NOISELESSCACTUS'S PROFILE

It may have bad graphics, but I still think it would be fun to play. You might not but I do.

In this game you are a normal everyday kid named Lucas, who is thrown into a storyline of tragedy, destruction, and, hopefully, triumph. On one fateful day, while in the woods with your friends, you are attacked by a troll. you work together to take it out and leave. Your mother learns about what happened and sends you into town to find a monster hunter. After running into a strange man, you return home to find that your friend had been kidnapped by goblins! you braves the goblin cave to find that your friend is being held captive by an ogre. After defeating it, you find a strange sword that you take to the strange man you had met earlier. He tells you of a great evil. . . and that it has returned!

This is my most recent copy. All comments will be appreciated.

Ok thanks for the input, but is there any thing wrong with grammar or spelling? That's what it got denied for. Also if it is good, just tell me.

So Trihan, do you have anything yet?

Thanks for those but the second on isn't sprite sheets and the first one I've already found those and used them. But they are 16-bit and my tile set was not, so my game got denied. Now, if you have a 16-bit tile set I could use those, but if you don't then I can't use them.