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An apology and some other stuff.

  • NewBlack
  • 08/31/2011 11:48 PM
  • 7619 views
Right, so I couldn't finish the whole story in time for the event. So the download available, as you'll see is Novella: Part One. I had to cut it off where I could. I'm sorry about that guys.

Second of all, if you don't get stuck the game is very short. I'm sorry about that too, it seems I spent too long on things that don't add gameplay time. That said it's more of an arty thing to be thought about and interpreted/deciphered than a game anyway. Hope you don't mind.

So, If you play this I'd LOVE to hear your interpretations of what things mean, how obvious or cryptic you find the symbolism and your general reactions. I really took this theme to heart and went with something "experimental".

Fingers-crossed that everything works properly!

Thanks. It's been a slog!

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Solitayre
Circumstance penalty for being the bard.
18257
09/01/2011 01:34 AM
Don't ever feel obligated to apologize for your work.

I mean, I guess you could if you thought it was really bad, but you don't seem to think that, so yeah.
NewBlack
doom
4592
09/01/2011 01:35 AM
author=Solitayre
Don't ever feel obligated to apologize for your work.

I mean, I guess you could if you thought it was really bad, but you don't seem to think that, so yeah.

I'm mainly bothered that I didn't finish the whole game as I have it planned out so the story is sorta incomplete. Like giving people half of a jigsaw. :<
rabitZ
amusing tassadar, your taste in companionship grows ever more inexplicable
1349
09/01/2011 01:45 AM
author=Solitayre
Don't ever feel obligated to apologize for your work.


Yes! It was a well thought out project. I don't think you need to apologize.
narcodis
heaviness
3564
09/01/2011 04:46 AM
I don't know or understand what this game is about, but it's a nice game! It's pretty, has lovely music and sound effects, and an interesting take on gameplay. And the length makes it a brief and crisp experience... like a refreshing glass of lemonade or something. Only except of tasting good, it tastes creepy/ominous. Reminds me of a bite-sized and compressed version of Myst or Riven or something.

In any case, I like this project. Whether or not you finish it is up to you, but I would definitely like to see more stuff like this from you... you know, the mysterious adventure-genre kind of game. I'd like to see one in a full-length type of scale, but that's just me. Nice work!
calunio
Shamed
10447
09/01/2011 12:12 PM
Is it still interpretable even if cut?
NewBlack
doom
4592
09/01/2011 12:13 PM
author=calunio
Is it still interpretable even if cut?


I reckon so but I made it, so who knows for sure?
chana
(Socrates would certainly not contadict me!)
1584
09/01/2011 04:32 PM
I started it, really like it, the atmosphere, the pace, alas i'm stuck on the piano mini- game, no clue... (tried "My Bonny"!)?
ZPE
1562
09/01/2011 04:59 PM
author=chana
I started it, really like it, the atmosphere, the pace, alas i'm stuck on the piano mini- game, no clue... (tried "My Bonny"!)?


Remember the ocean, all will be clear.
chana
(Socrates would certainly not contadict me!)
1584
09/01/2011 06:43 PM
I tried every thing....., man! I really don't see.
Anaryu
8848
09/01/2011 06:44 PM
author=chana
I tried every thing....., man! I really don't see.


You were one letter off at the end of your reply!
ZPE
1562
09/01/2011 06:46 PM
author=chana
I tried every thing....., man! I really don't see.

Focus on the word the train conductor emphasises on. Using 'Ocean' to decipher. If you still can't get it, read on.

Spoilers:
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OCEAN - C E A
chana
(Socrates would certainly not contadict me!)
1584
09/01/2011 06:52 PM
I see what you mean, but what to do with it??

Edit : Just saw your spoiler, never would have gotten it! anyways, thx!
chana
(Socrates would certainly not contadict me!)
1584
09/01/2011 07:49 PM
I'd say it's about acheiving love, learning how to love.

One more help : I got the four notes
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C2, A, etc.
, what does the first one mean ? I've played them, nothing happens ?
narcodis
heaviness
3564
09/01/2011 07:51 PM
C2 means the C that is higher on the piano
chana
(Socrates would certainly not contadict me!)
1584
09/01/2011 07:53 PM
I did play that, there are 4 of them right ?
ZPE
1562
09/01/2011 08:08 PM
author=chana
I did play that, there are 4 of them right ?


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C2 - Second C. Not the minor keys, the one right-most.
psy_wombats
13315
09/01/2011 08:08 PM
author=chana
I did play that, there are 4 of them right ?

I was stuck a bit on this at first. Go back to the institute and make sure you have the proper sharp markings for all the notes. I believe there are 2.
chana
(Socrates would certainly not contadict me!)
1584
09/01/2011 09:06 PM
Yes, right!
InfectionFiles
the world ends in whatever my makerscore currently is
4622
09/02/2011 01:12 AM
You did your best, and that's all you can do.
What you did make in the given time(and I'm sure some stuff you were working on that we won't see) are beautiful. :)

Downloading now!
NewBlack
doom
4592
09/02/2011 01:51 AM
I'm happy to see people playing this and finding it a little challenging :D haha.

I did try to make the game, above all, a an aesthetically pleasing experience so hopefully I've achieved at least that.

I'd love to hear more interpretations, people have come close but nobody's fully got it yet it seems.

(Also probably partially my fault due to the game not being finished!)



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