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Marrend
Guardian of the Description Thread
21806
Maybe I spoke too soon. Now that I really look at this, and maybe I'm comparing this character with Izumi's tachie too much, the space by the left side of the neck looks like there should be something there.

*Edit: I don't really think there's that many colors going on, here.
author=dewelar
If it were me, I would change the eye color (since I like the hair a lot), but I also know that's the hardest thing to change of the lot.

Edit: I'm not fond of that Dozen tachie either. I've never been a big fan of huge moe-type eyes.
It's very easy to change the color, but it does require some testing to see which color goes with the others well. Hmm... how about this?

The two things I dislike about that tachie is how her eyes look so radically different from the others, and they almost look drained of color.
author=Marrend
Maybe I spoke too soon. Now that I really look at this, and maybe I'm comparing this character with Izumi's tachie too much, the space by the left side of the neck looks like there should be something there.

*Edit: I don't really think there's that many colors going on, here.
You're right. For some reason, both of the other back braids have some hair in that space that makes it look more like an actual braid. But I dun wanna go through all the tachie and fix that right now. Especially since the hair color was obtained through lots of burning/saturating in Photoshop, and it might be hard to get the same color again. urgh

But it's gotta happen at some point, so..
author=Marrend
the space by the left side of the neck looks like there should be something there.


Hmmm...hadn't noticed that before, since I use a dark background on my browser, but yes, that does make her look a bit pencil-necked.

author=Marrend
*Edit: I don't really think there's that many colors going on, here.


*nods* That wasn't phrased well. It's the clash that bothered me more than the actual number of colors.

author=Mute
author=dewelar
If it were me, I would change the eye color (since I like the hair a lot), but I also know that's the hardest thing to change of the lot.
It's very easy to change the color, but it does require some testing to see which color goes with the others well. Hmm... how about this?


Much better. I don't personally care for red eyes, but they definitely suit the palette you've got going on more than that washed-out teal.
author=Mute
Is someone here? ...anyone? o

I'm kind of working on a custom character. Her profile is done, but for some reason, I can't get any story written. Maybe it's the lack of effort, or the lack of experience when it comes to social encounters, or just pure stupidity. But she has a lot of tachie! ...well, it's something isn't it? Have a look at her like tachie.


No, not you! Wait, I don't mean it like that! Ugh! and I guess I'm considering him.. but he won't know that.

Her name shall be kept secret for now. Umm, what's your opinion? Does she look huggable? Is the hair color weird? What about the headband and ribbons? You get the point - what do you think? /nervous


I don't have a problem with it, and she looks plenty huggable to me... Okay I do have one. Is it just me, or is there something off about the eyes?
EDIT: For some reason the post doubled.
It's been a very long time since I have been on here. I lost my net so I created this profile just to post this question once I get net back i want to post an updated version of yoko but before I can go further on her story I needed to ask marrend about masako's knowledge of Science i know she's very smart in the area but I also know that she tends to focus more on philosophical pursuits so my question is if yoko was explaining one of her theories would masako be more inclined just follow along the line of thought until yoko was finished or would she more likely turn it into a debate?
For some reason the techie reminds me too much of the weird anime about the girl who stood up in class and said don't approach me if you are normal
Yok- TRIAD! You lazy, hick bastard!:D Everyone stop, we're throwing a party!

Player:Arguing over who should pay
Miki:Arguing over who should pay
Keika: Confusing Ruri
Riho:Can't decide to side with or berate Player; fumbles in the process
Akari:Scared to death by Francesca
Hinami: Bugs player, no one pays attention
Chiemi:At the bar, fixated on Player, sighing absent-mindedly; pours own drink on Ryoko
Takuya: Partying. Like, normal goddamn people.
21: Drunk
Junko: Berating the former for letting Aoi take a sip
Aoi: Her sinister plans are in motion! Ha, no, she's just sad
Masako: By the wall, stands passively
Hiro: Same place, drooling
Ruri: Confusing Keika
Shoichi: NOT playing blackjack. Nope. Not at all. Spare some change?
Mayu: Feels awkward, shouts at everyone approaching
Shoko: Glad Hiro noticed Masako first
Izumi: Batman
Seira: Hitting security guard
Kyouki: Hitting on security guard
Joruri: Enjoys the show
Lambaria Yuu: In time trap
Eriko:See Shihoko, Junko and Kyouki. Yeah. All three. Multitasking is an important skill, kids. Also, it's one hot guard.
Midori, Rika, Kanon and Kana: Who?
Arika: Steals guard's purse
Yoshinori: Scams for share
Noriko: Can't decide who to slap
Tsubasa: Didn't come(What did you think?)
Francesca: Possessing security guard(nah, okay, I just wish)
Shihoko: managed to gather all these idiots
Yoko: Looking for test subject
Ryoko: Introduces test subject, cleans skirt in calm rage
Masashi:Being test subject. Resistance is futile.


Well, that was pointless! Overseer out.

author=Dozen
Yok- TRIAD! You lazy, hick bastard!:D Everyone stop, we're throwing a party!


:)

Noriko: Can't decide who to slap


Well, that's only because you had the good sense not to invite Iwao.
author=Noone42
For some reason the techie reminds me too much of the weird anime about the girl who stood up in class and said don't approach me if you are normal
... The Melancholy of Haruhi Suzumiya? You're right. A headband, ribbons and similar hair color... Well, maybe it's similar, but there won't be any copyright issues any time soon. Hmm...

Okay, so I put something in the space between her braid and neck. The hair I picked didn't have it there, for some reason. Also the eyes are now red. I don't plan to change any more.
Marrend
Guardian of the Description Thread
21806
author=Dozen
Shoko: Glad Hiro noticed Masako first


She would also have the sensation of not belonging. She recognizes this as she sees "all these people", and would want to leave right then and there. Ruri would insist on her staying, but when she notices that Ruri's being occupied by Keika...


author=Noone42, translated?
I needed to ask Marrend about Masako's knowledge of science. I know she's very smart, but I also know that she tends to focus more on philosophical pursuits. So, my question is, if Yoko was explaining one of her theories, would Masako be more inclined just follow along the line of thought until Yoko was finished, or would she more likely turn it into a debate?


As a broad category, I would imagine she would know enough to follow most scientific terms without such terms being explained to her. With Yoko, she would, at one point, make commentary about her "unacceptable methodology of experimentation". Or... something like that!
@marrend ok well her clean mode is done and I have split her nonclean mode into three .txt to make it easier to write and I have made a lot of progress next time I can get onlin I will try to post her clean mode and let the hilarity ensue.

@dozen I will also need a number for yoko tanaka how does 73 sound

@mute sorry I didn't mean to imply that was a bad thing was just making a comment
Marrend
Guardian of the Description Thread
21806
We don't have a number reserved for Yoko? I find this hard to believe.

*checks ID list*

She's not there!? I... didn't expect that. Well, Yoko's profile has her listed at #26. Hey, this was in my ID list notes! Er, anyway, that slot has been reserved for triad2, which we know to be Noone42. I say we just use that.

*uncomfortable in changing the ID list*
author=Marrend
*uncomfortable in changing the ID list*

Yeah, that's why I'm here.
author=Marrend
*uncomfortable in changing the ID list*


Aww. I didn't mean to make you feel that way. Honest. I'm sure you'll shake into the role eventually. :)
Marrend
Guardian of the Description Thread
21806
I'd like to clear up another discrepancy with what I have in my notes with what's available here.

ID 64 = (Reserved for dewelar)

I'm not sure if I should hide-tag this or not (hide-tag it is), but I have:

ID 64 = Hamaguchi Takako {dewelar, unpublished}


Is this a legit change? This is more directed to dewlar than to Dozen. Because, you know, it's his character.

*Edit: Why am I posting this on the artistic thread?
author=Marrend
I'd like to clear up another discrepancy with what I have in my notes with what's available here.

ID 64 = (Reserved for dewelar)


ID 64 = Hamaguchi Takako {dewelar, unpublished}

Is this a legit change? This is more directed to dewlar than to Dozen. Because, you know, it's his character.


I have no problems with this change. I just didn't feel right attaching the information, since right now Takako's file consists of two stories and a borrowed tachie set, and hasn't been touched in a couple months.
Quick update on YAK (Yes I'm sticking with that name). It will probably take way longer than what I said before. Mostly because I'm still writing the new intro scenes, and I realized that Konekos' hair is blonde while Yuki's is brown, and rather then cop-out by having it that she dyed it I decided to re-color it with GIMP 2 (Which is taking forever, I still haven't even finished one of her tachies.). So, yeah. Probably about next month instead of this month.
By the way. Any thoughts on this new characters I'm doing? Picture of the character
Marrend
Guardian of the Description Thread
21806
Is it just me, or do those glasses look too small on her?

*Edit: That's really the only thing that jumps out at me. Even then, I'm mostly sure Tsubasa uses a very similar combination of eyes/glasses. Which makes this observation seem, I dunno. Unimportant?