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author=nhubi
I must admit that actually throws me a little, since the replicas/copies/duplicates what have you are just that, the originals are back on whatever homeworld Fragmentia copied them from, but if Fragementia is a dying world where is it getting the energy to create copies of huge chunks of other worlds? I could understand if it was stealing them, actually taking bits of other worlds including life forms in order to sustain itself, but the create a copy thing seems rather expensive energywise to me, and a little nonsensical in that regard.
well... if I explain now, it will become a spoiler...... the reason why that world was dying :|
spoiler
the cause is the native inhabitant of the world itself, so it's not a matter of the world energy
it's like an early stadium cancer, that you looks healty and full of energy
but, inside, the world dying slowly but sure
it's like an early stadium cancer, that you looks healty and full of energy
but, inside, the world dying slowly but sure
Let's work on your game descriptions!
author=TehGuy
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This is a story, a story about a dying world. Even on the verge of destruction, that dying world has a fierce will to survive. It duplicated many parts of another world, and made them part of its own. Land, air, sea, life -- the world received all of it onto itself. Although they are not part of the old world, the replicas did everything to keep on living. However, it was only a temporary measure; like trying to implant one's flesh onto another, the risk of rejection still exists.
This is a story about a world that's made up of many different parts of the other world "Fragmentia", a story about all life that's living inside it, trying to change the world's fate even though they are only reproductions with no memories of their true selves. They will try to save that world, the world in which they live.
Bippity boop, here's what I think.
but, replicas is the one who want to save the dying world...
Let's work on your game descriptions!
@marrend
i mean i will just giveup on english version and just released my game localy
because i can't find it.... where's the wrong part in my description....
i mean i will just giveup on english version and just released my game localy
because i can't find it.... where's the wrong part in my description....
It's a story ....A story about a dying world. Even that world in the verge of destruction, that dying world has a fierce will to survive. That World duplicating many part of another world, and that world take them as part of it's own. Land, air, sea, life ... it receives all of it into itself. Although they are not part of the world old self, that world did everything to keep on living.
But that's only a temporary measure. Like trying to implant one flesh onto another, the risk of rejection is bound to happen, That dying world already know. This is a story about a world that's made up of many different parts of the other world "Fragmentia". Story about all life that's living inside it .....trying to change the world fate, even though they are only reproductions with no memories of their true selves. They will try to save that world, the world in which they live.
Let's work on your game descriptions!
my submision was denied for a second time....
can someone help me fix my description ?
The Reason my submision was denied because "Description needs a little work."..... not very informative...
well, if my game was denied for a third time, i will just give up with english version, because i lack of grammar skill :(
can someone help me fix my description ?
The Reason my submision was denied because "Description needs a little work."..... not very informative...
It's a story ....A story about a dying world. Even that world in the verge of destruction, that dying world has a fierce will to survive. That World duplicating many part of another world, and that world take them as part of it's own. Land, air, sea, life ... it receives all of it into itself. Although they are not part of the world old self, that world did everything to keep on living.
But that's only a temporary measure. Like trying to implant one flesh onto another, the risk of rejection is bound to happen, That dying world already know. This is a story about a world that's made up of many different parts of the other world "Fragmentia". Story about all life that's living inside it .....trying to change the world fate, even though they are only reproductions with no memories of their true selves. They will try to save that world, the world in which they live.
well, if my game was denied for a third time, i will just give up with english version, because i lack of grammar skill :(
Let's work on your game descriptions!
hi, my post was denied because grammar issue (one of them)
can someone help me to fix my description ? my grammar is bad enough.....
The Game have demo build just recently
i will do my best to fix them myself
but at least i need some help if my resubmited submissions get rejected again
can someone help me to fix my description ? my grammar is bad enough.....
Title:World Fragment
Alternative Title: -
Codename: WF
Developer: Adi Kurnia,Richter_h,DrDhoom's,momofumi
Genre: Dungeon Crawler/RPG
(Planned) Playtime: Approx. ~1-2hrs
Synopsis
It's a story ....
Story about a dying world
Even that world in the verge of death, that dying world has a strong will to survive
That World duplicating many part of another world, and that world take them as part of it's own.
Land, air, sea, life ... it receives all of it into itself.
Although they are not part of the world old self, that world did everything to keep on living.
But that's only a temporary measure.....
Like trying to implant another flesh to replace it's own rotten flesh..... Rejection always bound to happen
That dying world already know
This is a story about a world that's made up of many different parts of the other world
"Fragmentia".... That's the dying world's name
And a story about all life that's living inside it .....trying to change the world fate
Even they're just a duplicate from their real self
Even they're don't have any past memories
They will try to save that world, the world in which they live
Features
-Character from many another series adapted to the game .
-Full Active Time Battle.
-Side view ATB system.
-VS Army Battle, Wave battle DUO with your selected partner.
-The game will Released separately (Indonesian language Ver and English Language Ver)
The Game have demo build just recently
i will do my best to fix them myself
but at least i need some help if my resubmited submissions get rejected again
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