> The intro is way too abrupt.
> The game's dialogue is eh? You wicked? Should've added something like "You wicked-!" or "That bitch" probably would've been better.
> The footsteps SE is too much on the left side.
> This school's corridor is just way too wide.

> The narration over the girl's scream and after that was just terrible/jarring. I think this should've been just conveyed through the character's thoughts and actions at that time.

> "I'm safe now!" not I'm save now.

> I don't understand the door thing.
> The dialogue isn't making any sense.
> The rat jumpscare was loltastic than scary. You should get this school corridor much more designed and like I said before, tightened so you can add a lot more props that can do the scare thing much better.
> Why can I go back right at the entrance and not escape through there?
> The transition graphic is too slow and boring.

> The Stairway is just way too huge :/
The counting makes it even more unbelievable.

> The What is with that random title insert? It was just way too abrupt.
> I can't pick up sparkly thing.
> The writing of this game :x
> As someone who watched Another for 12323213x and Played Higurashi, using their OST isn't helping with your game ;~;
> This scary scene with that guy? Isn't that scary at all since right now none of it makes sense and the narration puts you at a dissonance between the theme.
> "why did he getting insane when he saw the girl" - you need a proofreader.

> The way taht wine bottle jumped was lol :x
> Chapter 3's beginning is already bombarded with Engrish.
> The way the artwork just pops in is BAD. Why not just make them the the chapter titles?
> The lightswitch sound effects sounds like a door knob.
> This slow walk speed when getting the knife is a bit eh.
> The whole lighting makes it hard to move and fight the dude.
> That was an abrupt kill.
> The guy's sideview animation has a jumpy hair.
> The mapping is so bare...
> How in the world did he just survive a gas explosion that managed to destroy the walls and throw him outside?
> The blood trail on the wall fucks up the perspective.
> The darkness outside is too much.
> Not sure what to feel about this random killing. It doesn't feel like a horror game when i'm doing stuff like these and having unrealistic game health.
> Wtf was that random bad end, that scene doesn't make sense at all.
> It's supposed to be a knife but a book fell instead? I mean I get its relations to the first 2 chapters but wut.

> The curse wasn't even dictated at the beginning, what IS it? <_<;
> He sounds like rummaging through a cabinet than a bookshelf.
> man everything is handheld with this game because of the lights
> Teleported at the wrong position once you're out of the library. He looks like he came from wall.
> A stack of paper falls off the painting. Way to state the obvious, Capt. Obvious XD
> Where in the world did he hide?
> so in short...everyone died because some dude went treasure hunting and their paranoia was their death? lol
> Sudden BGS.
> The way these flowers are aligned O_o
> The map doesn't make any sense positions wise.
> The text on the floor is eh..
> The big empty corridors makes exploration a chore especially with this walk speed.

> Another OST's omg.
> Using Another's OST AND THEN having all these deaths shows your influence waaay too much. NEW STUDENT IGNORED FOR SOME REASON AND ALL INCIDENTS START OH MY, OH I WONDER. FIRST DEATH A STUDENT FELL DOWN THE STAIRS. THIRD ONE DIED VIA SHARP OBJECT HE WAS HOLDING.
LOL XD
> The entire thing about the diary just doesn't make sense. I get that the transfer student caused all the deaths but it's like trying to be poetic for the sake of being poetic.

> Lol you'd think something scary happens but then the girl disappears and you leisurely grab the treasures :X
> this insanely slow walk speed is getting irritating :/
> Just use the fucking first aid there.
> Safe place is a place where a ghost first appeared and then opening for no reason???
> Tuan and Sang barely has differences and I can't tell which is which for a while.
> SO they're not illusions...but haunted ones.............What?
> You need a better bell sound effect for class change instead of something banging the wall or floor or something. That didn't made sense.
> Poor Tuan just got sparta'd
> Bad End, what. I wasn't aware I was solving a mystery.
> The pen just disappeared from my inventory.

> The reference about the horse and the girl is just a red herring??
> This one piece of paper was HARD to see because of what I said about the red lighting before. And the fact that paintings fall over the place as you proceed to the library makes you want to disregard them after a while as cheap jumpscares.
> I understand his story as something is HALLUCINATORY and that a new transfer student is involved and I know they killed the girl but they never stated exactly the reasons. Why did they kill the girl?
> The Curse's origins were never elaborated nor explained what EXACTLY the curse is. Unless you mean the girl who is haunting everyone is the curse which wouldn't make sense since she was killed first to STOP the curse?
> The Engrish makes it hard to understand what exactly is going on.
> Instead of countermeasures they're called "Secret Keepers"
> That was the most abrupt true ending I have ever seen, why wasn't the curse stopped there now that everyone's demise was brought to light? How is this different from Happy Ending aside from killing the dude with a pen? What is this thing about Salvation that he was talking about? :s