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We were having fun at the irc and taunting Skie
Floor 14 scene
Great choice of colors! And great drawing.

But 3 commentaries:
- The neck is a bit thick
- The ambient lightning on the hair is OK but you should put it on the hat and the jacket too.
- The hat should be a little more pushed on the head.

Okay ok I'm fussy. xD
The only real gripe I have is that the right boob sticks out a little too much. Try making it a bit less shiny. Other than that, though, it's great. This one:
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is definitely my favourite so far.
Thank you all for the feedback!

I'm trying out something more serious, less happy and uh...Cyberpunk-ish style art
The neck is pretty large in comparison to the woman's frame.

The rest looks okay, though!
I noticed the neck too! I was like urrgghhh
Thank you though! Now I'm a bit sure XD
LouisCyphre
can't make a bad game if you don't finish any games
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That's better than mine :-\
Omg, your crazy

Looks good and well drawn.
Things boredom do...

Tall and thick neck again!

The hair is nice.
Here's a new attempt
Don't really like the nose but it's great. ^^
harmonic
It's like toothpicks against a tank
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Things boredom do...



Make the neck a bit thinner and this one is really good. I love cute elf chicks.
Dudesoft
always a dudesoft, never a soft dude.
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Ness, you're incredibly talented and know your way around the face. All I've seen here is mugshot after mugshot of smiling or complacent expressions. To comment on the aforementioned; the busts thus far are increasingly excellent. Your more recent 'realistic-ish' styles are especially appealing. Some reminded me of the soft curves of the Ivalice (Final Fantasy) style. or something entirely else in other cases.

Nonetheless, have you put much thought into some hand studies, or varied expressions? or structural drawings? I'd love to see this style amped up with a better three-dimensional understanding of the human form. It would really be something to see!
I have some here just never bother to upload them XD
Well I'll show them around once I feel they're worthy of upload I guess, and if I can manage to scan that oil painting properly
I would recommend against trying to scan an oil painting. You don't want to damage it.

You can probably take a nice picture of it with a decent digital camera, should you have one or know someone that does.
Ok noted :)
I'll see what I can do
Testing out some style, not yet done and I'm tired so I'll finish it a bit later