue, you can make an interesting little game to show off your skills even using basic maps.

If you can draw a little, make custom sprites and character portraits. If you can't, use character generators.

ps: you don't need a game page to ask for feedback, you can put screenshots in forum posts or the discord