VENSTOR'S PROFILE

Really well written overall, I definitely felt the Game of Thrones influence with all the different warring kingdoms and factions with their own agendas. (Makes me wonder if there are any sympathetic characters in Hilgar or if they're the stock "evil empire" they appear to be at first)

We got a lot of backstory for Isabella in this chapter, it makes the other three main characters seem underdeveloped, but there are already some tantalizing hints of their backstories and I'm sure there's more to come.

I did have to laugh a bit at the leader of the Bandits. Let's just say his speech was very reminiscent of M. Bison's in the Street Fighter movie. Maybe tone down the villain monologues just a bit, we get that this guy is evil and needs to be killed.