ZEPHYRAE'S PROFILE

Thanks all for the feedback. I fixed up the maps, now that I'm thinking about it I included the following as screenshots for the gallery.


Neither of these are in game maps, but were included based on the original maps for the game to provide a world map of sorts, could these shots be why I got the bland and empty response?


EDIT: Fixed Links. Damn Photobucket.

I was sent here by a submission denial. I'm kind of confused as to how my maps are being considered bland and would appreciate some advice. I'm adding a few of the maps I have, from the most bland looking to the ones I've put considerable detail into. This game is a murder mystery game dealing with Ace Lite constraints, so many of the map details need to be strategically placed for maximum output.

Hall.1

I can see how this is considered bland. How can I update this without making it too busy, as the function of this map is more as a thoroughfare than an event room.

Hall.2

Same story here, meant as a connector.

Foyer

There are a few more ideas I'd like to add here, however they are heavily dependent on clue finalization.

Dining Room

This is the opening room in the game. Where would this stand on the empty-overbearing spectrum.

Kitchen


Ballroom

The detail in this room was adding after my initial submission.

Library


Thank you for looking at these images. I appreciate your advice.

You may want to check your Autorun opening. I'm starting out transparent.

No, remind me where we got that from.

I feel like the guy with the purple orb in one of the Mage's rooms should accept the bottle of wine I have as payment for that orb. But he won't.

Fifacv: the list of names is an item with Kabush, Kara, and Afrius's name, I believe you get it from Anemo's room. To talk to Anemo you'll need Nebur's confession. It's an item you find when you're in the Cult of Fire's room.

AngelAldredge: have you had any luck finding Eiresider's son. The note with the planets says her son knows of something, and the woman in the Observatory makes reference to the planets needing a sun to revolve around. I think her kid may be the key, but I can't find him.