NEWPAPERRADSON'S PROFILE

I played it and I like the art a lot, specially the sprites and chipsets, they do seem very pen palz inspired (Also the tv I saw that),I don't like the music that much but just cuz it's not really my type of music, I think the game would of benefited from having more text because just playing it as it is the bigger theme's of the game don't show off that much, like maybe some in between sections where we see the ghost again would make it more clear, I get that the big themes is that all the character's have problems they have to deal with and Pup's is (probably) having someone who can support him (Cuz lonely), which I took as the reason your friends help you find parts of you, like if they're gone they take something out of you, and if you decide to do the bad ending, that hurting other's is inevitably going to catch up to you, I think that was pretty good but I feel like the bad ending could of got way more dark for that since some don't end up facing the consequences, last things I'll add is that the text is hard to read because of the system color choices, I would suggest making the pink darker, also the good ending is glitched, you can only get the bad ending for some reason despite saving all your friends, I got to the good ending by playing the game in rpgmaker2003.