MASQUERADEJACKER'S PROFILE

author=InfectionFiles
Very nice!

author=Dragnfly
You succeeded. The very first thing I noticed were those windows.

author=Dragnfly
Hmmmm... The concept is good (I especially like the tree and windowpane shadows) but there're some issues with this one.

-The shadows on the kid's bed vs the shadows through the window next to her. Shadow surrounds the window, so it can be assumed that's where that window ends. Since you see the shadow of branches on the kid, it can be assumed that there's a window there too. But it's either closed and missing the shadow of it, or open which should have the space to the kid's right lit up more, based on how brightly the part below her is lit.

-The bookcase looks like it's pulled out from the wall. That may be intentional though.

-Some objects, like the round table, are blurred far more than objects which are further away from the viewer, like the rear banner or books.

-Something about the angle of everything feels weird. Like, objects aren't positioned consistently in space. I think they're called vanishing points or something.

Disclaimer, I'm no artist. Woooooooooooh boy am I ever not an artist. I took an hour and a half to draw the outline of a head the other day. So this is just stuff that looks "wrong" to me. My explanations of why they look right might be... wrong.