The cynic in me just jumped up, pointed at the screen and shouted "Look at me, I'm Final Fantasy!" And really, this is what this title screen reminds me of first. Close second is "Oh god, it's that title screen script where the text shakes when you move the cursor."
On a technical side, it sure looks nice, but as said, it reminds me too much of Final Fantasy to be recognizable as its own thing.
And if this really IS the title screen script I'm thinking of, please turn off the text shaking, particle effects and other bling bling effects. Especially if you do choose to keep this (or a similarly simple) design.