SIRBUNNYCAT'S PROFILE

author=shayoko
believable in fiction also applies to the rules you establish in your fictional world
if you break your own rules its bad writing
like with Naruto
they completely ditched the concept of limited chakra
and kakashi... well ya hes completely broken after the war.

logic does not only apply to real life but the logic of the story
if at the end of the game something was not explained or contradicts something else.
that is bad
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i seen all the silent hills so im good,i just hope the ending is not remotely similar to witchs house. the game was great for me until that which utterly ruined it.

author=shayoko
random thoughts

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the title is unexpectedly good for 1 first game!

ok cool intro but...weird we start off with a character and have 0 idea why she is....going on a journey i guess?

she entered the house w/o knocking!? how rude! did she think it was abandoned or something!?

i swear i WILL laugh mock and defame anyone who asks how to solve a puzzle!

wow that was fast can beat the game within 20 seconds if you know what to do XD!

well,i cant give a lot of thoughts on this because there is little to talk about honestly.

grammar
i will put grammar aside as i and any other adult should be able to under stand not only how difficult it is to learn/communicate in another language but to make a game in that language?
a lot of respect for SirBunnyCat.

so then the character
female is a huge plus. tho we don't get much personality as of now (its a demo : D)
she has some degree of common sense noting that doing something like going into a home in the middle of nowhere is probably not the best idea...
that aside she seems to take things fairly well

for the story. in game we get a hint of something that happened to someone (in case you did not read the top of the page)
and outside of that your character is alone traveling/wandering
for at this time. no explained reason
thus enters a house and as you'd guess the door locks it self (if im ever in a remotely similar situation and i need to go it im putting something inside the door so its impossible to close! :3

the mapping/atmosphere
for the little that's there id say pretty good.
my only concern mapping wise is the main hall.
i felt a mix of maybe a bit smaller/no random holes in the middle of the floor :3
and i felt a bit uncomfortable so it did its job considering the amount of content


Overall
At this time,i would be crazy to recommend this game to anyone
as its in early alpha phase to the point where the amount of rooms you can explore is 3 o.o
id highly suggest w8ting for a complete version.
which i personally will be looking forward to
as from what i have seen the creator does have potential to make something good+

author=nhubi
Well this is currently very short but you did tell everyone that so that's hardly a complaint. I think you've got the creepy/uncomfortable atmosphere pretty well, there is something unsettling almost from the beginning which is a good start, you just need to be able to sustain it as you add more content. However do have to say that the look of the house is wrong. It's too pristine, the garden isn't overgrown, there are no structural faults, no cracks in the walls etc. For a house that is out in the woods with no caretaker it's too clean, and does actually detract from the creepy vibe. You may want to give it a bit of wear and tear.

I look forward to seeing what come next.