I dunno if this counts as "conversational style" or "grammar" but I think any of
"power-lifting skirt-chaser, like the other..."
"power-lifting skirt-chaser... like the other meatheads..."
"power-lifting skirt-chaser -- like the othe meatheads..."
would look better than the full stop while still giving a pause between ideas. Generally in dialogue I don't mind subordinate clauses hanging around but when your whole message box is short stocky sentences it sounds weird and forced. This is more a variety issue imo.
..........maybe i'm just a message box nerd though