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The people I would have to 'observe' would be in Sparta about 1000 years ago!

Hey can someone help me make a good storyline, well not a storyline but like fancy talk.
You probally don't know what I mean but like when a noobish game a npc talks with lots of errors and use internet language (lol, ttyl, noob, ect) and in good games like final fantasy they speak like a real person in a real situation and has like no spelling errors or rarley has any spelling errors. Here is a link to my game download (The data is not compressed) http://www.box.net/shared/emzb9rk4k8

Tell me in the comments below how I can improve and speak like the people in final fantasy.

P.S: I am really cheseey and have lots of errors beacuse i'm only 13!

how come the the first three letters are capitalized in the title?

I tried that but the website closed or somthing :'(

God why do people set up a game and have no demo! People can just make tons of game titles and get points and never actually make the game![