CREATION CUSTOM CRAFTS: CRAVING CRITICISM

The ones with the stalks look better IMO. They look more like flowers because they're smaller and have stems.

Are you going to have star people walking around on the cloud to??? You should cus it would be awesome!! I can see one on a little crescent moon boat going down a river. LOL

ok, if that slime is supposed to be totally obnoxious, then it is a success! If not, maybe prolong the branches of the glasses? The mouth looks a bit like it was pasted on the face?

They're cute, but I think the gloves don't have enough contrast, and the money bag, chef hat(?) and the pants are very flat (Maybe that's what you were going for, though).
The hot dog could use a little more contrast too. The ketchup is not a good idea, since it's color is very close to the sausage's.

The chest is very nice the way it is, but if you like to nitpick, you could improve the animation a little by observing RTP chests: the lid shouldn't jump two-three pixels up right after opening.

You are quite skilled at pixel art Creation! Your use of colour and shape on such a small scale is quite impressive. I agree with yuhikaru's comments, and I also think the money bag looks a bit flat too, especially compared to the square-shaped sprites you made. I suggest giving all of your sprites a uniform light source to help you define the details beyond the outlines themselves.

One way to make text stand out on a small scale is to use complimentary colours; try having the hp text in green and see if it stands out more.

Good luck, I'm looking forward to more.

I don't know, I thought it was cute before, too. It was like a medal or something. If you're comfortable making them flat and you did all of them that way it would look fine, imo.
They have certainly improved, but I don't have much more to say, since I'm not particularly good in pixel art. Have you read Despain's PA tutorials already? They're really good :O
One important thing, though, is that the boxing gloves, keys and TV head guy are the only sprites with a very dark outline, almost black. To keep the icons consistent, I think you should either give the others a darker outline too, or them a lighter one.

Also, why my username in japanese? xD (Just curious)

Already your sprites are looking much better Creation. Honestly, at present they look good enough for a professional game, but it is hard to get a feel on how well they fit with your game seeing them in isolation like this.

Would it be possible to see this in the context of a screenshot?

Oh man, I really like the look and feel of that. Font is perfect. The menu is especially great for some reason, and I love how obnoxious the green slime's face is. It seems like it would look better for the text bubbles to always go all the way around the facesets, but maybe you're already planning on doing that and it's just buggy right now. Is it possible to add to the menu, in small text under the left and right arrows, what pages are to the left and right of the current page? (Maybe only write it in Japanese!?)

The monster's back left leg not being visible is fine, it's behind the monster, it wouldn't make sense for it to be visible. The back right leg does look kinda weird.

I feel like custom sound effects would help a lot, and also I feel like the music is horrid and shrill and it's actually bad enough that if I couldn't turn off the sound I would not play the game. Maybe the sound quality of the recording is worse than the sound quality of the real game, and I'm not hearing it how it's supposed to sound?

I think "S" looks good and it has the advantage of making things quite clear! (changed your nickname and no avatar...?).

Or a book if you prefer.

Your sprites look great, but I notice that there doesn't seem to be a consistent light source for the sprites and the area. The sprites appear to be lit from the front and slightly from above, but the front of the cell is shaded. I suppose the light could be coming from directly overhead, but that doesn't quite match the sprites. This isn't a big deal, as lots (even most) old-school RPGs didn't really bother with lighting, but it is something you might want to keep in mind when adding shadows and whatnot.

The other thing, which is even more subjective, is the frontal nature of the sprites. Supposedly, in this kind of 3/4 view the characters should be viewed from a top-down angle rather than a more frontal angle. Now, I say supposedly because, again, the vast majority of sprite-based RPGs I have seen don't bother with exact perspective for the characters, either because of pixel limitations or for stylistic reasons. Even the RPG Maker RTPs don't bother with this, possibly because the SD sprite style has already thrown accurate proportions in perspective out the window. I only bring it up now because the ninja sprite is looking up, which actually gives me the impression of the camera looking at him from below, in fairly stark contrast to the level itself. Again, this isn't really a big deal, and a lot of games do things like this, but it is something you may want to consider. In the end, you can only be so accurate with small pixel sprites after all.

Your stuff is looking very nice and professional.